Surprise Showdown!

by MangoDolphin

Rating: everyone
Tags: Comedy, Random, Slice of Life
Length: 1016

Surprise and Pinkie Pie are very alike. When they meet, will it be a showdown or a disaster?

Surprise and Pinkie Pie are very alike. Surprise shoots parties at will. Pinkie Pie shoots happiness at will. Surprise loves surprising others with parties. Pinkie Pie likes surprising ponies and parties. Face it. They are perfect for each other. But when they meet, will it be a showdown or a disaster? (for other ponies, that is.)

Main Characters: Pinkie Pie, Surprise, The Cakes, and the Baby Cakes!

Credit to MYSTERYxGIRL on Deviantart for the picture.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-05-26 10:24:01 UTC

Welcome to-SURPRISE!

  Surprise was way too bored in this odd world. It was all white with a few sketches. Some were colored in, some weren't even sketches- they were failed drawing or successes of drawing from whom she didn't know- Lauren Faust. Suddenly, POP! Surprise had an idea. The yellow maned, white coated, and purple eyed pony could break through the "Fourth Wall", as she heard. She heard that the "Fourth Wall" was an imaginary wall that kept her from other things.

Now how do I break it? Hmm..... thought Surprise. Another idea came into her head. "I'VE GOT IT!" Surprise shouted out loud. She flew quickly in a circle until she was a yellow and white blur spinning in a circle. She shut her wings and tucked her hooves onto her body tightly, but she still was flying. Oddly, she still was a yellow and white blur spinning in a circle. Posie came near the now yellow and white blur spinning in a circle and said, "Ummm.... Surprise? What are you doing?" Surprise decided not to come to a stop, instead sounding to blurt out: "I-I-I AM-AM-AM T-TR-TRY-TRY-TRY-ING-ING-ING TO-O-O BREAK-EAK-EAK THE-E-E FOUR-OUR-OURTH WA-A-ALL!"

  Surprise finally came to a halt and said joyfully to a now panicked Posie, "I'll see you soon!" Surprise skipped into what appeared to be a portal into a completely 'drawn' village. Twilight came into the point of view. "Posie, wheres Surprise?" she asked. The only thing Posie gave her was fear and shivering.

  Surprise wandered the dirt roads. There were ponies she either saw as sketches, saw in the "sketch" world, or never seen at all. She suddenly remembered that there was a Sugarcube Corner, and started to speed there. As she flew, ponies had mistaken her as Pinkie Pie, until they noticed she was flying, and it was a yellow and white blur. She arrived at Sugarcube Corner, and burst in the door with an excited face. "CAN I HAVE A CHIMI-CHERRYCHANGA?

  "Uhh... Pinkie?" the Cakes murmured. "Who's Pinkie? I'm SURPRISE!!!" Surprise blurted out excitedly. Surprise then sneezed confetti. Pinkie slowly rose from behind the counter. The Cakes had a confused-scared face. They felt she was just like Pinkie Pie, but worse because she was a hyper-active pegasus, not an earth pony. "Whoooooooooooooooooooooooooooo?" said Pinkie Pie. Oooooooh no... the Cakes thought. They felt as if their hearts were going to pump quickly, and explode of surprise. "I'm..........." Surprise suddenly appeared behind Pinkie Pie and dragged her head to face hers, and yelled in her face: "SUUUUUUUURRRRRRPRIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIISSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!" Pinkie Pie was shocked by this but was just filled with more excitement and a bit of confusion. "Woah! Woah! Woah! Please stop surprising me! Can you please give me your name please?" shouted Pinkie. "Surprise is my name!" said Surprise. "Oooooooooooooh! My name is Pinkamina Diane Pie! But I like Pinkie Pie better!" said Pinkie in response. The two hoof-bumped. The Cakes knew this would end badly.

  Surprise was seated along with Pinkie Pie in her room with a list of things that they thought had in common. Pinkie had started asking her things in about 5 words or fewer. "Talent in Partying?" "Check" the excited Surprise said. She couldn't wait to throw a party for her new friends, Pinkie Pie, and apparently whose names are The Cakes, told from Pinkie Pie herself. She was jumping up and down in her seat. They had been doing this for two hours and still was happy with Pinkie, but yet agitated in her seat to throw the surprise party. The two continued asking questions, along with Gummy attaching himself to Surprises' mane. "And one last thing......" Pinkie finally said from now 4 hours of asking questions, "Having-the-desperate-need-to-throw-a-party-to-someone-new-but-you-have-to-wait-because-it's-a-surprise-but-it-takes-forever-so-you-have-to-get-a-bit-more-surprised-the-new-pony-has-to-wait-a-tiny-bit-more-because-she's-about-to-enter?!? Woah, that was long!" Surprise gasped a lot of air in and yelled, "YEEEEEEEES!!!OH-MY-GOSH!WE-HAVE-SO-MUCH-IN-COMMON!" "I KNOW!!!!" yelled Pinkie with a highly violent, yet excited scream. I(Mango Dolphin) could hear them from the very room I was writing this story! It was clear to me as Sapphire Shores singing a smooth lullaby (which is very clear)!

  The Cakes (Including Pumpkin Cake and Pound Cake) had no idea why she had yelled so loud. "I think my ear drums just shattered..." Mrs.Cake complained with a mix of being scared. "I'm lucky I found earplugs for us in time..." said Mr.Cake/Carrot Cake. He then looked at the ground embarrassingly. "...But I forgot to give them to you..." "Whaaaaaaaaaaaaat?" Mr.Cake thought it would be useless to try to reason to her until later. Pumpkin Cake started tugging at Pound Cakes mane and pointed at the two frazzle-maned ponies skipping down to the floor. 'Luckily' for the Cakes, they saw the two as well.

  "Hello Mr and Mrs Cake! Hi Pumpkin and Pound Cake!" said Surprise, skipping past them outside. "Hello Mr and Mrs Cake! Hi Pumpkin and Pound Cake!" repeated Pinkie, also skipping past them. "I am going off to get supplies for something. Pinkie is going off to see who I believe is named 'Flutchersky'!" said Surprise. Pinkie looked at her with a silly face and replied, "No, silly, her name is Fluttershy! I need to get my cook book back because she was making treats for her woodland creatures!" Mrs.Cake started rubbing her head and ears. "What was that, dearie?" Luckily for her, Mr.Cake wrote the exact conversation in script for Mrs.Cake to understand everything. "Oh. Then, go along, then!" said Mrs.Cake. "Oh yeah! Also, could you get my mail for me, Mr. and Mrs. Cake? I'm booked for Re-spon-si-bili-tee, my middle name, for helping Spike to clean Twilight's library. "Sure, sure, Pinkie and Surprise, just go do your responsibilities. We will get your mail, Pinkie. Come on, Pumpkin and Pound Cake!" said Mr.Cake, rushing the babies on his back, and delivering the message to his beloved wife. "Oh, yes, go go go, you two! Hah hah..." said Mrs.Cake when she finished reading the side note. Even though it seemed a bit normal, Mr. Cake was now and finally assured that this day was going to end badly, even to a single trip to get Pinkies mail.