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I Will Never Love You

by eLLen
"You" profess your love for the most beautiful mare you've ever known, but in the game of love, not everything ends happily ever after. A commentary of sorts on second-person stories.

"You" profess your love for the most beautiful mare you've ever known, but in the game of love, not everything ends happily ever after.


I suppose I should give some explanation for this story...
It's not meant to be taken too seriously. I would describe it as a parody of happy-go-lucky second person fics but with a serious tone. I never expected this story to end up as heavy as it is, and I think that will cause people to miss the purpose of this story.
In short, it's a response to second person fics rather than one in itself. When I say "response," I don't mean I'm mocking them. I'm commenting on the typical scenario most have.

Everyone
Complete
Romance
Human
Sad
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Second Person
 
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2363 words: Estimated 12 minutes to read

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