the second chanceby Shadowspark123ChaptersNew dayThe attackThe second chanceNew dayAs I walked over to the clothing store I walked in and started looking around. A white mare with a purple mane said "hello dear what would you like?" I looked over to her and i said "I'm looking for white sweaters you have any?" She looked at me puzzeled and replied "overthere." I stuck my hoof out and said "thank you." I walk over to the sweaters and grab 4 white sweaters and bring them to the counter the white made said "OK that will be 200 bits." I looked over at her and said "bits?" She looked back at me and said "bits are money." I replied with a nod as I picked up my bag and set it on the counter. Then she notices the guns and says "what are those?" I look at her and I said nothing as I quickly grab the money out of my bag. And I hand her $200 and say here then she said "My name is rarity what's yours?" She said. I look at her and said "jordan an hat guy in the alleyway across the road is Jayden... we are new here" "where did you come from?" said rarity "I came from San Fransisco" I said then she replied you mean San fransiscolt?" "Oh...yes San fransiscolt." I said as I continue to gaze into her eyes ."how is it there?" Rarity said I replied "it's beautiful but not as beautiful as you as I smile." She blushes and said "how flattering...but cheesy." I reply I know as I laugh slightly and then rarity said. "I'm about to close up shop wanna meet some of my friends after?" She asked. I said "OK that would be fun." Then rarity said "here meet me back here at 6:00 ok." "Alright I will meet you back here." I said. I walked out of the store to Jayden and said "hey we are coming back at 6:00 ok" I said,then he said "ok so what do you wanna do?" As I look around I notice smoke coming out of the distance. "Oh shit." Then I put on one of my sweaters along with my mask " put your mask on jayden and follow me." Then Jayden said with a puzzeled look on his face "ok but why?" "Just come on." I said as I ran towards the smoke and I find a house burning and I screaming coming from it I don't think and I kick the door down and run in as mares and stallions all gather around to see what's going on "JORDAN!" Jayden screams then I see the mare that is screaming for help "over here." I said as I motion her over to me and I lift her up and start running towards the door but debris crash down and block it so I covered her up and started running Then noticed she passed out so I jumped and smashed thrue the window and set her down and then she woke up 5 minutes after She was pulled out of the fire and I picked her up and sat her on my back and I said "Jayden we gotta take her to the hospital." Jayden replies "I seen a hospital two blocks from here take her there." Then I stared carrying her there and as soon as I got there I fell unconscious 2 1/2 hours later I wake up "where am I." As I look around I notice my mask beside me with black soot on it. Then I see rarity and 5 other mares with her. "Rarity what are you doing here?" I said rarity said " i waited for you a little while ago and you never showed up so I went to look for you...Then jayden said you were taking someone to the hospital so I can here and said I told them I was looking for you and they led my and my friends here." Then the rarity said " the purple mare is twilight. Twilight said "hello" then rarity said the orange mare with the cowboy hat is applejack." Applejack said "howdy partner." Then twilight said and the cyan Pegasus is rainbow dash the yellow Pegasus is fluttershy and that is pinkie pie." Then rainbow dash said " hey." Fluttershy whispered "h..he...hello I I'm fl..fluttersh..y" and pinkiepie said "helloimpinkiepieit'snicetomeetyou." Then I said hello I'm Jordan and this is jayden.jayden said "sup." Then I said "so who was the made I saved? Twilight said "The mare you saved her name is vinyl scratch." Then I said "ok how is she?" Rarity said " she is doing good." Then I look around and my have isn't with me then I start getting nervous and I said "where's my bag?" As I look around frantically. "Oh it's at my place." rarity said then I calmed down and said "ok thanks rarity." The attack"Hey Jayden how muck money you think we got?" I said while walking towards his car " I would say around $15 million." Said Jayden as he but the duffle bags of money in the trunk. then he walked to the driver seat and he drove off. Then he stopped the car beside Stephen, "hey bro" said Stephen then i replied "what's up" then jayden drove in the gate and parked the cathen OK boss we got the money." Said Jayden as he dropped the Bates in front of Elvira. "All of it here." Said Elvira " yes all of it is here." I said Elvira looked at me then said " the money put it in the vault. " "Yes ma'am " I said then walked into the building. 5 minutes later I heard gun shots coming from outside "oh fuck they are here " i said in anger as i drew my m9 and ran out the door to see the bloods attacking us. "Give us are money back" said the leader of the bloods. i opened fire on him and said "fuck you",then I his behind a wall. All of the sudden a truck drives up and the window rolls down and 3 uzi barrels pop out of the window.I look over and see Elvira hiding behind a box . "Elvira look out !" Then i ran and pushed her out of the way as they fired 15 bullets hit me and jayden screamed "jordan" and ran to drag me in to cover then he was gunned down and i passed out unconcious. After four hours of being in surgery I died. The second chanceI wake up in a white room "hello Jordan." Said the female voice. I said "Who the fuck are you... Show yourself!" I look over and see Jayden beside me and then I smiled then Jayden said "What do you want?" Female voice said "I don't want anything... It is what you earned." "What did we earn" I said sarcastically "You earned a second chance at life." Said the female voice "we are gonna live again."we both said the female voice said " yes because of your bravery." "What did we do that was brave." Jayden said.the female voice replied "Jayden you pulled jordan out of gunfire and you got shot multiple times in the left arm and chest but you kept,dragging him." Said the female voice "OK that's what he did what did I do." I said "you pushed your boss Elvira out of a wall of bullets and you took 4 gun shots to the gut." Said the female voice then I looked over and she appeared And I said "where do we go?" Then She looked back at me and said you will be going to a new world and You will live your lives there." Then the room got brighter and then I woke up in a ally with Jayden beside me. "What the fuck happened to you!" I screamed at Jayden then Jayden said "the same thing that happend to you." And I said "OK we are ponies what now." Jayden said "Hey check those bags " I look ever and see a bag addressed to me "Hey here is a bag to you." I said as I toss the bag to him. "Hey Jayden my bag has an m9 with 32 boxes of ammo and 12 empty magazine's for the m9 and $20,000 and my mask." Then Jayden opened his bag and said " i found an mp5k with 49 boxes of ammo and 20 empty magazines $20,000 and my bandana ,hat, and sunglassess I look at him and say "dude we gotta find a place to stay" as I walk out of the ally way I see a clothing shop "hey dude I'm gonna go get a sweater OK?" I said to him he replied " OK I'll wait here for you."
New dayAs I walked over to the clothing store I walked in and started looking around. A white mare with a purple mane said "hello dear what would you like?" I looked over to her and i said "I'm looking for white sweaters you have any?" She looked at me puzzeled and replied "overthere." I stuck my hoof out and said "thank you." I walk over to the sweaters and grab 4 white sweaters and bring them to the counter the white made said "OK that will be 200 bits." I looked over at her and said "bits?" She looked back at me and said "bits are money." I replied with a nod as I picked up my bag and set it on the counter. Then she notices the guns and says "what are those?" I look at her and I said nothing as I quickly grab the money out of my bag. And I hand her $200 and say here then she said "My name is rarity what's yours?" She said. I look at her and said "jordan an hat guy in the alleyway across the road is Jayden... we are new here" "where did you come from?" said rarity "I came from San Fransisco" I said then she replied you mean San fransiscolt?" "Oh...yes San fransiscolt." I said as I continue to gaze into her eyes ."how is it there?" Rarity said I replied "it's beautiful but not as beautiful as you as I smile." She blushes and said "how flattering...but cheesy." I reply I know as I laugh slightly and then rarity said. "I'm about to close up shop wanna meet some of my friends after?" She asked. I said "OK that would be fun." Then rarity said "here meet me back here at 6:00 ok." "Alright I will meet you back here." I said. I walked out of the store to Jayden and said "hey we are coming back at 6:00 ok" I said,then he said "ok so what do you wanna do?" As I look around I notice smoke coming out of the distance. "Oh shit." Then I put on one of my sweaters along with my mask " put your mask on jayden and follow me." Then Jayden said with a puzzeled look on his face "ok but why?" "Just come on." I said as I ran towards the smoke and I find a house burning and I screaming coming from it I don't think and I kick the door down and run in as mares and stallions all gather around to see what's going on "JORDAN!" Jayden screams then I see the mare that is screaming for help "over here." I said as I motion her over to me and I lift her up and start running towards the door but debris crash down and block it so I covered her up and started running Then noticed she passed out so I jumped and smashed thrue the window and set her down and then she woke up 5 minutes after She was pulled out of the fire and I picked her up and sat her on my back and I said "Jayden we gotta take her to the hospital." Jayden replies "I seen a hospital two blocks from here take her there." Then I stared carrying her there and as soon as I got there I fell unconscious 2 1/2 hours later I wake up "where am I." As I look around I notice my mask beside me with black soot on it. Then I see rarity and 5 other mares with her. "Rarity what are you doing here?" I said rarity said " i waited for you a little while ago and you never showed up so I went to look for you...Then jayden said you were taking someone to the hospital so I can here and said I told them I was looking for you and they led my and my friends here." Then the rarity said " the purple mare is twilight. Twilight said "hello" then rarity said the orange mare with the cowboy hat is applejack." Applejack said "howdy partner." Then twilight said and the cyan Pegasus is rainbow dash the yellow Pegasus is fluttershy and that is pinkie pie." Then rainbow dash said " hey." Fluttershy whispered "h..he...hello I I'm fl..fluttersh..y" and pinkiepie said "helloimpinkiepieit'snicetomeetyou." Then I said hello I'm Jordan and this is jayden.jayden said "sup." Then I said "so who was the made I saved? Twilight said "The mare you saved her name is vinyl scratch." Then I said "ok how is she?" Rarity said " she is doing good." Then I look around and my have isn't with me then I start getting nervous and I said "where's my bag?" As I look around frantically. "Oh it's at my place." rarity said then I calmed down and said "ok thanks rarity."
The attack"Hey Jayden how muck money you think we got?" I said while walking towards his car " I would say around $15 million." Said Jayden as he but the duffle bags of money in the trunk. then he walked to the driver seat and he drove off. Then he stopped the car beside Stephen, "hey bro" said Stephen then i replied "what's up" then jayden drove in the gate and parked the cathen OK boss we got the money." Said Jayden as he dropped the Bates in front of Elvira. "All of it here." Said Elvira " yes all of it is here." I said Elvira looked at me then said " the money put it in the vault. " "Yes ma'am " I said then walked into the building. 5 minutes later I heard gun shots coming from outside "oh fuck they are here " i said in anger as i drew my m9 and ran out the door to see the bloods attacking us. "Give us are money back" said the leader of the bloods. i opened fire on him and said "fuck you",then I his behind a wall. All of the sudden a truck drives up and the window rolls down and 3 uzi barrels pop out of the window.I look over and see Elvira hiding behind a box . "Elvira look out !" Then i ran and pushed her out of the way as they fired 15 bullets hit me and jayden screamed "jordan" and ran to drag me in to cover then he was gunned down and i passed out unconcious. After four hours of being in surgery I died.
The second chanceI wake up in a white room "hello Jordan." Said the female voice. I said "Who the fuck are you... Show yourself!" I look over and see Jayden beside me and then I smiled then Jayden said "What do you want?" Female voice said "I don't want anything... It is what you earned." "What did we earn" I said sarcastically "You earned a second chance at life." Said the female voice "we are gonna live again."we both said the female voice said " yes because of your bravery." "What did we do that was brave." Jayden said.the female voice replied "Jayden you pulled jordan out of gunfire and you got shot multiple times in the left arm and chest but you kept,dragging him." Said the female voice "OK that's what he did what did I do." I said "you pushed your boss Elvira out of a wall of bullets and you took 4 gun shots to the gut." Said the female voice then I looked over and she appeared And I said "where do we go?" Then She looked back at me and said you will be going to a new world and You will live your lives there." Then the room got brighter and then I woke up in a ally with Jayden beside me. "What the fuck happened to you!" I screamed at Jayden then Jayden said "the same thing that happend to you." And I said "OK we are ponies what now." Jayden said "Hey check those bags " I look ever and see a bag addressed to me "Hey here is a bag to you." I said as I toss the bag to him. "Hey Jayden my bag has an m9 with 32 boxes of ammo and 12 empty magazine's for the m9 and $20,000 and my mask." Then Jayden opened his bag and said " i found an mp5k with 49 boxes of ammo and 20 empty magazines $20,000 and my bandana ,hat, and sunglassess I look at him and say "dude we gotta find a place to stay" as I walk out of the ally way I see a clothing shop "hey dude I'm gonna go get a sweater OK?" I said to him he replied " OK I'll wait here for you."
