Lily and Thunder are best friends. One day they get taken to the Rainbow Factory. How will they escape?

I was writing this on Minecraft but I used up all 50 pages so I'm re-Writing it on Wordpad but I decided to put what I've re-written on here. Oh, and ponies die.
Cover pic isn't mine

Also, Glaze is WoodenToaster's OC. You should know Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy are Hasbro's. Dr Atmosphere is Aurora Dawn's. Brony Dance Party is Brony Dance Party's Obviously. And Pinkamena is Hasbro's but this is like Cupcake Factory (which isn't mine).