The Criminal 6

by GoldenChaos

Rating: everyone
Tags: Dark, Alternate Universe, Tragedy, Random, Adventure
Length: 2069

In the magical land of Equestria... The Mane 6 are... Criminals?!

The Mane 6, the beloved ponies, are not what you thought… See what I mean in the story!

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2015-08-19 16:18:39 UTC

Twivine

             Twilight is sick of being mistreated and called a nerd. Twilight has been awake countless nights, trying to figure out what to do about it. Finally, after a week, she decides to use a spell that will make her whole life change, and there won't be going back afterwards.

             "This spell will bring what you desire, only with some additions. Warning: only the strongest unicorns can fulfill this spell, if not, they will explode." read Twilight, knowing a great power will come to her after the spell was done.

             "Twilight, are you ready?" asked Spike nervously. Twilight nodded, and handed Spike the book. She ignited her horn and then cast the spell. She was engulfed in a black orb, and she was in pain. She finally after what seemed forever was released from the orb. Spike gasped.

             She made a mirror appear with her magic, and she gasped. For starters, her eyes were completely different! Aside from her unchanged irises, her eyes were a piercing green, with shadowy waves coming from the corners of her eyes. She saw the gaze of King Sombra, and was reminded of the time in the Crystal Empire. She then looked at her mane, which instead of the usual pink highlight which streaked through her mane and tail, it was a vivid sea foam green. The purple highlights were now darker, as so was her fur. She looked at her cutie mark, and instead of the usual pink, it was the same vivid green as her highlights, and also the white spikes around her star cutie mark, same with the small starts, were midnight black. She noticed some of her mane and tail where twisted waves, and she fell right back to the gaze of her new eyes. She smiled.

             She tried to use her magic, and a bunch of vines sprouted around her, and they caught hold of Spike.

             "Let go of me!" cried Spike. Twilight gasped and used her magic to retract them. She smiled again.

             "Twilight, are you feeling OK?" asked Spike.

             "I am feeling just vine." smiled Twilight.

             "Vine?" said Spike, confused.

             "Oh you haven't figured it out yet." said Twilight, rolling her eyes.

             "I guess not..." said Spike with a little attitude.

             "OK, here is the answer... My new name is Twivine, as I have a new power to control vines. I shall take over Equestria! Prepare for the Rain of Twivine!" excliamed Twivine.

Spike thought the last part was cheesy. "My friends will soon be turned to my side, and we shall rule the world. I shall think of who will be turned first, Spike." Twivine saw how nervous Spike was. "But it won't be you. Maybe Rarity, or Pinkie?" she pondered as she flew to the upstairs to lay down on her bed.

             "What has Twilight gotten herself into?" asked Spike to himself.

             "It's Twivine!" yelled Twivine from upstairs. Spike rolled his eyes.

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              Twivine found out what she would do. Spikesent a letter to Celestia, telling her of the recent events that happened. Minutes later, there was a knock on the door. Spike answered, shocked to find who was there.

               "Hello, Spike. Is Twilight here?" asked Celestia, looking worried.

               "IT'S TWIVINE FOR THE LAST TIME!" yelled a voice from upstairs.

               "Twilight! Come down here instantly! You shouldn't speak to your princess like this!" said Celestia angrily . Twivine stormed downstairs, with a face like thunder. Celestia gasped. "My dear student, what have you done?"

                "What I wanted!" yelled Twivine, shooting a beam at Celestia. She dodged it and shot one back, and Twilight shot another beam at Celestia's beam and it was at stalemate. Soon enough, Celestia's beam went over to Twivine, exploding when it got near her, and Twivine flew into her wall. Twivine took flight into the air and flew at Celestia and smacking her right in the face. Enraged, the white alicorn took flight and tried to blast Twivine so she would be stunned and Celestia could fix this mistake her faithful student had done to herself.

                "Playing dirty now, Princess?" said Twivine mockingly. Celestia growled in return and hit Twivine, getting a beam to the face in return. Celestia fell to the ground, and Twivine stood above her, laughing. The white alicorn took this chance and fired a powerful beam at Twivine, sending her flying. Twivine got up, and winced in pain. She growled.

               "This isn't over..." Twivine disappeared with Spike, leaving Celestia staring in awe where her student used to be. How could this happen?

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               "Ugh! I thought that spell would make me stronger than Celestia, but I'm only as strong as Cadance! Sure she's strong, but I need more strength to rule the world!" Twivine was pacing back and forth in the cave she was taking refuge in.

               "You will figure out what to do sometime, Twivine." said Spike.

               "I got it! The book named Ex Machina has all the spells! I can use it! It is located at the Starswirl Tower, and I need to steal it." said Twilight. "I will steal it next week tonight!" She laughed, and Spike was beginning to like the new Twilight. Maybe he would like more power, too. Maybe even fly!

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                 One say later, faster than she expected, Twivine was flying above the clouds to reach the Starswirl Tower. She got there in merely 5 minutes with the strength in her wings. She found that there was an open window exactly where the library was. She also saw the book where it usually was in the restricted section where only Celestia's personal students could go. Twivine reached for the book, but a dark blue aura surrounded her.

                 "Why art thou here in the darkest hour?" said Princess Luna, pulling her back. "Thou look familiar.

                 "That because I am! It's me, Twilight!" exclaimed Twivine.

                 "But you do not look exactly like yourself..." said Luna suspiciously.

                 "I need this book to undo a spell that made me look like this." lied Twivine.

                 "Then you may take it back to Ponyville." said Princess Luna. "It is a shame though, because you look much better like this." Luna walked away as Twilight flew back to Ponyville.

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                 "And she fell for it!" laughed Twivine as she ended the story of how she tricked Princess Luna to believing Twivine was trying to change herself back to normal. Spike smiled, thinking of how dumb Princess Luna was tonight. He knew a spell in there would give him some power, and Twivine promised to use it on him.

                "When are you using these spells?" asked Spike. Twilvine hesitated, and thought.

                "I will use them tomorrow morning at dawn." replied Twivine.

                "I can't wait to see who is first!" exclaimed Spike. Twivine was excited herself, to see that her friends would help her take over the world after some persuasion. Her friends loved her no matter what, so it would work. She chuckled, and went off to bed, as it was late at night and tomorrow would be a long day. She tucked in Spike, who was now comfortable about the new Twivine. She laid down and fell asleep.

Flutterbat

                       Fluttershy was tending to her animals, and she was humming a sweet song, not knowing a purple alicorn was standing right behind her.

                       "Hello, Fluttershy." said Twivine, with a book levitating right next to her.

                       "EEP!" squealed Fluttershy as she flew fast to the top of a tree. She looked down and gasped. "Twilight is that you?" she asked softly.

                       "It is me, and obviously you saw how I am now." replied Twivine. Fluttershy flew down, knowing this was her friend she could trust, or so she thought. "I think you are not in a good state, Fluttershy. You are just a weakling." Fluttershy gasped and looked as if she was going to cry. Twivine rolled her eyes. Her horn ignited and vines wrapped around Fluttershy.

                       "Twilight let me go!" said Fluttershy and added,"If you want..." but Twivine laughed.

                       "My name isn't Twilight, it's Twivine now!" declared Twivine. "You are now going to change as I had, and you will help me take over Equestria!" Fluttershy had burst into tears. Twivine pulled the book over to her, and saw how to make a vampire bat appear, and how to transform a pony into a vampony. She read over the 2 spells and smiled at Fluttershy. She ignited her horn and muttered words no pony could hear and cast the spell on Fluttershy. Fluttershy was encased in a pink case, like she had before. Soon, she came out of the case and was a different pony. Her yellow fur was a few shades darker, and was somewhat green. Her eyes were a piercing red, and her hair was all mangled up. Her wings which were once pegasus wings, were now bat like. Her ears looked like a bat's and she had sharp fangs. Her mane also was a few shades darker. Also, instead of a 3 butterfly cutie mark, it was now 3 bats.

                      "What did you do?" asked Fluttershy in the same voice, sounding tired. She looked at herself and gasped. "Not this again!" obviously remembering the last time she was like this. Twivine scowled.

                      "OK, you are not evil still..." said Twivine.

                      "Evil?! Oh no no no!" Fluttershy said. "I wouldn't want to cause anypony stress."

                      "Will you help me take over Equestria?" asked Twivine.

                      "I guess if my friend wants me too..." replied Fluttershy.

                      "Well you can't keep the name Fluttershy... Maybe you should be named Flutterbat." said Twivine.

                      "OK, if you want me to be named that..." said Flutterbat nervously. She didn't know what was going on. Was this a dream or reality?

                      Twivine found she needed more elements so she could take on any of the challenges that she will face when taking control of Equestria. She was an earth type and Fluttershy was a dark type... The next pony would need to have electricity powers... and she knew who it would be

Rainbow Dash

                 Rainbow was getting the next pony ready to be killed and then who she thought was Twilight appeared in front of her.

                 "Twilight, is that you?!" asked Rainbow nervously. Twivine nodded.

                 "Yes I am Twilight, but I prefer to be called Twivine, which is my new name." replied Twivine. "Also, what are you doing?"

                 "Uh..." Rainbow answered nervously. Twivine laughed.

                 "It's OK, I know what you are doing."

                 "Umm, Twivine, what happened to you?!" asked Rainbow.

                 "I used this spell I found in a book and it transformed me, but I still am not strong enough to defeat Celestia. I am trying to find the spell that can make me stronger than Cadence, but not as Luna and keep using it until I feel strong enough." replied Twivine, and she had started rambling.

                 "Uh, Twi, you're rambling..." said Rainbow meekly.

                 "Oh... OK, so I have a special offer for you." replied Twivine, embarrassed.

                 "What is it?" asked Rainbow, somewhat bored.

                 "Join Flutterbat and I to take over Equestria!" said Twivine.

                 "What's in it for me?" asked Rainbow.

                 "You will be the ruler of all the pegasi and I will make the Wonderbolts accept you into the team." answered Twivine.

                 "AWESOME! OK, that settles it. I am joining you guys!" said Rainbow happily. "Wait, who is Flutterbat?"

                 "You will see, now just follow me." said Twivine. They walked out of the factory and started flying toward Ponyville. Rainbow didn't know where she was going, until she saw Fluttershy's cottage. She landed and then Twivine knocked on the door. The pony who answered was a dark yellow pony with piercing red eyes, batlike wings and ears, and sharp fangs.

                 "Flutters, is that you?!" asked Rainbow nervously. When the dark yellow pony nodded Rainbow smiled. "You look 20% cooler!" Flutterbat rolled her eyes.

                 "It's nice to see you, Rainbow!" said Flutterbat happily. "I go by the name Flutterbat, but you can call me Flutters as you like too..."

                 "OK, so what are we going to do?" asked Rainbow. Twivine smiled, as she knew this was going well.