Thunder and Jolt: Friends to the end [Remake]

by KillERRKAI

Rating: teen
Tags: Tragedy, Dark, Sad, Romance
Length: 1195

This is the more darker and sadder version of the story made by my friend called Super57s and his OC is Thunder mine is Jolt

[WARNING: THIS STORY HAS DISTUBING CONTENT INCLUDS OF, TORTURE AND KILLING. IF YOU DO NOT LIKE THESE STROYS TURN BACK NOW, FOR I DO NOT WANT DISLIKES OVER IF YOU LIKE GORE OR NOT, THANK YOU]

It has been years since the battle against Triek and Equestria, is once again peaceful. But a ordinary Pegasus, called Thunder gets pushed into an insane world of fighting after meeting Spike and becoming friends with him.

Before he knew it, the world was bowing to him and a dragon known as Jolt.

[SEX SCENES ARE ALSO TAKEN OUT, IF YOU WANT THE CLOP, GO TO THE ORGINAL ONE MADE BY Super57s]

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2015-07-30 22:57:51 UTC

Chapter 1: Friendship of Destruction 1/2

Thunder and Jolt: Friends to the end

Chapter 1: Friendship of Destruction 1/2

Time:8:55 AM

Date: 18/4/18

Place: Ponyville

A green pegasus was soundly sleeping in bed, but then his alarm went off, waking him up. He grabbed it with one hoof and accidently dropped it and broke it. He shrugged it off and snuggled back into his covers.

"Maybe a few more minutes won't hurt" He said before drifting back to sleep.

Time: 12:55 AM

Date: 18/4/18

Place: Ponyville

The pegasus slowly opened his eyes, awoken by his neighbours new-born baby crying. The Pegasus known as Thunder sighed and decided it was time to wake up, he got out of bed and had a shower. After his little shower he decided to grab something to eat for breakfast.

He walked towards the fridge and opened the door only to find a tub of butter in there.

"Is that really all I got?" He asked himself before shutting the fridge door and sighing. "Looks like I need to get more food"

He got his wallet out and headed towards the nearest store that was named 'PonyMart' he hated that name, in fact he hated the place, he hated the ponies that worked there and he hated this entire town. The only reason he is here is because he needed a good enough house that he could afford and it happened to be here and close to the store.

"Why did I bother moving?" He muttered under his breath.

The reason he hated every pony here was because of the height difference, he was only 6 ft. tall while the other ponies were 8 ft. tall, and he was always bullied over that fact. Especially on this end of the town. And even more especially in this shop.

He walked in the store, and random ponies started laughing at him, he hissed through his teeth.

"Hey look it's shorty!" Said the pony at the cash register laughing at him with a laugh that only a restarted drowning spastic could have.

"Hey look everypony shorty is getting mad, you better back of or he will use his midget powers on you!" Said another pony.

They could see he was clearly pissed normally he would let them do this, but now he was pissed beyond belief they could his veins in his head sticking out.

"SHUT THE FUCK UP!!!" Shouted Thunder making everypony quiet.

"Hahahaha! Shorty thinks his hard! Boy I'm the only real hard one here" Said the red pony at the counter.

"Yeah, this room is filled with stallions, no wonder your gay ass is hard" Said Thunder in a cold tone that forced everypony shut up. "Y'know, I was going to buy from here and get some food for breakfast, but I think I'm happy for now"

The ponies just watched him in awe and shock as he walked out the shop.

"So....uhh....next customer please" Said the pony at the counter.

Meanwhile with Thunder he felt amazing he finally stood up to that bastard and put him in his place...

He kept walking, not paying attention to anything and crashed into another pony.

"Hey! Watch it!" Came a raspy voice.

"I shouldn't watch it, you're the one bumping into me!" Retorted Thunder, clearly pissed. "Seriously, you are the dumbest pony I've ever met!"

"I'm not a pony, I'm a dragon, dumbass!" Came the voices response.

"Wait what?!" Asked Thunder in shock before standing up, he looked at the dragon and realised that he was the same size.

'Holy shit....someone at the same size as me' Thought Thunder in shock.

Thunder offered a hoof to help the dragon up which the dragon accepted.

"Sorry for what I said, I've just happened to be very pissed off" Said Thunder.

"No problem, Twilight gets pissed off sometimes as well" Said Spike.

"Aren't you a little young to be saying that?" Asked Thunder.

"Well aren't you too young to be saying that as well?" Asked Spike.

"No, I'm an adult" Said Thunder.

"Really? Cool! I've just became 18 and we both are at the same height! That's so cool!" Said Spike.

"So, where you off to?" Asked Thunder.

"PonyMart, I need to get some things for Twilight" Said Spike.

"I'll tag along" Said Thunder after hesitating to go back there.

"Really?"  Asked Spike.

"Yeah why not?" Asked Thunder.

"Cool! You and me are going to get along great!" Said Spike.

"Yep" Said Thunder chuckling.

Once they got there....

Time:12:34 AM

Date:18/4/18

Place: Ponyville

"So that's basically what I do" Said Spike after explaining his and the life of his friends to Thunder during the time they was walking to the shop.

"Huh...that's a strange life" Said Thunder. "But not as strange as mine"

"What do you mean?" Asked Spike.

"I'll tell you once you've gotten what you need" Said Thunder leaning against the wall, next to the door.

"Aren't you coming in?" Asked Spike.

"No, not unless I have to" Said Thunder.

Spike tilted his head in confusion, but then just shrugged it off and walked into the shop.

"Hey look it's shorty 1.2" Said the man at the counter.

Spike started clenching his fists and growled as went to get what he needed.

The retarded bastard was so loud that Thunder could hear him.

"What's the matter shorty?" Asked the man again laughing at Spike.

"You're just like the other shorty, all size, no bite" Said the man laughing at spike harder.

"Oh yeah, you want to stress test that?!" Asked Thunder after kicking down the door.

"Um...no...I uh...you see I was just joking...I didn't mean...ummm!" The pony was confused what to say at Thunder as he felt his intimidating glare melting through his skull.

"I dare you to say that again" Said Thunder with his tone filled with coldness.

"I got the stuff!" Said Spike.

"Now get out!!!" Ordered the pony.

"C'mon, let's go" Said Thunder.

"Ok Thunder" Said Spike."Thank you sir" Said Spike as he put bits on the pony's table before leaving with Thunder.

"That was so awesome! You was like, you want some of this, and he was shitting himself and...and IT WAS AWESOME!!" Shouted Spike happily.

"If you say so" Said Thunder.

"Hey you told me you was going to tell me about your life and friends" Said Spike.

"First off, I will tell you another time and second, I have no friends" Said Thunder.

"You're wrong.....you got me" Said Spike.

"Y'know, you're alright man" Said Thunder making a smile, an action that he hasn't done in the past ten years.

"Let's go hang out!" Said Spike. "I'll these to Twilight then, I'll introduce you to the CMC and we can go and pull pranks"

"Pranks? I haven't done that in a long time....but I'll try it again" Said Thunder smiling.

Meanwhile in a dark lab...

An orange pony with a purple mane chuckled.

He soon started pressing buttons and made different images come up on the monitors.

"Well, well, these two are quite the interesting duo, I wonder, if they have any dark sides within their little brains" Said the pony before laughing like a maniac.