A New Town for Two New Ponies (remake)

by Mariofire1

Rating: everyone
Tags: Random, Slice of Life, Romance
Length: 1025

Two ponies have there way around love and there parent's death

two ponies Avery and Blaze have to work around there parent's death and find what they can about this new town that they live in

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2016-01-26 14:21:37 UTC

A New Town

Here we are Blaze said as they arrived in the new town of ponyville.The two looked around and saw the clouds of cloudsdalle with the pegasi in the sky doing there jobs .  and the many earth ponies and unicorns walking around. Also near by you could see the castle and canterlot. Hey what that Avery said pointing her hoof at a treehouse. Avery looked at Blaze as he shrugged. How about this you go and see what that is and I go and find a rental sign to find a new house. the two split up Avery sneakily went to the treehouse as Blaze looked around town for a sign or to build a house.

Introductions

Who are you three anyway Blaze said. were the cutiemark crusader's the pale filly said. Blaze face hoofed himself on your names he said. oh she said well im Applebloom and these are my friends this is Swettiebelle hi she said. Finally this is Scootaloo but she can't fly she looked down saddened. well I can teach you but not really but not now Blaze said blushing. who are you two Swettiebelle said. Im blaze witch my sis probably Avery yelled.  hey I needed too Avery said. Hey what's going on in here a yellow-orange mare came though the door. oh hi sis wait this is blaze and avery they mean no harm. Oh yeah than why is this outside she said holding up her lasso. all three filly's eyes widened and looked at Blaze and Avery. Ab's sis left minutes later she came back with a red stallion and said big mac get them out of our farm for trying  to hurt my sis. he came at him like Frankenstein blaze jumped and landing on his back he grabbed his neck than threw his out of the threes treehouse hurting him on a tree than said don't try me. umm ... blaze this is my sis Applejack the one you threw was my brother. opp's sorry he said holding a healing spell and throwing at big mac. umm hey blaze aren't you new." yeah he said" well Aj how about you take these two for a tour around ponyville. never she said. look we got on the wrong hoof so how about we restart im blaze putting out his hoof for a hoofshake Aj shook his hand well maybe I can hey do you have anywhere to live cause we can take you in for the night. that will be great cause our house wont be done by tomorrow. where are you parents Aj said. the two looked down saddened they umm ... died all of them gasped.

The Secrets

Why are your parents dead Ab said. well they died for a sickness. well  we can take yawl in if you like Aj said. its fine we can take care of ourselves Avery said No yawl can't AJ said. blaze than took out one of his eyes that was wired. what is that SB said. its my robot eye I got it at the age of 5 but I was fine. well were going to go bye. Blaze left with Avery and did things until the day set the two went to the barn house were the apples were. the two went to sleep the next day there house was made and was going on that tour with Aj.

Prologe

One day in Manehatten two ponies were trotting to get a ticket to there new town called ponyville. the two ponies were named Blaze and Avery both brother and sister.  they got there second's later the to huffed and said.

"Umm ... mister can we have two ticket's to ponyville said Blaze"."Sure twenty bit's said the stallion".Blaze sighed and gave the stallion twenty bit's.

"When's the train coming Avery asked.""It should be here in about now the stallion said" as the train pulled up."Thank you sir Avery said cutely".The two got on the train the train started and left than Avery sighed."What's wrong sis blaze said worried ".

"Well why are we leaving I kind of like Manehatten"."Yeah but dident you hate all the thing's you went though sis"."I know big bro but it was our home and we loved it"."I know I loved it too but didn't  hate the boys trying to get on you every chance they get"."Yeah but did didn't  you like that one filly"  Blaze blushed and said that not your business.

Avery giggled and rolled her eyes at him.The train finally  stopped at ponyville  and the two got out.Welp sis time to start a new he said walking towards  the town

The Filly's

Avery as she saw the treehouse jumped on the bottom of it to get a view but her vision was upside down and her mane flanged down as she watched.

There was a filly she was pale with a red mane, tail, and was an earth pony. As another filly rolled up on her scooter with wing's she was a orange filly and had purple mane and tail. As they said hello to a white filly with pink-white mane and tail.

  She dident know there names but she watched as they messed up with doing thing's and she giggled softly.

The three heard her and questioned it but she keep giggling at there mess ups. they saw her the pale filly said hey you get down here. Avery dropped down to one filly wacked her on the head as she dropped. she awoke to her tied with a lasso siting on a chair.

The orange filly said "what are you planning with diamond". "Who's diamond" Avery said. "You know who she" is the white filly said."

"I'll get my bother". "Than get him" the pale filly said. "BLAZE" Avery yelled than blaze finished writing his name and heard his sister and left quickly to her. He appeared at her side and said "what do you need sis" than his eyes widened at the three filly's and her sis in a chair. he than untangled the knot of the lasso and throw it away. "hey that was my sisters the pale filly said."