
Wonderful Mechanical: Keen Eye and the Wonderbolt Saboteur.
This story takes place in Calm Wind's Wonderverse, between Act 2 and Act 3 of Piercing the Heavens, though hopefully it's understandable on its own.
"The impossible happened... Rivet started making mistakes.”
“Doesn’t everypony make mistakes?”
"Even if ‘everypony makes mistakes’ was a legitimate excuse, most ponies mistakes don’t almost injure ponies, and definitely don’t almost kill ponies.”
Rivet is, before anything else, a genius. A master of machines and the lead engineer for the Wonderbolts, he's the first pony you go to for all problems mechanical, from inventing new training equipment to rapid repairs. It isn't much exaggeration to say he's one of the rivets holding their base together.
They leaned on him so much, it seemed only natural that he start to buckle under pressure. The machines he designed to get the Wonderbolt recruits up to speed have started to malfunction, and ponies have narrowly avoided getting hurt. Now he's under probation, forced to take a break from his work.
No one is listening to what he's saying.
No one is seeing that a saboteur is on the loose.
With both his job and the well being of the Wonderbolts on the line, he calls the only person he can rely on to solve the case. He calls his old friend and rival, ex-detective Keen Eye.





21 Chapters:
- What’s the most important part of a pegasus? 2015-08-02 22:27:24 UTC1158
- The so-called friendship of Keen Eye and Rivet 2015-08-02 22:34:40 UTC958
- Spitfire's Blue Fire 2015-08-02 22:39:36 UTC1759
- Zeroes and Hurricane Fleetfoot. 2015-08-02 22:46:02 UTC1770
- The Warm Embrace of Friendship 2015-08-03 17:48:44 UTC1170
- You're Supposed to Doubt Your Friends 2015-08-05 20:29:11 UTC3477
- Impossible Crime is the Best Kind 2015-08-07 21:32:28 UTC2980
- Charlie Vs. Foxtrot Part 1: Crashin vs. Matteo 2015-08-09 22:47:51 UTC2541
- Charlie Vs. Foxtrot Part 2: Tradewind Vs. Little Star 2015-08-11 18:35:50 UTC
- Charlie Vs. Foxtrot Part 3: Zugzwang Vs. Twister 2015-08-12 23:36:52 UTC1745
- Charlie Vs. Foxtrot Part 4: Runner Vs. Dash 2015-08-12 23:37:05 UTC2192
- The Failure Squad 2015-08-18 22:19:33 UTC1886
- Charlie Vs. Foxtrot Part Final: Vivi Vs Squall 2015-08-22 16:40:17 UTC1748
- Cloudy Investigation 2015-09-06 17:30:26 UTC2466
- The Anatomy of a Lie 2015-10-03 17:18:44 UTC3010
- The Bystander Effect 2015-10-29 21:24:05 UTC2780
- Gossip and Results 2016-03-13 19:03:39 UTC3459
- Is he doing this on purpose? 2016-04-09 22:54:30 UTC2044
- Rivet's Beginner Level Locked Room 2016-05-15 00:44:14 UTC958
- Did that mystery really need solving? 2016-05-27 20:58:28 UTC1804
- Bargaining and Reasoning 2016-06-16 21:40:57 UTC2135