1 - Usurper [Tags - Slice of Life, Sad] (Character - Celestia, Twilight); Rating - T
Please read the disclaimer in the author notes below before reading; it explains my reasoning behind writing this and I didn't want put it in the description. It will appear on every "chapter"/short story from here on. Also, come back to the author note and read the "Dream Explanation" after reading. Other than that, please enjoy!
"I'll take it from here, sis," Luna said, tapping her sister on the shoulder. Celestia yawned and smiled at her sister, her eyes drooping. I had been a long day. It had started off simply enough, but by noon, Twilight had contacted her and informed her of a issue that had arisen in the heart of Canterlot. It had been resolved only an hour beforehand, and Twilight had been visiting since then. She often found it hard to see how much Twilight had grown. As much as she hated to admit it, she had had her doubts about her faithful student a couple of times. But each time she saw her student, sporting wings, it gave her a tremendous sense of pride.
"Thank you, Luna. Is everything prepared for tomorrow?" she asked, referring to the preparations for Discord's (supposed) birthday. As big as the differences were between her and Discord, she couldn't help but like the controlled chaos he caused. A thousand years of order was incredibly taxing, and she'd come to like Discord's antics, even though it had once or twice caused wide-spread panic in Canterlot. Especially the issue a couple weeks prior in which he switched the gender of every pony in Canterlot for a day. Luckily, she herself was spared, as she had been away visiting an old friend in Manehatten. Luna, however, was less than pleased. Apparently, as a male, she had a beard not unlike that of Starswirl.
"Honestly, I don't see why you've warmed to him, sister. I understand that he is of use to us, but how long until he goes against us again? Need I remind you when Tirek-"
"I know, Luna," Celestia interrupted. "Trust me; I'm not blind to the danger he poses. But he's essentially shackled by the friendship he shares with Twilight's friend, Fluttershy. Besides, my dear sister, I think he fancies you,” Celestia joked, her mouth forming a sly smile.
“W-what?! Surely you jest, sister!” she quickly replied, her face immediately turning a burning crimson. Celestia laughed and stuck her tongue out as she walked away.
“Goodnight, Luna,” Celestia cooed.
“Sister, wait! You’re having a laugh at my expense, correct? Celestia!” Luna desperately cried, but not before Celestia shut the door, leaving Luna confused. “Yes, she must have been joking...”
“Hello, my darling Luna,” a voice said from behind Luna. She immediately shivered and turned around to see Discord standing behind her dressed in a tuxedo and a top hat, complete with a gentle-man’s mustache.
“Celestia!” Luna cried, before teleporting away. Discord blinked twice and shrugged.
“Just wanted to ask her if my outfit was good for tomorrow. Honestly, those two are terrible at keeping secrets,” he mumbled to himself before turning around and walking down the hall, twirling a large candy cane.
Celestia yawned and pulled the covers of her bed back before collapsing face-first onto the mattress. She mumbled something to herself before rotating so that she was properly aligned in the bed. With a flash of her magic, the lights in the room all disappeared, save for a light glow on the other side of the room; a nightlight the shape of a sun. She was indeed afraid of the dark, something only her sister knew of her. She sighed contentedly and slowly closed her eyes. Her breath slowed and she soon found herself drifting into the realm of dreams.
Dream
“Twilight...” Celestia murmured, her eyes looking down upon her student. “This is the third time in the past two months.”
“I’m sorry,” Twilight apologized, her voice stuttering as she tried to hold back tears.
“Sorry isn’t good enough. The first two times were excusable, but this time,” Celestia trailed off. She wanted to forgive her student, but some things just couldn’t be forgiven. She hated to have to do it, but she was still the ruler of Equestria. Some things just had to be done. “Because of you, Ponyville was completely destroyed. The only saving factor here is that nopony was hurt, miraculously. But the fact still stands; you’re becoming a danger to Equestria. You hold a tremendous amount of power, but you just can’t control it.”
“No, b-but I can!” Twilight cried in between sobs. “Please, just give me a chance; give me time to fix my mistakes!” Twilight continued to sob, her face streaked with tears. Her lower lip quivered uncontrollably. Looking down at her student, she couldn’t help but feel sorry for her. However, she knew deep down that this was an irreversible catastrophe; all of Ponyville was a crater that was somehow made devoid of magic. Whatever Twilight had done, however she had done it, the area in and surrounding where Ponyville once stood was of a completely different realm than what theirs was. Simply stepping into the area stripped her of any magic and she immediately felt as if she had been sapped of all energy. It was as if ponykind couldn’t exist in that vicinity. She shuddered to think what would have happened if she had not intervened and teleported all the ponies and animals away,
“Twilight, I know you,” Celestia whispered. She had suddenly found herself unable to look at Twilight anymore. She knew what had to be done, but she didn’t know if she could. “You’d stop at nothing to try and fix the issue... and that’s what scares me. What if, during your quest to fix this, you caused something much worse? I simply cannot take that risk, Twilight.”
“Please, you have to let me-“
“I don’t have to do anything, Twilight,” Celestia argued. She was slightly shocked at herself for taking such a rude tone with Twilight, but she knew this had to be done. She wanted there to be another way, she’d give her life for there to be another way, but the chance of a negative outcome was too great. “I have to do what’s best for Equestria. If I were to let you continue your studies under me after today...” she once more trailed off. Twilight began to plead again, but she immediately glanced at Twilight, her eyes commanding. “My authority would fall under question. Ponies all around would wonder how much I’d let you get away with.”
“...what are you saying?” Twilight whimpered, her heart immediately jumping to her throat. Fear, the likes of which one experiences when their entire life crumbles away, took over her entire body. She felt as if she would collapse any moment.
“I’m saying...” Celestia sighed, turning away so as to hide her own shaking lip, “I’m left with no options. If you stay, I’ll have an uprising. Everything I’ve worked for this past millennium will fall apart.” Tears had begun to well up in Celestia’s eyes and her voice had begun to shake. “You are the best student, and best friend, I’ve ever had, second only to my own sister. And you know that even she isn’t excused from causing Equestria trouble.”
“A-are you...” Twilight gasped, backing away slightly, “banishing me?” Celestia immediately turned around and looked at her student who was shivering. She knew that she was the one causing such trauma and she absolutely hated herself for it. If she had control of time (she’d considered using Starswirl’s scroll, but it had went missing after Twilight had used it last) , she’d go back and stop the events leading up to this ever happening. If she were not in control of the greatest kingdom in the known world, she’d embrace her student and tell her she could stay. But none of that was the case; she had a job and that came before anything else.
“No. The fact of the matter is that you still hold the Element of Magic. And to that cause, you and your friends will not come under any disciplinary action. But,” Celestia shakily said, a single tear falling freely to the floor, “you cannot stay here. You are hereby relieved of any official responsibilities to me. You... are no longer my student.”
“No, please! I’ll do anything! Please, Celestia, give me one more-“
“Quiet, my little pony... This is the last thing I want. To see this all happen again... to be the one that has to destroy a life, just as I did to my sister all those years ago, it kills me. And I know, believe me, Twilight, I know that this, everything we had, is the world to you. I’d go to Tartarus and back, without my wings or magic, just to make this all right. But there isn’t a single other option. You’re just too powerful. Ever since you were a filly, you’ve had more magic in you than anypony else in Equestria and beyond. But you never learned to fully control it. And I fear that it is your feelings of obligations to me that is the problem. I’ve expected way too much and pushed too hard. I rushed you. I’m the one to blame.”
“I-I’ll go find another time control spell, stop this from ever-“Twilight tried to plead, but was interrupted by Celestia again.
“I’ve already considered it. After you last used it, it inexplicably vanished. I’ve tried to find it, but I couldn’t locate it with even the greatest magic. Twilight, there is no more to be said.”
“No, it can’t end like this! I’ll-“
“NO!” Celestia bellowed, her voice echoing throughout the entire audience hall. Twilight recoiled and began to back away at a steady pace. Tears were now flowing steadily down Celestia’s cheeks, dripping from her chin. She had not screamed in anger, but out of grief. Each plea by Twilight lead her to want to forgive and embrace her student... former student. But she knew that keeping Twilight as her ward, the inhabitants of Ponyville, and soon all of Equestria, would be in uproar. Even if Twilight could somehow miraculously fix everything, which she actually did not doubt, it would be too late. The residents of Ponyville had all seen Twilight in her splendor moments before wiping Ponyville off the map. They’d want vengeance; for even the kindness of pony’s hearts knew limits, and there were things even they wouldn’t forgive.
“W-what...” Twilight cried, absolute terror and panic etched on her face, a sight Celestia would never forget, “what am I to do?” Her voice had gone from shaky pleading to emotionless defeat. As she continued to slowly back away from Celestia, the princess couldn’t help but visualize the happiness and love, everything begin to drain from her former student. She tried to speak, but nothing came out. She began to shakily step forward, but stopped when Twilight hastened her retreat.
“I...” she whispered. She was trying her hardest to say something, but nothing would come. Her vocal cords weren’t responding, her lungs paralyzed and not releasing air. Before she could even recognize her own voice, she had already said those three words that would forever haunt her, as well as Twilight. “Leave Equestria forever.”
Twilight didn’t say anything. The damage had already been done. What had been a happy pony, the one pony that was destined to become the Princess of friendship, was sapped of every bit of emotion. She didn’t feel sadness or anger. She was just empty inside. She stopped her retreat and stared Celestia in the eyes. There was no life left in them.
“Twilight...”
“This isn’t goodbye.”
In a single flash of light, Twilight was gone. Twilight’s final words hung above Celestia as if a storm cloud, never dissipating. Celestia herself, from that day on, stopped showing emotion. She continued to do her duties, but she rarely left her chambers outside of that.
Celestia, her eyes weary, looked out from her balcony towards the crater where Ponyville had once stood. It had been twenty years since her meeting with Twilight, a name that she couldn’t go a day without thinking about. It had seemed to have been only a few days since their fateful departure from one another. Every day, she came out to the balcony and just spent hours looking down at the crater.
There had of course been uproar. It took an entire year to calm the masses. Twilight had been labeled one of the greatest evils to ever walk Equestria, but, much to Celestia’s disgust, nopony truly blamed the princess herself. She was made out to be a victim, the one that suffered most from Twilight’s betrayal. She had wanted to protest, but Equestria needed a scapegoat, some pony to blame for the tragedy. They would never blame their princess, the only one that could fix everything. Then came the rise of Tirek...
He had come to power quite easily, and would have won if not for Discord. Back when Twilight had went missing each of her five friends disappeared from Equestria as well. Discord took it personally; he viewed Twilight as the one that took his only friend away from him. From that point on, he’d vowed to protect Equestria so that Fluttershy would have something to come home to. When Tirek had invaded, Discord sided with him, but betrayed him at the last minute, utilizing a new form of magic that he had created. It replicated the power of the Elements, but had a cost. He had sacrificed himself for Equestria, taking Tirek with him to another existence. He was labeled a hero and statues of him were erected all across Equestria.
Celestia once again somehow managed to get praise for allowing Discord to stay and her position as Equestria’s leader was only strengthened more. The guilt weighed on her and she began to do her royal duties from her chambers. Any attempts to communicate were met with an expressionless princess who would just stare off into the distance. Soon, Luna, in fear of ponies worrying for her sister, took a stand as the face of Equestria. Thus began her rule.
Luna quickly became a beloved princess, and out of respect for her sister, she began to outlaw any reference of Twilight. She claimed it was because she wanted Equestria to start anew, to forget the evils past. It took two years, but eventually, Twilight was forgotten. All that remained were retellings of what had happened, most of which entire fictional. What Luna had not told Celestia was that she had spent those two years tirelessly going through the dreams those involved in the accident. She couldn’t wipe Twilight from their minds, but she could change how they perceived that fateful day. She couldn’t change what stories had already been told, but she could make it so that nopony fully knew the truth. Fifteen years after the accident, nopony knew what had truly happened there, save for Celestia and Luna. Stories still were passed around the campfire, but one thing was for sure: Twilight Sparkle, the destroyer of Ponyville, was nothing more than a folk-tale. None remained to even confirm that Twilight had indeed done it, and the truth would go with Celestia and Luna to the grave, if they ever did find themselves in one. Celestia was grateful, but it was of little effect; she still saw Twilight’s horrified face and heard those final words echoing forever, a constant cursed reminder of what she had done.
Nineteen years after the accident, on a cloudless full moon night, Luna mysteriously disappeared. When Celestia awoke, she was horrified to find that the throne-room had but one chair, and Luna’s name was stricken from every writing in the world. Nopony recalled who she was; Celestia was the only ruler Equestria had ever know, and she alone had destroyed Nightmare Moon, banishing her to the moon.
That night, she looked up to see that terrifying black face staring at her from the moon. Her sister was gone, this she knew. There was only one being with the power to do that and to strike somepony that influential from history. She both relished the thought and was terrified at the same time.
“This isn’t goodbye,” the voice echoed again, a constant loop, never stopping, tormenting her every waking moment.
Twenty years later, to the day, she stood on her balcony, looking down at the crater. A single tear fell from her eye, hitting the railing before dropping down to the roof below. Before it was able to impact, she sensed a surge of magic far beyond that of which Equestria has ever seen. All around the world, in Equestria and out, magic faded from ponies, griffins, zebras, everything. Anything that had any connection with magic was sapped and drained of all energy.
Celestia stood wide eyed, her mouth agape at the site before her. The crater was no longer there. Instead, there stood an untouched Ponyville, uncorrupted by time. It was exactly as it had been. A gust of wind blew through the air, and she heard the door behind her shut.
“You look terrible,” the voice, one that held no emotion, anger or otherwise, said.
“It’s been a long twenty years,” Celestia replied, her voice cracking. Behind her was who she knew would be her end, the one she had wronged. “Twilight...”
“Celestia,” Twilight replied, her voice cold. There was no contempt, only that monotonous voice. “Ponyville is back. Nopony will remember that it was ever gone.”
“You’ve been studying,” Celestia whispered. She began to weep, but not from sadness. She turned and faced her student, who now stood at an equal height to herself. Twilight had somehow turned into, and become a full-grown alicorn. Celestia sniffled and smiled.
“I learned from the best,” Twilight replied. Her eyes were nearly grey, completely devoid of all life. The two stared at one another for a grueling time, all of which Celestia was sobbing, not wanting to say anything. Twilight just stood there, unmoved by anything. Her eyes never left the same spot, and they indeed never did for the remainder of their conversation. Finally, Celestia broke the silence with the one question that had been bugging her for two centuries.
“Where did you go?”
“Tartarus,” she replied, much to the shock of Celestia.
“H-how long?”
“Two hundred years,” Twilight retorted. There was a haunting aura about her. She didn’t move, didn’t appear to breathe, and didn’t seem to be affected by anything. “It took me a year until I was able to control magic properly there. After that, I started taking over.”
“T-taking over?” Celestia asked, the tears drying up. Happiness to see that her student was alive was quickly turning to confusion. Nopony had ever went to Tartarus and stayed an extended period of time.
“Tartarus is mine. Everything that was there has been banished to another world. Those five other ponies that I once called ‘friends’”, Twilight continued, her voice only faltering ever so slightly, showing only the slightest hint of sadness, or possibly longing, when she mentioned her friends, “rule the five corners of Tartarus. They’re immortalized in time; to them, not a single day has passed. Nothing has changed. It took me fifty years, but I mastered control of time. I came back to that day and I took them.”
“Twilight, you-“
“Don’t say my name,” Twilight commanded, her voice rising slightly. Celestia found herself stunned and she felt something she’d not felt in a long, long time: fear. “It took me a hundred years, ten years here, before I discovered a power equaling mine; Tirek. I released him.”
“Y-you?” Celestia stuttered.
“Yes. I knew Discord would stop him and I knew he’d do it in a way in such that he would remove himself from this world. He, too, had a power matching mine. Two birds with one stone.”
“He almost destroyed all of-“
“But he didn’t,” Twilight snapped. “I calculated everything perfectly, like a well-controlled game of chess. Celestia...” Twilight trailed off. Celestia began to respond, but not before the room erupted in a dull purple light and she found herself in the throne room, standing before Twilight. It was exactly like their last chance meeting, but save for one difference.
Twilight was sitting on the throne.
“Twilight, what are you-“
“Stop calling me that. I gave up that name two-hundred years ago. I don’t have a name,” Twilight coldly dictated. Her voice was slowly going from the calm, emotionless tone she had used for two-hundred years to one of anger, something she’d not felt since their last meeting. “I asked only for one more chance, but you valued your own position as the ruler of Equestria over me. That’s alright; I understand. But there are certain things you take a chance for.” Twilight stood and looked down at Celestia. It was a perfect recreation of the day they parted, but with their roles switched.
“You think I don’t regret that decision every day?” Celestia cried, her own voice rising. Twilight raised an eyebrow at this response, as she had not expected it. “I’ve spent the last two decades wishing I could take everything back. No matter what I did, no matter how hard I tried, I was made into the victim or the hero. I wanted to be the one to blame, but imagine the consequences of Equestria losing its princess!”
“A millennium is enough for one princess to be in power. You ruled justly, but you never took risks. I asked one favor of you, and you wouldn’t do it,” Twilight angrily replied. Celestia began to reply, but not before Twilight angrily yelled and blasted Celestia across the room. She tried to stand, but she was drained of all energy. “I did everything for you; I tried to be the perfect student. I defeated Nightmare Moon, Sombra, Discord, everything that threated Equestria in your name!” Twilight, with no effort at all, lifted Celestia from the ground and levitated her so that the two were almost face to face. Celestia had no control of herself whatsoever; she was completely as the mercy of her former student.
“Y-you’re right...” Celestia whimpered, her voice barely escaping the magical grip Twilight had on her. Twilight was taken aback at the comment; she hadn’t expected Celestia to admit her failure, her betrayal. Twilight looked down and stared at the floor, where her entire life had fallen about two centuries beforehand. Without even feeling it, she watched a tear drop and hit the floor. Without warning, she released Celestia and returned to the front of the throne. Celestia regained her strength and stood, looking up to see Twilight staring down at her.
“Things can never return to the way they were.”
“I know,” Celestia replied. As she looked up, she saw not a full grown alicorn devoid of life; she saw a spry young filly with a will to learn from somepony she admired enough to dedicate her life to them.
“Do you know what happens now?” Twilight asked, her voice quivering. Celestia slowly saw the color returning to her student’s eyes.
“I do... Princess Twilight,” she softly replied. “I’m ready for my punishment. I’m ready to surrender my throne. I know you’ll make the right choices. I’m so proud of you, Twilight,” Celestia said, all fear gone from her. She began to weep the tears of somepony who had just been cleared of a never-ending nightmare. “Banish me.”
Twilight stared down at her former-mentor, the pony who she had loved, then resented. The one living being she was once willing to face anything for, and the pony that she had walked where no other pony has ever walked before to seek her revenge on. And in that moment, she felt only one thing: happiness.
“I’m not banishing you. But this...” she trailed off, her voice returning to that happy voice Celestia had loved, “...this is my kingdom now. Your time is over. You...”
“Leave Equestria forever...” Celestia interrupted.
“Yes, but not as you may think.”
Celestia closed her eyes and didn’t resist in the slightest as Twilight walked towards her. She waited to feel the surge of magic, then nothing, but it didn’t come. A moment passed before she opened her eyes. Before her, Twilight stood. Before she could question her student’s intentions, Twilight embraced her.
“I wanted revenge,” Twilight started, “but in the end... I just wanted to see you again, to know that you regretted your decision.” Twilight sniffled and backed away, smiling at Celestia. “You may be leaving,” she proudly said as her horn lit up. Celestia began to see the world around her disappearing; it was time for her to go. She was ready.
“Goodbye, Twilight,” she said. She expected to hear a goodbye as well, but instead she heard nothing. In the fleeting last second of her existence, she heard three simple words.
“This isn’t goodbye.”
It had been a century in her life. She had lived it proudly and loved every moment of it. She turned and looked out towards the rising sun and smiled. She had always loved the sun in its entire splendor.
“I always wanted to have the power to raise the sun,” she whispered, her voice weak.
“Oh, my most faithful student, if you knew what I knew...” the voice trailed off. She smiled as she heard the melodic tone, one which she had known almost all her life. She turned, looking away from the sunset, at the pony before her: Princess Twilight Sparkle.
“I always loved your stories, Princess Twilight,” she whispered.
“Well, my little pony, this story begins over a thousand years ago. You see, two magnificent sisters once faced off against a mad god wielding an ancient magic call the Elements of Harmony. They defeated this chaotic god, who was really just misunderstood, and turned him to stone. After that, they restored peace to a trouble land,” Twilight recounted. Of course, none of this had ever happened; everypony knows that Princess Twilight had been the ruler of Equestria for thousands of years. “Do you know what their names were?”
“No,” she replied.
“Their names were Princess Luna and Princess Celestia,” Twilight continued. This brought a spark of life to the white, rainbow haired mare before her.
“Oh, I would love to have been a princess,” Celestia replied. “Luna would have loved it as well,” she replied, her eyes growing heavy. Twilight laughed and put her hoof on her student’s.
“Oh, but you are, Princess Celestia. You’ve always been,” Twilight said.
“You spoil me,” Celestia replied, her voice growing thin and her words few and far between.
“One day, a thousand years later, Princess Celestia met a young filly who she grew to love. This filly’s name was Twilight Sparkle. The two quickly became inseparable. This filly did everything for her mentor who she loved. The two shared a bond nopony else could ever understand,” Twilight continued, her voice growing shaky. Through her sobs, she looked down at the mare before her, whose breathing was shallow. “Even destiny could not separate the two, and one day, that little pony became a princess herself. She became the princess of friendship, and she lived in a marvelous tree-house with her best friends.”
“How... big?” Celestia whispered/
“As big as Canterlot Castle. And it was made of diamonds. Princess Celestia was so proud of her young student. Yet, Twilight was not immortal. So, on her final day, she lay in her bed, wishing she had the power to raise the sun. Princess Celestia was not sad to see her student leaving; she was only glad that she had gotten to know this pony. She would live on and through her, Twilight would be immortal,” Twilight whispered, tears welling in her eyes. Her horn lit up as she gave Celestia one last bit of strength. “Go ahead and try,” she said, the tears now falling.
Celestia opened her eyes and, with little effort, began to raise the sun. Fulfilling her final wish, she looked back at Twilight and smiled. Twilight smiled back.
“This, Celestia... This is goodbye,” Twilight said, wiping her tears away with her free hoof.
“No... I live on through you. Just... like the story,” she said, her words getting slower and slower.
Celestia closed her eyes and drifted peacefully into an eternal sleep. Twilight, her hoof still on her former mentor's, looked up at the sun and began recounting the first time she'd seen Celestia raising the sun. That seemed so long ago.
Time To Wake Up
As Celestia slept, her dreams coming to an end, the sun began to rise. Ponies, as well as her faithful student, Twilight Sparkle, awoke to the morning sun. She had long ago become accustomed to raising the sun even in her dreams, because it was always the same way; she and Twilight would raise it together. The two shared a great bond, that which can only be shared between mentor and student, a tie stronger than even the best of friendships. She awoke with a smile on her face, the nightmare turned fantasy of the night already forgotten. She recalled how the previous evening had gone and decided she had left Luna worried about Discord long enough. She never was really that good with jokes, especially not those at her expense. Besides; she had to make the final preparations for Discord’s party. She knew that he already knew about the surprise birthday party. But what he didn’t know was that she had commissioned Pinkie Pie to do a second party; a super deluxe ultra-magnificent splendiferous mega birthday party as Pinkie had called it. Yawning, she got out of bed and left the room, closing the door behind her.
However, she failed to notice one thing. A small anomaly, barely visible unless directly stared at: a small distortion about the size of a bit that seemed to twist and blur reality. It slowly moved across the room towards the open balcony door. If she had noticed it, she would have been able to take care of it. But the world and life in general is full of “what ifs”. What danger could one small little distortion cause anyways? What harm could it possibly do?
Only time would tell. And this story is only just beginning.
The Dream Series
Usurper
Next time on The Dream Series: Popular
"...As Rainbow Dash snoozed, the abnormality twisted and all color in the center of it seemed to absolutely cease to be. If one were to get close to it, they’d feel an overwhelming sense of dread while staring at it. If one also paid close attention, they'd see that it was barely growing. Most disturbing, however, a small guttural growl, only audible in absolute silence, seemed to permeate from it.
What that entity was, it didn't come from that world. It was different, haunting, nightmarish, wholly evil. And it was coming."
Author's Note
Teehee! For giggles, turn on Comic Sans and put your colors on "Princess Celestia"
Disclaimer:
I wrote this story based on the canon universe. Any events in the "waking" (frame) part of the story take place during the current point of the show. I try my hardest to not let my writing be "corrupted" by other fanfics, and indeed I write my stories based on how I view the characters in the show if they were living beings. I'm a creator and I enjoy fleshing out characters, so to me, each and every one of these fictitious ponies is a conscious character, albeit in a universe seperate from ours. Shrek is love. Any and all canonical contradictions as of now, or in the future as the show is updated, are entirely accidental. If I have anything wrong, that can be supported with evidence, please feel free to let me know. I wrote this with the idea of it being able to be integrated into the show through our minds. As such, all events will continue on with the show and indeed, may even take place during any episodes henceforth. Yada yada yada, this guy sure talks a lot...
Dream Explanation (Don't read until you've read the 'chapter')
Celestia has lived for at least a thousand years according to the knowledge offered to us by the show. What we do know is that she has ruled Equestria for at least that long, so it goes without saying that she would be unwilling to give her rule up for anything. She even banished her own friggin' sister to the moon to protect her rule and everypony of Equestria. So I had to ask: wouldn't it be a nightmare for her to need to choose between Twilight and Equestria? A near impossible choice; both would have consequences.
Celestia honestly does share a bond with Twilight. We see it in the show; the two may not have too much interaction time on camera, but we can see that they are best friends and have been as such since before Twilight even met her friends. They are much more than mentor and student; both trust each other with unfaltering loyalty. Celestia has trusted the safety of Equestria to Twilight a ridiculous amount of times. So naturally, it would be an absolute nightmare to Celestia to imagine a world where Twilight isn't there, or worse, is her enemy.
Finally, being a (as far as we know) immortal being, she'd have no fear of death (yes, death is in the show: S2, EP 17). However, imagine knowing that your existence is about to end, and by somebody you care deeply for. It truly is the thing of nightmares, but it could also be a beautiful thing in the right light.
Also, I was originally going to end the "dream" on a sadder note, but I change my mind. The whole "epilogue" to the dream segment was created due, once again, to the strong bond the two share. Yes, I Ieft a lot (like, seriously, a metric ton) of loose ends, but in the end, it's just a dream. A story within a story to enhance the ride before the ride even begins. And trust me; I've got so much more in stock. Got an entire year worth of backed up stories stuck in my mind begging to get out.
This is just the beginning.
2 - Title [Tags - Comedy, Random] (Characters - Rainbow Dash, Discord); Rating - E
Rainbow Dash looked down over the town of Ponyville, her muscles burning from exertion. She had just completed a set of intense training, one that pushed even her to her limits. The cloud she sat on was particularly comfortable to her, but perhaps that was just the exhaustion talking. She rested her chin on her front legs which were hanging over the side of cloud and continued to gaze down at the town below. She had grown quite fond of watching the ponies below go about their lives and had learned to recognize each and every one by what they looked like from above.
“I’ll just rest my eyes for a minute,” she mumbled to herself, the effects of sleep already falling hard upon her. She began trying to justify her sleepiness, but fell asleep before even getting the chance to. As she snoozed, the town below her continued on with their day, unaware of the sleeping mare well above them.
Unfortunately, they were also unaware of something that lurked underneath the rainbow mare; a barely noticeable distortion below the cloud that was about the size of two bits. As Rainbow slept, the abnormality twisted and all color in the center of it seemed to absolutely cease to be. If one were to get close to it, they’d feel an overwhelming sense of dread while staring at it. If one also paid close attention, they'd see that it was barely growing. Most disturbing, however, a small guttural growl, only audible in absolute silence, seemed to permeate from it.
Dream
Rainbow stood proudly on the pedestal, a medal with a large ‘1’ etched onto it around her neck. All around, ponies cheered and whistled and cheered her name. She gleamed proudly and smiled wide enough that the sun reflected off her white teeth. Somewhere in the crowd, somepony screamed “My eyes!” She completely ignored the cry of pain.
“Thank you! I really am great, aren’t I?” she happily exclaimed. The pony in the second spot next her was standing with his arms crossed. When asked his name at the entrance, his only response was “Hi, I’m grump.” As the crowd continued to cheer, the announcer began to dismiss everybody from the Cloudsdale stadium, and much to her displeasure, everypony quickly began to leave. “Hey, wait! Where’s everypony going?” she asked.
“Show’s over, Rainbow,” Twilight responded. She stood in the third place pedestal; she had apparently become quite the flyer. Why she entered that contest, however, nopony would ever know.
“But, I- they...” Rainbow protested.
“It’s over, dude.” Grump replied before walking away. Rainbow and Twilight watched as he walked to two other ponies, one (for some odd reason) in a ninja outfit, the other with quite possibly the best mane they’d ever seen.
“Come on, Rainbow; let’s head home,” Twilight said as she tapped Rainbow, who was still obviously upset about her cheering crowd disappearing.
“Fine,” she grunted as she flew off the pedestal. “I’ll meet you back in Ponyville. I’m gonna go around the track a couple more times; I messed up at the same spot twice.”
“Alright, but remember that you don’t have to be perfect,” Twilight reassured. “You did great today.” Rainbow waited for Twilight to leave before she hovered over to the starting line of the track. In her mind, she could still hear the cheering crowd and it served to inspire her to try her hardest. For five minutes she flew around the track, avoiding the clouds that served as obstacles. By her fifth lap, she had mastered the part she had messed up on and managed to shave two seconds off her time. To her, two seconds was a large improvement. Content with mastering the course, she decided it was time to return to Ponyville. It only took her a few minutes to get there. She landed on the outskirts of the town and began to walk into it, before a raspy, guttural voice called out to her.
“Young mare, would you kindly give spare a few bits?” the pony asked. Rainbow turned and looked at the beggar and was immediately taken back by its appearance. The pony was ancient looking; his eyes sunken and almost hidden behind an old leather face. His lips were almost completely nonexistent, revealing naught by greening teeth. In comparison, he made Granny Smith look like a filly. But what was worst was his muzzle; it had appeared to have basically rotten away.
“Agh! What in Tartarus are you?” Rainbow yelled, not even thinking about the pony’s feelings. She immediately regretted her outburst, for the ancient pony’s reaction was for his wrinkles to all fall downward, signifying he was frowning. No matter her speed, she was unable to react as the pony stood and put his face in front of hers.
“You dare mock me? I’ve lived hundreds of years only to be disrespected by some mare?” the pony angrily said, his voice more of a croak than anything. His breath smelled of rotting onions. Or really good cheese.
“Hey, I’m sor-“
“Popular!” the pony yelled before stroking Rainbow’s cheek.
“Ah, what the hay, man?!” she yelled, jumping back. “Get away from me!”
“I see what your heart most desires. From this day forth, it will be the one thing you wish you could get away from!” the pony croaked, spittle flying and hitting Rainbow, much to her absolute horror and disgust. Instead of trying to argue, Rainbow immediately turned and dashed away, leaving the crazed, rotten piece of beef jerky pony alone.
“What a creep,” she mumbled to herself, unable to get his creepy face out of her mind. She shook her head and slowed to a canter, then a walk. It was then that she noticed that her cheek where the pony has caressed her felt icy cold, as if he had applied a cream made of ice to her face. She pressed her hoof to the spot so as to warm it, but found that her cheek was actually not cold at all. “What...?” she muttered completely confused at the situation. Her confusion was short lived, however, as she heard her name shouted from behind her.
“Rainbow Dash!” it yelled, prompting her to smile and turned around. The moment she did, her pupils shrunk at the shock of the site before her. Hundreds of ponies were sprinting at her full speed, a ravenous horde all shouting her name and sporting pictures of her. She was both in awe at the site and oh so absolutely horrified. From her end it was but a small horde. But from above, one could see that the oncoming group of crazed fan-ponies stretched on for nearly a mile.
“Whoa, calm down!” she yelled, a nervous laughter following shortly. Before she could fly, so as not to be completely trampled by the mob, she felt herself being tackled from behind.
“Rainbow Dash!” Twilight yelled as she tackled the rainbow pony to the ground. The two rolled for a moment, concluding with Twilight having Rainbow on her back, Twilight towering over the confused mare. “I love you!”
“Twilight? What?” Rainbow puzzled, bewildered by Twilight’s sudden confession. “I mean, you’re great and all, but-“
“Sign my book!” Twilight interrupted a giant grin on her face. The book in question was but an empty journal. On the front was a picture of Rainbow Dash, obviously glued to the cover just a couple seconds prior. In fact, a bit of glue dripped off and fell onto Rainbow’s chest.
“Ew, Twilight! Get off me!” she yelled as she shoved her friend away. “What’s gotten into you?” she asked while standing up. She wiped the glue off of her and flung it away before glaring at Twilight. “Since when have you wanted my autograph?” Twilight blinked twice in confusion before responding.
“What? I’m your biggest fan, silly! Now, sign here!” she happily exclaimed. Rainbow began to protest, but was unable to as Twilight used her magic to spawn a quill in between Rainbow’s teeth and pointed at a blank page in her book. Meanwhile, the ever-growing group was still dashing at them at an alarming pace.
“I don’t know what’s gotten into you, but could we, you know, do this later maybe? I’ll sign whatever you want,” Rainbow said, glancing back at the advancing ponies. “Maybe in the cast-“she continued, but instantly stopped as her scenery changed. She was no longer in the middle of a road; she was now in Celestia’s castle. “...le...” she finished.
“Rainbow Dash!” Celestia yelled in a very authoritative voice. Rainbow turned to see Celestia and Luna standing in front of her.
“Oh thank Cele- I mean, am I glad to see you two. Something seriously strange is going on in Ponyville,” Rainbow groaned. “Twilight has, like, gone totally bonkers as well.”
“We’re glad you’re here, Rainbow,” Luna said, a smile growing on her face.
“Okay, now that’s just creepy,” Rainbow admitted. She didn’t like where this was going one bit. She began to back up slowly as the two smiled at each other, then looked back at her.
“We’ve decided that you’re obviously the best pony in all of Equestria, so we want to give you the throne. But first,” they continued as they both pulled out scrolls, “sign these!”
“F-fine,” Rainbow agreed, defeated by the insanity that was following her. She cautiously walked up to the two of them who just stood there with smiles plastered on their faces. Somehow, she still managed to keep the quill in her mouth and, with increasing hesitation, began to sign both of their scrolls. After doing so, she slowly backed away and observed the two, who had begun to shake with excitement.
“Oh... my... gosh,” Celestia said, her voice going an extremely high pitch. Finally, just as Rainbow was sure the two would explode, they turned and hugged each other and began to squeal at such a high pitch that she was sure the windows would shatter. She covered her ears and tried to shut out the noise to no avail. Fortunately for her, there existed one being that wasn’t under whatever magic she was cursed with. And he was clad in a leather jacket and sunglasses.
“Come with me if you want to live,” Discord said, extending his hand to the pony.
“Discord?” Rainbow quizzed. “There is no way I’m touching you. For all I know, you did this to me!” she yelled, backing away from him. He lowered his hand and sighed.
“You just ruined a perfectly good moment, Dashie,” he responded, tossing the glassing at the two sisters and knocking Luna out. “This jacket wasn’t cheap,” he continued.
“Who even tailors your clothes?” she asked. And he would have answered had the lights dimmed in the room. The two looked around at all the windows to see that hundreds of pegasi were now trying to bust into the windows. The dashie-pocolypse had begun.
“Oh screw it,” Discord mumbled and stretched his arm towards rainbow, grabbing her and teleporting the two away from the castle. Moments later, the pegasi busted in through the windows and found that Rainbow was no longer there. However, Celestia, with her signature in hand, still stood next to her unconscious sister. They all surrounded her and began to advance on her, demanding the scroll.
Now, I wish I could tell you that Celestia fought the good fight and the pegasi let her be. I wish I could tell you that. But Equestria is no fairytale land.
“Alright, tell me what’s going on,” Rainbow demanded, her brow furrowed.
“You’re famous, Dashie,” Discord replied, his arms crossed. Rainbow glared at him and he sighed. “You’re cursed. Something with great magic has taken ahold of you and made every single living being in Equestria absolutely infatuated with you. It’s actually quite hilarious,” he admitted.
“Then why are you helping me?”
“Simple; nopony is paying attention to me,” Discord said with a shrug. “What good are you ponies if you don’t notice when I switch the gender of every pony in Canterlot? It’s no fun without there being mass chaos!”
“That’s- wait, you can switch the gender of ponies?” Rainbow inquired, her brow rising. “Once we fix this, I’m gonna need you for a prank.”
“I’ll take you up on that offer. Now, do you remember doing anything that would cause anypony to want you to be the most obsessed over pony in Equestria since Twilight became a princess?”
“Not really. I mean, there was that old pony-“
“Old pony?” Discord interrupted. “Tell me more of this old pony,” Discord continued, using his fingers to quote ‘old pony’.
“Well, he had this rotten nose and this really, really rancid breath. Plus, he looked like a really dehydrated grape,” she described.
“Sounds like you met a gypsy. You see, there exists a very rare form of magic in this world, one born of hatred. You must have done something horrible to him to gain his wrath,” Discord explained.
“Actually, I just screamed in horror and asked what he was.”
“Oh, well that was kind of an overreaction on his part.”
“So,” Rainbow started, growing impatient with the situation, “how do we fix this?”
“Simple; we find the gypsy and ask him nicely to remove the curse. Or, you know, just wait it out. I have scrabble,” Discord pointed out, revealing he did indeed have a box of scrabble. What scrabble was, Rainbow didn’t know, but she strangely wanted to play it.
“I like option one. Where are we anyways?”
“My closet.”
“Oh. Why am I not surprised?” Rainbow responded, looking around the room that she was now noticing was filled sky high with various outfits, most of which were completely unorthodox. She couldn’t help but notice that there was a set of six outfits that had the color scheme of her and her friends which disturbed her for some reason. “Can we go?”
“Can I wear my jacket?”
“I’d rather you didn’t.”
“Fine,” he grumbled, tossing the jacket aside, where it was magically caught by a hanger and taken away. “Let’s go. Grab my tail.”
“W-why? Can’t you just-“
“Grab. My tail,” he commanded. Rolling her eyes, Rainbow agreed. Instantaneously, the two were teleported to Ponyville, which now lay barren and devoid of life. The two looked around and saw who they were looking for. He was still sitting in the same place, looking like a deflated balloon.
“Hey, you!” Rainbow yelled, walking angrily towards the old pony. He looked up and frowned.
“Oh, you again,” he growled. “Come to laugh at me again?”
“No, I came to kick your butt,” she replied. This only served to anger the pony more.
“How dare you! You insul-“
“Save the act, buddy,” she snarled. “You did some mumbo jumbo and cursed me. I want you to lift it right now!”
“I what now? Curse? What in the blazes are you going on about?” he quizzed, his anger turning to confusion.
“Yeah, you touched me with that icy hoof and said ‘popular’! Now I’ve got ponies drooling over me. My own friend confessed her love for me and started asking me to sign her book.”
“I’m afraid I don’t understand,” the old gypsy replied, obviously unaware as to the situation. “I merely put glitter on your face, you silly pony.” Rainbow stopped, started to reply, and then stopped. She slowly reached up and touched her face again and looked down at her hoof. There was indeed glitter on her face. “Ha! Take that!” the old gypsy laughed.
“You- but...”
“What is your name, Gypsy,” Discord butted in.
“McGuffin,” he replied. Discord and Rainbow looked at each other before face-palming.
“Of course it is,” the two said in unison. McGuffin dashed forward and touched Rainbow’s other cheek, leaving more glitter before cackling madly and dashing off into the distance, never to be see again. Some say he is still running to this day. Some say he never existed in the first place, but those ponies need to be hit. With a stick.
“You have the most adorable cheeks!” Discord exclaimed, taking his chance to pinch Rainbow on either side of her face.
“H-hey! Back off!” she protested, her cheeks turning a rosy pink, which only served to compliment the glitter. “I am not ‘adorable’,” she voiced, gritting her teeth on the final word.
“Really? What happened to ‘Rainbow Dash always dresses in style’?” he asked? Rainbow decided to completely ignore the question and instead deemed it much more important to figure out who had cursed her.
“Alright, so if the old gypsy didn’t curse me, who did?”
“I’m not sure, but you have problems, Dashie,” Discord answered, pointing in the distance. In the distance, coming over the horizon, were thousands upon thousands of ponies charging in her direction, a cloud of dust from the dirt being kicked up. The setting sun glowed through the dust and the shadows of the charging ponies loomed all the way towards her, stopping just at her hooves.
“Discord, get us out of here!” she commanded.
“Nah, I’m good. I helped all I could,” he replied. “You’re on your own. Oh, but I can do this!” he happily exclaimed. Rainbow looked back and forth between him and the oncoming wall of destruction. Her jaw dropped when she saw him duplicate into multiple versions of himself, all sporting a different instrument. “Wha...?”
“This is going to be an epic fight. You need music! I just finished a new song a bit ago; I call it ‘The Eye of the Griffin’,” he said, much to Rainbow’s dismay. “By the way, it’s dangerous to fight alone; take this!” Discord concluded, handing Rainbow a pen. Needless to say, she didn’t take it.
“I really hate you, Discord,” she growled.
“I know.”
Rainbow stepped backwards as the horde finally reached the edge of Ponyville. She had considered flying away, but that idea was cut down by the sight of a giant mass of pegasi flying in from Canterlot. She could easily outfly them, but where would she go? She decided to make a final stand.
“Rainbow Dash!” roared the masses, causing the very ground to shake. Mountains were moved, and moves were mounted. Discord began to play an epic guitar riff. As much as she hated his guts at the moment, she couldn’t help but appreciate the music input. She walked forward and stood proudly as the ponies began to surround her.
“Listen here, whoever did this to me. I don’t know who you are, or what you want. But rest assured that I will find you, and I will kick you,” she loudly said. Nopony replied. Everypony stood around her, waiting for her to make a move, yet she didn’t do anything but look around. By then, a large bubble of pegasi had formed above her. There was no escape anywhere. The drums kicked in on Discord’s song.
Not a single pony moved, for they knew that one movement would cause the advance on their beloved Rainbow Dash. They would get their autographs. Finally, when the stalemate seemed like it would have no end, somebody from the crowd yelled: “JUST DO IT!”
With that, the battle started.
“Me first!” a voice yelled, as the pony charged forward. Rainbow wasted no time in dodging and responding with a kick in the ponies’ back, sending her flying into the wall of ponies opposite of where she’d charged from. Another followed suit, but met with a similar fate. As two charged full speed at her, their parchment in their mouths, Rainbow flipped over them and smacked their heads together causing them to both fall unconscious. She did feel bad; they were, after all, under the control of a curse. However, she knew that if she didn’t fight, she’d fall prey to the horrible fate of having to sign her name an equal amount of times to all the ponies in Equestria, a fate surely worse than death. So she fought bravely on.
Another pony charged at her; the ponied was dodging every swing, he parried to the left, she countered to the right, she caught him in the head. Three charged at her, causing her to become overpowered. With a great exertion of force, she pushed all three off of her, sending them flying. She flapped her wings and hovered out of reach of the ground ponies. The pegasi took their chance and began flying towards her, but they were no match for the skilled ace pony. One stallion charged her, clipping her wing, causing her to spin out of control, but she managed to regain her composition. The fight carried on; the unconscious count of the crazed ponies was in the double digits. Her strength beginning to wane, she once more dropped to the ground to catch her breath. That was when Discord decided to step in.
“You fight well, Dashie,” he praised, clapping his hands together.
“You... gonna... help?” Rainbow panted, her eyes scanning all around, looking for her next challenger.
“No, I was just going to ask a question,” he replied. She scoffed and turned to face him, keeping her hind legs ready to strike if anypony came from behind.
“Heck a time for that,” she snarled, her breath slowing.
“Trust me; it’s important. Where, pray do tell, did you get that medal around your neck?” he asked, pointing the golden medallion in question. He had been eying it since the battle started and had noticed it had a barely noticeable yellow aura surrounding it.
“The race I won this morning,” she replied. Another pony charged but was met with a body slam.
“I’m detecting magic from it,” he revealed. “But it’s fairly young magic; it certainly was cast on it a short while ago,” he explained. He rolled his eyes and lifted his hand over his shoulder just in time for a charging pony to ram face-first into it. “Didn’t your mother teach you that it’s rude to interrupt a conversation? For shame,” he scolded.
“Do you mean...?”
“Yes, that medal may well be the cause of your problems. Take it off,” he advised, brushing the pony he had just incapacitated towards the growing pile of unconscious ponies with his foot. Rainbow began to comply, but not before she was tackled by Big Mac. His brute force proved too much for her to handle and she found herself pinned. She struggled to get free, but he was an incredibly heavy stallion. Exhausting all other options, she growled and head-butted mac square in the muzzle, causing him to retract, allowing Rainbow the perfect chance to spin, jump from her front hooves and buck him across battlefield, causing a shockwave through the wall of ponies on the other side.
That was the final straw. Every pony surrounding her charged at the same time. The battle was over. Or, at least, it seemed that way. A bright yellow light began to emanate from the center of the massive ball, culminating in a giant explosion of magic, sending ponies flying every which way. Rainbow stood; she had managed to remove the medal. As the ponies stood, they all appeared to be absolutely muddled. However, they had come to accept these random happenings as life. After all, chaotic stuff happened in Ponyville, like, once a week.
“Well, that was epic,” Discord admitted, clapping loudly.
“Yeah, thanks for the help,” Rainbow grumbled. Her legs were shaky and she couldn’t seem to catch her breath. Her left wing had been injured and she knew she’d not be flying anytime soon. But she was just glad the ordeal was over.
“You know, we still don’t know who did this,” Discord pointed out.
“Rest assured; I’m going to find them,” Rainbow panted.
“I’ll go with you. I hate to leave a story unfinished,” Discord offered. Rainbow sighed and smiled; she had grown to like the guy.
“You know, Discord? This could be the beginning of a beautiful friendship,” she admitted, extending her hoof towards Discord. He smiled and tapped his closed fist to hers and the two began to walk off into the sunset.
Big Mac stood and, somehow managing to remember everything, began to follow the two, but was stopped by a nearby stallion who said: “Forget it, Mac, this is Ponyville.” He blinked and nodded slightly and walked away.
As Discord and Rainbow were walking away, Discord began to sing.
“Don’t stop-“
Time To Wake Up
Rainbow snapped awake, gasping. The dream was mostly gone, but she could still feel the pain on her wing. It slowly faded as she tried her hardest to recall what the dream had been about, but kept drawing blanks. That was strange; she could usually recall her dreams. Also, she had a strange want to visit Discord. She shook her head and smiled; the day was still young. She stretched and flew off from the cloud.
Below the cloud, the strange entity had once more grown. It had also begun to turn a slight red, which was enhanced by the fact that no color seemed to exist while looking through it. As it began to move away from the cloud, moving to locations unknown, it left a separate version of itself which immediately began to move towards Celestia’s castle; specifically, Celestia’s bed chambers. This entity was only the size of a bit.
All over Equestria, life continued as normal. Nopony noticed these two mysterious orbs and indeed, if they even did, they wouldn’t raise suspicions. The day passed and, as the sun began to set, Celestia moved to her chambers, unaware of the colorless orb that sat in her room. When morning came, the orb emerged, growing as the rays of the sun touched it, reflecting off, showing that the orb had begun to glow a very dull red. But most importantly, it was moving towards where it’s other half was, and that other half had grown as well.
But that’s another story for another time.
The Dream Series
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"...the two combined and began to glow a bright crimson. But this was too noticeable [...] seven purple orbs came from the magnificent orb and went to the skies. The orb was now but the size of a bit once more and practically invisible."
Author's Note
Disclaimer:
I wrote this story based on the canon universe. Any events in the "waking" (frame) part of the story take place during the current point of the show. I try my hardest to not let my writing be "corrupted" by other fanfics, and indeed I write my stories based on how I view the characters in the show if they were living beings. Rainbow has a great flank. I'm a creator and I enjoy fleshing out characters, so to me, each and every one of these fictitious ponies is a conscious character, albeit in a universe seperate from ours. Any and all canonical contradictions as of now, or in the future as the show is updated, are entirely accidental. If I have anything wrong, that can be supported with evidence, please feel free to let me know. I wrote this with the idea of it being able to be integrated into the show through our minds. As such, all events will continue on with the show and indeed, may even take place during any episodes henceforth.
Props to anyone that gets all the references in the dream segment. I'm writing this before writing that segment, but I'm sure there will be a lot! Also, I apologize for this chapter not being as long; I don't like to draw out my comedy because it starts to lose meaning easily. Comedy just isn't my strong suit, but I still like writing it from time to time.
Also, can I get props for using a Macguffin, Chekhov's Gun, and having some Deus Ex Machinama? No?
Dream Explanation
You know, it has the random tag for a reason, yeah? Fine... We all know that Rainbow does indeed have a bit of an issue with wanting to be noticed and praised. Heck, her friends had to create a superhero to stop her ego once. So I though, why not have that be her worst nightmare? Originally, I was going to make this a serious story, but I decided to go a more lighthearted 'comedy' route with it. Plus, I needed to throw some Easter eggs in there! I mean, that second half... can you even? (I may have went a bit overboard, but I was admittedly running out of ideas)
Also, a note on the waking world: this really is just the beginning. I've already got every single thing planned out. And that spoiler at the very end... oh if only you knew. One more thing: Next chapter will explore the waking world a bit more. I know some people are here for that, and I respect that.
Fun facts: I was going to make this 'chapter' about Rarity, but I'm basically avoiding the living hell out of her, since she is going to have an episode focused around her in a few weeks. And as a reward for those of you that are bothering to read this author note, have one last "spoiler": "Stand behind me; this is going to be..."
Random Info
I'm including this segment in case anybody wants it. Basically, it's just factual information about random things relating to the story.
Total time spent: About 5 hours
Times re-written (drafts deleted): 3
Favorite song while writing: "Eye Of The Tiger" and "They Don't Care About Us"
Times I smacked my head against the keyboard: 2 1/2
Times I busted out laughing: 4
Time story was finished: 4:20 A.M. (Blaze it)
Current MLP:FIM episode as of writing: S9, E13
Favorite quote: He was still sitting in the same place, looking like a deflated balloon.
Favorite character: Discord
