Polishing a diamond

by Neon the Baby Pegasus

Rating: teen
Tags: Adagio Dazzle, Tragedy, Random, Princess Celestia, Slice of Life, Alternate Universe, Sad, Princess Luna, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 2357

Adaigo agrees to undergo a deal that could save her from poverty and joins Princess Luna, the one thing she didn't count on was being made into Luna's foal

After the events of The finals of the "Battle of the bands." The Dazzlings are at an impasse and split up, soon Adagio finds herself on the brink of homelessness, when she's visited by Princess Luna who offers her a second chance at life. However there's a catch in order to stay in Equestria she must reform and start from the beginning.

(This is a non Regression diaper story, and another RP to try and get me out of my writing rut this one was done by me and LuckyBass13 as a cute story and to try and improve my skills, thanks man ^^ sad and tragedy tags only apply to the Prologue, cover pic belongs to him from his dA and obviously is used with permission.)

Published 2015-08-02 21:50:02 UTC
Last updated 2015-08-02 21:50:02 UTC

Prolouge- Offer of a new life.

Polishing a diamond
Prologue
Offer of a new life.

Adagio Dazzle walked down the road holding a sign asking for any kind of help in one hand, a bag of cans in the other, her Purple sweater was torn and stained and her hair hung limp from a week of not being washed, she made her way into the parking lot of the Apartment she staying in and began the long climb up the cold iron stairs. Soon she reach her apartment, but as she went to reach into her pocket for her keys she noticed a memo on her door, it was in plain white stationary and attached to the door by tape.

Attention tenant,

your payment is a week overdue any further delinquency on your part will result in eviction from the premise.

Canterlot city apartments.

She looked down at her shoes as she began to cry.

"As if things could get any worse... I'm on skid row, those loser sisters of my drive me nuts and now I might be homeless.” She unlocks the door and slams it behind her throwing the cans down in front of it, walking to the fridge through her kitchen. The remnants of her last meal a week ago still sat there a reminder to the hungry young woman that she had no food, she took a deep breath holding her stomach as it ached in hunger and she snapped.

“I hate this!” She shrieked throwing her chair across the room breaking it into kindling. “Why, Why does nothing go my way!” She broke down in sobs collapsing to the floor, looking toward the ceiling as if praying to a deity.“I just wish for once, the things I plan could go the way I want them to.” The young girl began to beat the floor, her knuckles soon aching as she made no headway against the cement floor barely padded by stained threadbare carpet, soon exhausting her strength she looked toward her bedroom, sensing something strange.

“Equestrian magic....?” She choked staring at the ever brightening light until the door opened blinding her a figure walking through the light and towards her, and once the light faded she seen it was someone she recognized.

“Hello Adagio.” Said the person

“Vice-Principal Luna?” She Asked confused as to why the Vice-Principal of Canterlot high would been doing appearing through what seemed to be a portal to another world.

“Is that what I’m called here?” Luna giggled in an amused tone as she tried to get used to walking on two legs, and Adagio stood up looking confused.

“I am confused?” Said Adagio looking at the indigo skinned woman who simply smiled.

“I am Princess Luna... Princess of the night and guardian of the realm of dreams.” Luna explained through quickly became shocked as Adagio's face turned red and showed pure anger.

“You’re like Princess Twilight Sparkle, a pony from Equestria, This is all her fault!” She screamed as she started towards Luna, her hands balled into fists.

Luna smiles and continues “is it? or perhaps the mistakes you made in the past has made others to judge you by your actions....” She spoke slowly and calmly looking the enraged woman straight in the eyes who looked down, disarmed by the sudden deep question, and she began thinking on it, soon answering.

“I.... I don’t know.” She looked confused and conflicted as Luna reached over and touched her face softly, she smiled and waved her hand causing the door to open and the light to return.

“Now... Adagio.... the door to light has opened... and now you are judged... You have a decision to make.. If you believe you've lost everything and want nothing more then I shall leave, but if you have still a ounce of passion to see there's a bright side then say."I have accepted myself and be at your mercy, Princess Luna." then we shall move on..... the choice must be made here and now.” Luna explained watching as Adagio stared at her in wonder.

This... this is nuts, but what do I have to lose, My sisters and I don't see eye to eye and if things don’t change soon.... I’m sure to starve to death, if I’m not driven to end the pain first. However if I take this offer and go with her, I’ll live and maybe even have a chance to make Equestria mine and mine alone. “I have accepted myself and be at your mercy Princess Luna.” She says bowing before Luna, Luna stands back from the door nodding.

“Then enter the light Adagio, and into your new Life.” Luna Smiles as she and Adagio exit the human world through the portal

Prologue end
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Week one-Day one, a new start

Polishing a diamond

chapter 1

Week one- Day one, A new start.

Soon as Adagio entered the portal she felt as if she was spinning, soon the spinning stopped though and she tripped and fell into what felt like a plush carpet. Her stomach felt as if it been left behind and she felt extremely strange as if she had no control over her body. She soon opened her eyes looking into a mirror, but what started her back was not a twenty something year old women, but a full grown Unicorn mare “I’m back in Equestria.” She said trying but failing to get up, she just couldn’t get her limbs to work it was as if she were a foal, it was at this point that Luna stepped through the portal.

“Yes since you were a human with none of your siren powers when you entered the portal, you have returned to Equestria as a Unicorn.” She explained picking Adagio up in her aura and beginning to walk with her.

“So I’m not a siren any longer?” Adagio repeated trying to understand how she hadn’t returned to Equestria in her most glorious form.

“No, you are now a full blooded unicorn... but your body won't work a bit as you're not used to your new body.... and so that is my cue.” And soon they reached what Adagio soon realized as an adult sized Nursery.

“What are you doing to me?” Adagio begins to question as Luna began to get changing supplies out.

“Today you are in your first step to a rehabilitation. To your "New" start.” She continued soon pulling out a cute white diaper with pink hearts on it, and unfolding it under Adagio’s flank.

“A nursery, so when you say new start, you literally mean." Adagio figured before Luna cut her off

“That's right.... You will start your days of old time.. From the start, week 1 is Age 0” At this Adagio begins to blush, as Luna put foal powder on her diaper area, and taping the diaper on.

“But... I’m toilet trained.” She started before Luna cut her off a second time.

“ I think from the start you'll learn from right and wrong.” Said Luna picking her back up with her magic as Adagio began to kick her back hooves getting used to the thickness of the puffy garment.

“Do I have to talk like a foal?” She asked hesitantly, afraid of losing what little of her voice talent she had left, and Luna shakes her head no.

“I will not do anything to mess with your speech abilities, it’s up to you to decide how foal like you shall act as you get more comfortable in your role.” Luna explained walking her through the nursery.

"I understand, well singing was my passion, I can't sing any longer, but as long as I can still talk my voice is my treasure." Adagio rubs her throat as Luna smiles.

“Listen, if you can do good and get to week seven, I’ll give you a special present.” Luna smiles and Adagio smiles her thoughts instantly floating towards thinking it was something that would help her conquer Equestria.

“A gift, alright I’ll do my best, Princess Luna.” She smiles cutely trying to win Luna over.

“Awww how cute, now adagy now since your body is still a bit... new I'll care for you 24/7 until you can at least crawl. Now are you thirsty?” Luna asked pulling out a bottle of warm milk and showing it to her, instantly Adagio’s stomach growls and Luna giggles. “Guess I got my answer.” She smiles and sits down in a rocking chair, placing the amber nipple in her young girl’s mouth who begins to suckle, and soon finds herself relaxing and becoming soothed.

“If you are wondering if this is going to be allowed I got a deal from my sister to do this, so feel lucky I picked you.” “Said Luna beginning to pet Adagio’s mane who sat up looking confused.

“What did you choose me and not Aria or Sonata?” She asked laying back down and snuggling into Luna’s coat.

“Aria and Sonata are doing alright right now, but I fear they'll soon encounter the same problem... Perhaps in the right time they too can give this a shot.” Luna explained smiling as she felt the unicorn snuggling her.

"I hope so, they may be idiots, but deep down I guess... I do care for them, their my flesh and blood after all." Adagio sighs finishing the bottle.

“Indeed, I’m glad to hear you don’t wish Ill on your sisters.” Luna raised Adagio over her shoulder and began to burp her, soon getting her desired effect as Adagio burped and blushed.

“Excuse me, Princess.” She said and Luna smiled at her

“It’s okay sweetie... perhaps, if you were to send a message to them about a once in a lifetime chance to be new... I think we'll see what they would want.” She said rocking Adagio.

"Perhaps, but for now I think I'll enjoy this for myself." She closes her eyes, truly feeling like she's starting to enjoy being a foal, and soon Luna picks her up.

“Now.... you must be tired and want to rest so I'll leave you in a crib that is sized for you” She carries Adagio to the crib and gently lies her down, pulling up the covers while her head is laying on the pillow. “Now, rest up.Tomorrow we'll try some more stuff.”

“Princess Luna?” Adagio smiled as Luna was about to leave.

“Yes Sweetie?” She replied coming back and standing over her.

“Can you read me a story?” She asks smiling, and Luna nods.

“Sure.” She goes to the bookcase and gets a book of foal stories out “Hmm do you want. "The Dream Warrior", "The Celestial Sisters", or "Rise of the Twilight"?” She asks looking through the stories the book had.

“The Celestial Sisters.” Adagio smiled and Luna began to read.

“Once a upon a time, in the land of Equestria, there lived two newly born ponies who were prophesied to be the princesses of Equestria. The White with pink mane was named Celestia, and the Blue with light blue mane was named Luna and started to be known as the Celestial sisters.” Began Luna before Adagio smiles and pointed at her.”

“It’s about you is’nt it.” She smiled and put her hoof in her mouth sucking on it cutely making Luna smile.

“Do you want a Pacifier Sweetheart?” Luna asked floating one over with the same pattern as her diapers on it.

“Please.” Adagio smiled as Luna put it in her mouth, and began to read again, soon Adagio tired from the stress and poor nutrition of her old life began to drift away into slumber.

“Goodnight, my little pony.” Smiled Luna as she blew out the candle and closed the door.

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Princess Celestia raised the sun that morning, and smiled as she found the study door left slightly open and walked inside to find the nursery and in the crib Adagio.

“She must of decided who she wanted to give a second chance to and judging by how she looks I’d said she deserves it.” Celestia then summoned a basin of warm water and a sponge and began sponging the dirt from Adagio’s face, who began to stir, hearing the diaper crinkle as she clumsily stretched and begins to wake from her sleep.

“I guess it wasn’t just a dream.” She questioned as she looked up feeling the sponge bath. “Princess Celestia!” She shouted in surprise.

“No need to shout my little pony.” Celestia smiled warming, dipping the sponge back in the basin.

“I’m sorry.” Adagio said blushing as she felt special to be receiving such tender care from the Princess of the sun.

“So, Luna picked you and choose this idea to rehabilitate others. Very interesting.” Celestia smiled as she returned to wiping the grime away from Adagio’s coat.

"I think so too, but I guess it's not so bad." Adagio smiled as she sat up in the crib to give Celestia easier access to her body. Celestia then smiles and looks her in the face.

“So no desire to conquer Equestria.” She asked seriously at which Adagio looks away, but soon gathers her bearings.

"No, since I've gotten here I've enjoyed being able to relax, I don't want to let Princess Luna down.” She smiles as Celestia begins on her mane.

“Well, do know I won’t hesitate to protect my lands if you should try to harm anypony, but Luna will come soon. in the meantime i wish you luck, and hope luna's idea would help make this more of a permanent basis.” She. gets up and leaves “Oh... and by the way... you look adorable.. even in a wet diaper.” She smirks and walks away having dried and styled Adagio’s mane through magic, and once she was gone Luna came in..

“Did you sleep well honey?” Smiled Luna

“Yeah, It was the best night sleep I ever had.” Adagio smiles and blushes when Luna puts her hoof on her diaper and pushed to see if it was wet, which she was.

“Aww who needs a diaper change?” Luna asked giggling

“Me.” Smiled Adagio smiling

End Chapter 1

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