Obsolete

by Ph0b1a
Princess Celestia's subjects have become disloyal to her and all of Canterlot's Royalty and are turning Equestria into a dystopia. After the pressure becomes too much, Celestia can no longer take it and gives up hope.

Princess Celestia has been put through hell. With every minute it seems her subjects are growing more disloyal. After so long, one just simply falls off the edge after such mistreatment. When she gave in, everything mostly goes on Luna and Twilight.

One could never expect the ending of an immortal life, but worse yet does anypony even care?

This is my first FiMFic (really my first story ever) so it probably has a lot of problems. If you want to proofread/help with this, please let me know. Though if you are here to be a critic, do not I repeat DO NOT be cold! A lot of the writing in this was done during the last schoolyear, while I was under a lot of stress. I am still under stress and also still in a bad situation so please be courteous and refrain from being cold with me.

Teen
Incomplete
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
Sad
 
PTP

1050 words: Estimated 5 minutes to read

1 Chapter:

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