This is my first fimfiction story and I'm not sure how I compare to some of the other guys out there but this is what I've got. Tell me if it's good or no so I'll know if I should even bother continuing it.

When a mysterious power forces Twilight Sparkle to create a portal to Earth, the main six are made human. Due to their sudden appearance on Earth, they are taken into military custody. But when an unknown army attacks the country, the military’s greatest discovery will become their greatest weapon.They soon see that this threat is greater that both Discord and Nightmare Moon put together and he's after the whole planet. The ponies must defend their new home and figure out what brought them there in the first place. When all hell breaks loose, it’s time for Ponyferno.