Heart Without A Beat

by ewejam

Rating: teen
Tags: Other, Tragedy, Big Macintosh, Gore, Crossover, Alternate Universe, Human, Sad, Main 6, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 8757

The fourth great ninja war has ended, orochimaru and the Akatsuki killed, but for naruto..........

The fourth great ninja war has ended, orochimaru is defeated, the Akatsuki killed, but for naruto, everything comes at a price.
-WILL ADD MORE CHARACTERS AND CATEGORIES AS STORY CONTINUES!

Published 2012-05-27 12:14:01 UTC
Last updated 2012-06-02 16:11:32 UTC

Everfree Forest

Pain.... Lots of pain.... Not as worse as before, but still rather painful. Everything was black, he couldn't see or hear anything. Everything was so dark, no stratch that, it wasn't dark, it was pure black, not as in unable to see anything, but as in a black blacker then the darkest of nights. It was a lot like when orochimaru used the infintite darkness justu on him, execpt he was in no danger and everything was so calm. If he would describe it, Naruto would say he lost all of his five sences, so how was he feeling pain?

"So what so we do with this one?"

"I don't know sister, he has such a good heart.... I think he deserves a second chance"

"So we should send him to the past?"

"No, then he would try to change it and there would be to much paperwork, I think we should send him to another universe.... mabye start over with a new life"

"What about his memories Kami?"

"Let him keep it. I like his wiser self better."

Who were those people? Wait.... did one of them call the other Kami? So he was listening to a conversation of the creator of worlds? ' well that proves I'm dead ', he thought depressingly. But what did they say about another universe? He didn't have anymore time to think as he suddenly found himself free falling from really high up, so high he could see an entire continent below him. The wind came as a surprise as it buffeted him, as just a moment ago, he was in the calm darkness. The pain also returned. The blinding sun did not help much. He felt weird, now that he knew that he couldn't do anything and his life was in fate's hands, he felt calm. Of course he did still feel the free falling sensation and the pain of his wounds, but his mind wasn't focused on it. He felt like he was a cloud blowing in the wind, with fate determining where he would end up. 'So this is what being a cloud feels like, shikamaru would be jealous' he chuckled in his mind. The sheer amount of force blowing at him soon became to much and he blacked out.

" Angel where are you? " A very worried yellow pegasus near the edge of the everfree forest called out. She then saw her bunny hopping into the everfree forest. "Angel come back! It's dangerous in the forest!" She yelled out in panic as she gave chase to the bunny.

The Everfree forest, a forest at the outskirts of the humble villige know as ponyville, was either dark and gloomy or light and beautiful. This always depends on the time you look at it. From the night, it is a dark forest with almost no sunlight because of the thick shurberry, so errie that you could hear the falling of a leaf, and with so many dangerous creatures, some that could even kill a pony with a single glance, literally. However, if you look at it from day, it's a peacful forest full of peaceful animals and trees that wave along with the wind, as if they were dancing to it. Even though it is not really dangerous at day, many ponies avoid it at all times due to the amount of times somepony went in but never came out. Naruto's last thoughts before losing consciousness was ' so I'm landing in a peaceful forest, dosen't seem to bad, I just hope I land in a pond '.

" Angel, where are you? " The yellow pony was starting to panic as she was never this far in the forest before. She was following Angle's footprints. She soon ran into a clearing and saw Angel staring at the pond. " Oh Angel! " Fluttershy sighed in relief as she walked toward him, " The forest is very dangerous you know! No carrot jucie for a week! " She scolded, but noticed that the bunny paid her no mind. " Angel? " Fluttershy asked a little more gentlely when she saw him staring up at the sky, and followed suit, to see a figure falling down from the sky rapidly before hitting the pond with a giant splosh, drenching them both

Meeting of the Mane Six part 1

Previously

"Angel?" Fluttershy asked more gently, and saw the bunny looking up. Following suit, she looked up to find a figure towards the pond at a high speed, with a loud splash, it drenched them both.

Fluttershy let out a small eep as she was slammed into a tree from the force of the wave, almost breaking it. Once her head stopped spinning, she looked up and was relieved to find Angel unharmed. She took a few small steaps toward the now empty pond and peeked in. What she saw horrified her. She saw a creature of some kind. From how the bottoms limbs were longer than the front ones, she guessed it walked on two legs. It had no tail, and a blond mane. It also seemed to be wearing an orange jumpsuit. That was not what horrified her however. The reason was the amount of wounds it had. There was a sword sticking out of it's stomach, around 50 or so small, sharp weapons that looked like knives sticking out of its back, and a giant gash in it's side. Fluttershy did take care of animals. Yes she healed brokers legs and such, but what she saw before her was to much, she had never seen so much blood at once, Fluttershy turned around and vomited. "Oh sweet celestia! What happened to you you poor thing!" She said to herself as she carefully picked the creature up along with Angel and made her way back to the cottage.

katon! Goukakyuu no justu!

Sasuke blasted a giant fireball at orochimaru, setting his head on fire. 'It's over...' he thought to himself. "kukukuku, to be able to use sharingan so early in life, you certainly are interesting sasuke-kun" Sasuke was shocked to see orochimaru with his skin peeling, and underneath with a new layer of skin. 'what the hell is this guy?' Sasuke was starting to panic. That man was so much stronger than the three genine combined. "J-Just who the hell are you?!" Sasuke said aloud, with obvious fear in his voice. "My name is orochimaru, remember it!" Orochimaru suddenly made a hand seal and his head stretched toward Sasuke in the blink of an eye and bit him.

"SASUKE!" Naruto yelled as he sat up but quickly fell back down from the pain. 'It's just a dream' he thought to himself over and over. Once he got his breathing under control, he looked around. He was on a red couch inside what he guessed to be a cottage. The first thing he thought was 'holy shit there's animals everywhere!' and then 'I haven't sat on something so comfy for years!' He suddenly heard a peep. Turning around, he looked to see a shakeing cupboard. "Is someone there?" he asked and got a quiet squeak in return. "I won't hurt you" he tried to sound as convincing as possible. "o-okay" the voice was so tiny even naruto with his kyuubi sences had trouble hearing. And put of closet poped a yellow horse. 'what the fuck?!' naruto asked himself, eyes bulging outward. 'okay, calm down, I heard during kami's conversation that I would be sent to another universe, so they probably never seen a human either' "ummmmm, hi, my name is Naruto, Naruto Uzumaki"

author"s note
Sorry for the short chapters but school is being a bitch to me right now. Next one will be longer.

Meeting the Mane Six part 3

I'm having a new layout from now on
Human/pony speaking-I can't believe it's not butter
Human/pony thinking-I can't believe it's not butter
Kyuubi/other demons speaking-I can't believe it's not butter
On with the story-----

The sun was setting in konoha, and a very pissed of blonde was cleaning the hokage faces of paint.
"And your not going home until every single scrap of paint is cleaned"
The blonde boy grumbled in return.
When is he going to grow up? Iruka thought, sighing.
"Say naruto, if you clean these faces, I'll treat you out for ramen"
"REALLY?! YOU GOT YOURSELF A DEAL IRUKA-SENSEI!!!"
He's very energetic when it comes to food Iruka chuckled quietly.
Iruka remembered the day he talked to Sarutobi.

--flashback--

"Hokage-sama, you can't be serious! To make me teach that, that demon!"
"I'm quite serious Iruka, I wish for you to become his homeroom for the academy."
"But.....why?"
"Because he is a lot like you Iruka, he has no parents to love him, just like you"

--flashback end--

Iruka stared at Naruto as they sat at Ichiraku's, pondering to himself about the boy. Perhaps he really was just an innocent boy? After all, if he was the demon, the village would already be destroyed.
"Finally!" Naruto exclaimed as a bowel of hot steamy ramen was put on the table.
"Thank you for the-WATCH OUT!!!!

Naruto was abruptly wrenched out of his peaceful dream by a cyan blur knocking him of the tree onto the forest floor.
"huh?"
That was all naruto could say as a cyan pegasus rushed up to him.
"Oh my Celestia I'm so sorry can you forgive me I was flying and trying to do a sonic rainboom and I lost balance and crashed to you are you okay are-
"It's okay, just be more careful next time" Naruto said, trying to reassure the cyan pony that he was alright.
After a few long minuets of Naruto trying to calm the pony down, they were walking, or in the pegasus's case, trotting through the forest in awkward scilence.
"What's your name? Mine is Rainbow Dash."
A fitting name Naruto thought as he noticed her rainbow mane and tail.
"Naruto, Naruto Uzumaki"
"Soooooo, what are you?" They pony asked him with curious eyes.
"I'm what you call a human, I found myselve here a few hours back, falling out of the sky and got found by some ponies, who are trying to help he find a solution to how I ended up here."
"Wait, so your telling me you just fell out of the sky?"
"Possibly"
"I don't believe you" Rainbow Dash scoffed.
Their conversation was interrupted by two voices.
"Naruto? Are you there?" A quiet voice called out.
"Naruto! Where are you?" A louder one called out.
"Twillight! Fluttershy! Is that you?" Rainbow Dash asked.
The two ponies emerged from some shrubbery.
"Rainbow Dash? What are you doing here?"
"Oh I was just flying and crashed into Naruto here."
"Naruto! Where have you been? You've been gone for three hours!" The purple pony exclaimed tiredly.
"Oh, ummmmmm I kinda fell asleep and Rainbow Dash here crashed into me while flying" Naruto replied sheepishly.
"You two know him?" The now confused Rainbow Dash asked.
"I met Naruto when I was looking for Angel in the forest and he fell out of the sky" Fluttershy said in a shy voice
"And I met him when Fluttershy took him to me to find out about how he ended up here." Twillight added.
"Wait, so are you from another universe? That is so cool!" The excited pony exclaimed, and started bombarding him with questions.
"Are there ponies where you come from? Can some humans fly? Can-
"Dashie? I think we should gather the girls, I'll explain once we get back to my libary"
Naruto looked at Twillight, with a thankful look on his face and mouth out a thank you.

--On the way to the libary--
"So tell me about yourselves, what are your likes, dislikes, and dreams?" Naruto asked, quoting from what Kakashi said when he was still genin. Rainbow Dash was the first to reply.
"I like flying, praticeing tricks, and hanging out with my friend! I don't like disloyal people and my dream is to one day join the wonderbolts!"
She reminds me of myself He chuckled quietly.
"Wonderbolts?" Naruto asked with a raised eyebrow.
"Yeah! There're the best fliers in Equestria!"
"Well that's very ambitious Rainbow, so what about you Twillight?"
"Oh, well my likes are researching, reading, and hanging out with friends, my dislikes are things that I can't solve, such as a hard puzzle, and my dream is.... well I never really thought of it really."
"Ok what about you Fluttershy?"
"oh........ I like taking care of animals and talking with my friends, I dislike ponies who hurt my friends or animals, and my dream is to mutter mutter mutter"
"Could you repeat that? Naruto asked
"mutter mutter mutter"
"wha?"
Naruto was surprised, he had extra sharp sences, even better than kiba's and this was the first time he met someone this quiet! She was even shyer than Hinata! Naruto's musing was interrupted by Twillight.
"Sorry, but Fluttershy is rather embarrassed about saying her dreams, not even we know it"
"Oh, that explains it" Naruto nodded in understanding, as they reached the Libary.

Meeting the Mane 6 part 4

Naruto decided to take a nap while waiting for Twillight's friends to arrive.
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Naruto was standing in Konoha town square, with villagers surrounding him at all sides. He vaguely realized that his body was once more in his younger form, but did not react to it. The night was clear, with fireworks blasting away in the night sky, adding to the already festive mood of the village. All around him, people chatted away, it was enough to make even Sasuke giddy with joy. He walked through the village, enjoying the mood and smell of food in the air. He suddenly saw a head he recognized to be as his former academy teacher Iruka. "Iruka sensei!" Naruto yelled out in joy as he ran toward his beloved teacher. The chatter suddenly stopped and the fireworks dissapeared. It was as if time itself froze. The sky turned red and the crowd starting moving in a pattern, eventually swallowing Iruka whole into the mass of moving bodies as they started to form a circle around him. He could hear mutterings in the crowd and recieved lots of icy glares. Among the voices, he could hear things such as:

"demon brat"
"why is he alive"
"he should just go die"

The mutterings increased in volume as the crowd of people closed in on him.

"demon"
"Demon"
"Demon!"
"DEMON"
"DEMON!"

"S-stop! Why are you doing this?!" Naruto's child self asked in vain.
The villagers got closer and closer, until eventually they began to spin in a circle, faster and faster, and everything was just one dark blur. The child Naruto fell on his knees and started crying.

"WAKE UP"

Naruto fell of the couch in the libary and looked up to see six extremely worried ponies.
It was just a dream Naruto thought, trying to calm himself.
"Don't worry, I'm fine, I just had a nightmare" Naruto tried to lie as convincingly as possible.
"Are you sure? You were screaming in you sleep" Fluttershy asked in an extremely worried tone.
"Yeah, I'm fine. So who are these ladies?" Naruto asked, trying to avoid the subject
"Oh, yes! Naruto, this is Applejack" Twillight said, pointing to a yellow pony with a blonde mane.
"Pleasure ta meet cha" The pony said in a southern accent, shakeing Naruto's hand so hard he was sure it would fall of.
"This is rarity" Twillight gestured to a white unicorn.
"Oh hello darling, it is such a pleasure to meet you! If you don't mind I would love to study your clothing, I have never seen such a marvelous style!" Rarity said, marveling at his hokage attire, which consisted of a cape, a black shirt, and a fishnet shirt, which surprisingly were still in perfect condition after his fall from the sky incident.
"And finally, this here is Pinke Pie" Twillight said, now waving towards a pink pony.
"OhhimynameispinkepiedoyoulikecupcakesoranykindofcandywhydoyoulooksoweirddoyoulikepartiesGASPOHWAITYOURNEWANDISTILLHAVEN'TPREPAREDAWELCOMETOPONYVILLEPARTYYETWHATSHOULDICALLITIKNOWI'LLCALLITWELCOMETOPONHVILLEWHATEVERYOUAREPARTY!!!!" The hyperactive pink fuzz ball exclaimed as she ran out of the libary by jumping through a window.
"uhhhhhhhhhhh......" Naruto managed to get out. "Did she say all that in one breath?"
"Oh that's just Pinke being herself, you'll get used to it eventually" Twillight said sighing.
"Well, I guess we'll be going then, by the way, where will you be staying Naruto?" Fluttershy asked.
"Oh he can stay here, I'll conjure an extra bed for him" Twillight replied.
"Excuse me" Naruto said, still bewildered.
How the fuck did she say all that in one breath? Naruto wondered, as he went deeper into the libary. She seemed to have more energy than a drunk Lee on suger high, and the time that happened he almost destroyed Konoha.

--author's note--
I really need someone to tell me if they want one giant chapter per one to two days or two to three small ones per day

Diamond Dog Invasion

"Everything is going as planned sir"
"Excellent! Soon, I shall make those ponies understand the true meaning of chaos!"
"Sir, there is one small problem. There seems to be a new arrival to ponyville. He seems to be some kind of bipedal creature that speaks. According to our spies, he is called Naruto Uzamaki and.... well.... your not going to believe this sir, but he seems to have arrived here from falling out of the sky.
Hmmmm.... that IS intresting... I will have to test his abilities, see if he is a threat... send in a group of diamond dogs to raid the village and see what he can do!
"Yes sir!"

-Ponyville Libary-

Naruto was reading up on some books that introduced the basic concepts of magic. Of course, Twillight did explain it to him, but he wanted to see the theory for himself. He had to admit, it was quite similar to justu, though this seemed weaker than what chakra could do. It seemed as if basic magic was just to be able to levitate objects, and creating clones, which were acadamy level justu, seemed to only be able to be used by advanced users, and even then they were rather unstable and couldn't last for more than an hour or so. He chuckled in amusement. If the day came when he had to use an A rank justu, he would love to see the suprised faces of the ponies. He decided to go into the forest and practice some techniques.

-Forest-

Naruto was in a forest clearing in the shape of a circle that he made with an earth justu. He started out by practicing taijustu he went over the different styles in his head and how to do them as he practiced on a statue he made from stone. He decided to end with a new attack he came up with. Naruto ran up to the statue and released a barrage of wind enfused punches at the stone, also infusing the stone with chakra so it wouldn't break. He ended the stream of hits with a lightning infused uppercut, sending it high into the air. Because of his constant training with Kyuubi, he eventually mastered all the basic elements, so now he could easily use all of them as if he had an affinity for all of the elements. He then jumped up into the air striaght above the statue and sent a blur of punches so fast it would make Gai jealous, ending it with a yell of "Danmaku No Za Kaminari Ryu!"
( Barrage of the lightning dragon) and sent the statue flying back down with a lightning infused downward kick in the face.
He looked at the damage and nodded in satisfaction at the rubble remains of the statue and the large crater it made as he walked away back to ponyville.

-Libary-

Twillight was currently writing a letter to Celestia. The scratches of her pen were the only sounds in the quiet libary.

Dear Princess Celestia

Today, I have met a strange creature. His name was Naruto and he claimed to be some sort of biped creature called a human. He also says that he thinks he might be from another dimension entirely, with proof being from Fluttershy, as she saw him fall out of the sky. If you could, I would like to ask your help in trying to figure out how he ended up here.

Your Faithful Student,

Twillight Sparkle

P.S. He seemed to be hiding some things from me. He had a sad look in his eyes, those eyes resembled the ponies I met who suffered much in life. I would appreciate it if you could try and help me get him to open up more to us. Thank you.

While Naruto took the long thread back to Ponyville, he thought about what he would do now in this new dimension. He obviously wasn't going to return to Konoha, as there was nothing left there to return to, so mabey he could start a new life here? That would also have some drawbacks, as he knew that as of now, most of the civilians were afraid of him, as they never had seen something like him before. He sighed in frustration as he had to yet again gain the trust of a village.
"At least they don't hate you kit"
Shut up Kyuubi, not in the mood
"Yeah well it's not like it's my fault, you couldn't handle the yokai!" The fox said, shrugging innocently in his mind.
He's right Naruto thought in depression as he continued along.
"Cheer up kit, at least in this place, not everyone hates your guts" The fox said optimistically.

-Outskirts of Ponyville-

"Are the dogs prepared?"
"Yes sir"
"Good, we attack....... NOW!" A diamond dog alpha male said as the group of 40 diamond dogs started charging at the small village.

-Ponyville-

"We're being attacked!" A panicking pony yelled.
As soon as they saw the amount of Dogs that were headed this way, everybody started panicking, people were running around the streats, the smart ones barricading themselves in, while others shouted "We're doomed!"
Twillight was in shock. How had someone manage to get this many diamond dogs out here at once? They did attack, yes, but never in such a large group! She quickly ran back to the libary and started scribbling down words furiously on the nearest piece of paper she could find to inform Celestia.(poor paper)

-Ponyville Outskirts-

Something was wrong, very wrong. There shouldn't be ponies tuning around panicking as if the world was ending, there are not supposed to be this many destroyed houses, and there should absolutely NOT be an army of 40 dogs things causing the sence before him.
"Oi! Whadda ya think your doin trying to attack this place? Scram!"
The dogs seemed to just notice Naruto as they turned around and jumped into a battle stance while the dogs surrounded him.
A dog bigger than the rest which Naruto assumed to be the leader growled.
"You best stay out of our way creature, I don't care how strong you are, you can't defeat 40 of us together"
"Why don't you find out for yourselves?" Naruto scoffed, ignoring Twillight's pleas to surrender and the shocked look of the village ponies.
"As you wish"
Suddenly, all 40 dogs closed In at an alarming rate and formed a tight circle with Naruto in the center. The leader, still thinking him as not a threat sent one dog with a spear to battle him. The dog charged, though to Naruto, it seemed as it was slow motion. He easily doged the spear and did a pivot to the dogs back, choping his neck, and possibly breaking it. The leader growled and all the dogs starting attacking. Naruto doged left and right easily, breaking a paw here, punching one in the face there. He kicked one dog in the stomach, hearing the breaking of bones, launching it into a group of 15 or so more dogs, easily dispatching of half of the group. Naruto smirked.
"I think it's time we brought this up a notch"
He jumped into the air, waving a few hand signs.
Katon! Ryuka no Jutsu!
A giant dragon made of flame blasted out of Naruto's mouth, burning all the dogs to a crisp.
As he landed, he smiled at the shocked ponies.
"Someone mind explaining this to me?"
A glowing light suddenly appeared, blinding Naruto and the other ponies. As he gained his sight back, he saw a glowing white pony with wings and a horn.
"Where are the dogs?" Celestia asked.
She looked around, confused, and saw the scorched crater and naruto standing in between a bunch of unconscious diamond dogs.
"My dear Twillight, do you mind explaining?"
"O-oh course princess!" Twillight stammered, she was about to talk before she was interrupted by Naruto.
"Talk over food?"
The mane six nodded dumbly and followed Twillight and Celestia to Sugarcube Corner.

One explanation of Naruto later

Celestia nodded.
"So you are the human Twillight informed me about, well now that that's out of the way, why don't you explain to me how you were able to defeat 40 diamond dogs by yourself?"
Naruto was about to explain but Twillight talked before him.
"It was amazing princess! He jumped into the air, and he did these weird hand signs and said something in a weird launage, then he breathed fire! And it even formed into a-"
"Perhaps I should explain?" Naruto asked, not wanting to hear more of the ramble.
"Very well Naruto" Celestia said, ushering the ponies to be quiet, and getting quite a few listeners.
"Alright, this is a dosey, so I'll only explain the basics of chakra, the rest would take to long. From my universe, we don't use magic, we use something called chakra, which I guess you could call inner energy or ki, it depends. Chakra is the result when you mix the spiritual and physical energy in the body. This chakra can take on froms of five elements, earth, wind, fire, lightning, and water. Of course, it dosen't start out as one of those elements, it starts out as normal chakra, which is a kind of blue, wavy substance. To form it into one of the elements, you have to harness the power, different hand signs mean different things, for example, if you wanted to do a fire attack, you would have to do the fire hand sign, which is tiger" He showed them the sign for tiger. "Also, people can only be able to use certain types of elements. This is called an element affinity, it means he or she can use the element much more easier than others, they could still use techniques that aren't in there element affinity, though it would be much harder to do. I myself have gained an affinity with all elements, though how I got it is rather personal." Naruto said, remembering what the Kyuubi did to him. "There are also pure chakra attacks, which include illusion, teleportation, and kawarimi, which is a justu that can replace your body with something else, like a log. That would be mainly used to escape justu and attacks that were aimed for you. These techniques, or justu are sepeated into five ranks, D, C, B, A, and S. D rank is the weakest, usually being something like a transformation justu and S rank are the most powerful, most of not all of them able to kill people. Some are even so powerful that the side affect of using it means death. Well there's the basics of chakra, I'll go into more detail if I have to use the more in depth techniques." Rainbow Dash put a pout face,
"Aw man! Whadda ya mean you won't tell us how you got specialties with all elements?! I wanna know!" She put out puppy eyes.
"Nope, sorry, it's personal." Naruto said cheerfully
Rainbow Dash grumbled a little before telling them she had to go work at the weather team. One by one, the other ponies left along with Celestia and Naruto decided to go back to the libary.

Twillight was very curious. Naruto was becoming more and more mysterious, and she wanted to find out more about him, though every chance she took to ask about his past, he never did tell him, so she decided that tonight, she would read his memories. While she did feel rather guilty invading his personal memories, she decided she needed to know, so she set her priorities straight that she WOULD read his memories no matter what.

"Well how did it go?"
"Ummm...sir.... He destroyed the diamond dogs completely by himself and didn't even break a sweat sir..."
"Intresting.... I shall get rid of this pest, send in a hydra and make it attack tommorow afternoon! I don't care how strong he is, he can't match a hydra.
"Sir!"

Authors's Note

Sorry if the lightning dragon's barrage is incorrect, I'll try to improve my Japanese as I continue writing"

Painful Memories

Twillight felt another stab of guilt as she entered Naruto's room while he was asleep. This time, she was also worried, as she had not practiced reading memories much, since it was never needed, so was rather bad at it, but curiosity got the better of her as she put her horn on Naruto's head and began the spell. The world around her suddenly started to swirl. She found herself falling in darkness. She eventually gained her sight back to find herself in a white room.
"Huh?"
Twillight looked around in confusion. She has tried the spell multiple times and the memories would always come to her mind, she never ended up in a place like this before. Her thoughts were interrupted by a dark and forbidding voice.
Hmmmmm, Twillight Sparkle, don't you know that it's impolite to try and read one's memories?"
Twillight could only let out a terrified croak. The voice sounded demonic, as if It could kill her just by putting enough killing intent into the voice, it made her feel like the was a mountain compressing her from all sides.
Well...., since you are so curious about his past, than I guess you could SEE FOR YOURSELF!!! The voice roared
Suddenly, a grey door appeared in front of Twillight, sucking her into the hazy red.

-Konoha-

On the roof of Konoha, sat a young Naruto and Mizuki.
"You know Naruto, Iruka dosen't hate you, he's just strict" The jounin commented.
"Humph, yeah right" The blonde scoffed in return.
"Well, there is a secreat to passing the exams"

-Forest-

"That's right brat! You are the reincarnation of the Kyuubi! The village will never love someone like you!" Mizuki laughed maniacly.
"SHUT UP!"
Red chakra started to build around Naruto.
"DIE DEMON!" Mizuki yelled, throwing a Fuma Shuriken at Naruto.
He closed his eyes and waited for the pain. Shhhkkkk Naruto heard the sound of metal sliding into flesh, though did not feel pain. He slowly peeked open his eyes.
"I-Iruka-sensei?"

-Konoha-

The sun was setting in Konoha, bathing the streets with a crimson red color. In a narrow alleyway sat a boy surrounded by angry villagers.
"P-please! I didn't do anything to you!" Naruto pleaded in vain.
His cries if innocence just seemed to anger the villagers even more
"You didn't do anything? YOU DIDN'T DO ANYTHING?! You know what you did you demon!"
The mob started pressing against the child. The beating had begun.

-Valley of the End-

At the valley of the end stood to figures.
"Come back sasuke! Don't go to that Pedo-snake Orochimaru!"
"Tch, the village has nothing for me, I need power so that I can defeat my brother, and Orochimaru can offer it."

"Humph, weak as ever I see." Sasuke stated, looking at the limp body of Naruto.
Red chakra suddenly started forming around Naruto.
Fine! If you won't come peacefully then I'll force you! If I have to break every bone in your body I will!"
Sasuke laughed.
"Hmmm, so you also have a special ability like me, no matter! I'll show you that no matter what, I'll always be more special than you!" Sasuke said evily
SASUKE!
NARUTO!
The two figures clashed in a shower of red and black chakra.

"s-sasuke, why?" Naruto asked feebly.
"To gain power" Sasuke said in a voice colder than ice.
Sasuke forced his hand out of Naruto's chest and walked away, leaving him to die.

-4th Great Ninja War-

Naruto and what was left of the rookie nine fought against a wave of sound nin. Ino had died in an ambush by orochimaru and tenten hid died from a fight with a reincarnated Sasori.
Need help? the Kyuubi asked.
Gimme half of you chakra
Are you sure? That much youkai could make you lose control
Its my only option
Naruto suddenly felt a massive chakra spike and with a roar, engaged in visions combat, killing everyone, including his friends and allies.

-Naruto's Mindscape-

Twillight stared at the memories in horror.
How can fate be so cruel to somepony? She thought.
As she turned to leave, a voice cut through in the darkness.
If you leave, Naruto's going to experience everything you just saw The kyuubi warned.
Twillight paled. That mean he would find out! What would she do? What if he hated her after this? She hoped with all his heart he would understand.

-Libary-

Naruto awoke screaming. He fell off his bed, clutching his head in agony as memories flooded in front of him. He saw the memories of his childhood, the death of Jaryia, and all his other memories in his previous life. As the pain faded, he looked up to see a horrified and guilty looking Twillight.
"What. Did. You. Do?" Naruto asked silently.
"I-I was curious about your past... and.... I used a spell to read your memories" She said quietly.
"I'm sorry" Twillight added silently, though Naruto was already gone.
Naruto jumped out the window, not caring about the glass stabbing him, and landed in a tree. He started tree hopping as fast as he could away from Ponyville.
Just when I'm about to make friends to, they probably hate me now he thought bitterly as he finally arrived at a pond after 30 minuets of hopping. He sat down and did the only thing that came to mind. He sat down next to a tree, curled up, and cried.

Goddess vs Demon

Dear Princess Celestia

I think you should come to Twilight's, she's not doing well. I awoke to find a broken window, Naruto gone, and her crying. Apparently, she got curious and decided to take a peek in Naruto's memories since he wouldn't tell her about it and unfortunately, the memories wern't so pleasant, in fact, they were pretty bad. I wouldn't know since she didn't tell me what she saw, but after seeing it, she refused to tell us about his past, claiming that they were to personal and that Naruto wouldn't want it. I would like for you to assist us in trying to get Twilight to explain exactly why she won't tell us about his past and in finding Naruto.

Your faithful student's apprentice,

Spike

Spike finished the letter and sent it to Celestia with a puff of green fire. He then went back to the living room to try and get Twilight to explain.
"Comon Twi! I know that you saw sumthin bad and we just wanna know!" Applejack protested to Twillight, who shook her head.
"I'm sorry Applejack! What I saw was just to personal for me to just tell you, plus from reading his memories, I could tell that if any of us knew, he wouldn't want us to spread it!" She said, sighing in exasperation.
Rainbow Dash had now lost her patience and walked up to Twilight.
"Oh come on Twi! Just spill the beans already! It's not like we'll judge him for his past! So what did he do? Injure somepony? So what? He seems kind enough and I'm pretty sure from his attitude that he would be sorry of it anyway!"
At hearing this, Twillight turned and glared at her.
"That's exactly what he's afraid of Rainbow, he's afraid of us judging him and I could understand why!"
"Yeah well since we aren't gonna, why don't you tell just us what you saw?! Rainbow yelled back.
"No! There was a reason he didn't tell us! He had a reason to not tell us you know! You think that he didn't see how kind we were and that we wouldn't judge him from the past? He did! He had reason to do it! Twilight yelled back, turning her head away from Rainbow.
Rainbow was about to resort when a light filled the room, blinding them all.
"So Twillight, tell me what's wrong." Said a very worried Celestia, stepping out of the flash along with Luna.

-Cave-

"Sir!"
Hmm?
"It seems that Naruto has fled from Ponyville. According to my spies, it seems that Celestia's student Twillight Sparkle tried to read his memories, and Naruto found out. I don't know what happened, but it caused him to try and escape to the forest.
Well, that IS good news. I know the power the boy has, mabey I could trick him into doing my dirty work for me!

-Everfree-

Naruto was lying on the grass, drowning in his own sorrow.
Now that they know that I'm a jinchuuriki, they'll never accept me He thought in misery.
He had shut the Kyuubi out when it tried to talk to him, and he could still feel it it trying to break the barriers he set.
KIT! LISTEN TO- The Kyuubi was shut out as Naruto sent out another barrage of barriers.
Naruto would of continued to wallow in misery, but was interrupted by another voice surrounding him in the forest.
Hmmmm, so they kicked you out of Ponyville huh?
"Who are you?" Naruto asked with wariness.
They will never except you, you are trash, you can never be a part of Ponyville The voice whispered to him sadistically.
The voice seemed to hallow him of all hope, as if it was draining him of his happiness. Suddenly, six figures came out into the clearing. Naruto recognized them as the mane six, though something was of. They were literally dripping with malice, it was even worse than back in the village!
"I should of known you were a demon!" Twillight said with an evil look on her face.
"I should of left you to die when I found you" Fluttershy said right after, with an angry look.
Before Naruto could say anything, the ponies jumped on him and started beating him. It felt much worse than the beatings in the village, because they were his friends just yesterday. With every insult they said, he felt worse. He could feel himself losing control of the Kyuubi's demonic chakra, as it fought for control in his mind.
Oi! Kit! What are you doing! Stop pulling my chakra! The foxed yelled to no avial

kill
Kill
Kill!
KILL!

Red chakra blasted arounded Naruto. His nails grew longer and shaper, his pupils changed into slits while his eye slowly faded from the once brilliant blue to crimson red, and his whisker marks enlargened. With a mighty roar, he blasted away the six ponies and he started running back towards Ponyville, tearing all the trees and animals down along the way. Back at the pond, the dead bodies of the mane six turned to black smoke, and out of it came a certain Draconequus who chuckled evilly.
Its going to be a pain trying to tame him, then again, I never did know he had a demonic side. He sighed, examining his claws.

Meanwhile, in another part of the everfree forest, we find two alicorns.
"Naruto! We do not wish to hurt you! Please come out!" Celestia yelled.
She looked at Luna with a sad face.
"Do you think we'll find him Luna? And even if we do, what do we do if he hates us?"
"Don't worry sister, I'm sure that he is very forgiving from what you described of him"
The two sisters couldn't be anymore wrong, as Twillight did not tell them anything about Naruto's memories, saying it was to personal, thus did not know about the Kyuubi.
A sudden roar come from the two Alicorns' right as the trees were obliterated in a red light, blinding the two princesses. When Celestia opened her eyes, she was shocked at what she saw before her.
"N-Naruto?" (Wouldn't you hate me if I ended it here)

The sight before the two princesses screamed evil as they both felt the massive amount of killing intent radiating from Naruto. Celestia also noticed his eyes were different. No longer were they the blue, kind eyes of the ocean, but demonic red eyes with slitted pupils. Never before had they feel such evil from anypony or creature. It felt even worse than Discord! While the chaos god didn't kill or harm anypony, just caused havoc open towns like forming chocolate rain, the Naruto right now seemed as if he wanted to go and tear out the throats of any living thing he saw. With a mighty roar, it charged the two sisters.

-Insert battle music-

Naruto charged at Luna with breakneck speed with a rasangan, which was blocked by Celestia, followed by a spiked energy ball sent by Luna, which hit him straight on since Celestia held him down with a levitation spell. He was sent flying into the trees. He got up a few seconds later, his worlds already healed, as if the damage was never done. Before the princesses could speak, he aimed a giant fireball at them, which Luna managed to deflect back to him. He sent five more fireballs at the returned fireball, causing it to grow bigger, and kicked it toward Celestia. She managed to dodge it, though the attack did destroy a chunck of the forest, She turned around and charged him, while Luna enhanced her speed and strength. Naruto jumped into the air, sending a giant beam of red chakra towards Celestia, which was blocked by with the combined efforts of the two goddesses. Luna charged a fire spell while Celesria charged a wind spell, they both released at once, forming a giant flaming blast that they sent full speed toward naruto. Naruto raised his hand and the red aura around him increased to a giant red claw, and the the princess' surprise, catches the giant fireball! He then threw it back towards the princesses at twice the speed, blasting them both. Celestia's mind was working overdrive as she landed.
How did he do that? She thought just before she blacked out.

SCREAT SSS CLASS JUSTU! CLIFFHANGER NO JUSTU-

-author's note-

I changed the diamond dog invasion chapter a little at the main parts. Those are the invasion and the explanation of chakra. Cheak it out if you want.

Thinking About the Past

Naruto slumped against a tree, next to a hundred or so piled up dead bodies of leaf, sand, and sound shinobi, and sighed inwardly. He could taste the rich, metallic blood in his mouth, and could see a lot of it all over his body, though more than half of it weren't his. ' Why don't I feel pain? ' He wondered to himself. As an answer to that question, he suddenly felt as if there were a hundred Kunai Sticking out of his back and someone stabbed him in the stomach with a sword, though it was true. He remembered the feeling of adrenaline as he battled the sound, not caring at all of the wounds he suffered as the kyuubi took over, slaying hundreds of sound nin without mercy, his comrades trying to stop him, and killing them, if he lived he would never forget the feeling of dread when he realized he killed all his allies in his blood frenzy. Yes, orochimaru and the Akatsuki where now dead, but so where Sakura, Shikamaru, Kakashi, Neji, Lee, Gai, and all his other friends. Hinata, especially Hinata..... He could clearly remember her scream as he ripped her head of her shoulders. He always knew that she had a crush on him, but he ignored her and went after Sakura, though he did start to become lovers with Hinata over the course of five years, he never did take her out on a date, in fact, he rarely talked to her at all.

He chuckled painfully as he realized the irony of the situation. He promised to protect all those presious to him, but at the end, they were slayed by his own hands. He looked down and examined his wounds. He had orochimaru's sword sticking out of his stomach, fifty or so kunai sticking out of his back, a hole in his side form sasuke's chidori, and 2 more kunai sticking out of his left knee. He saw that even if he were to survive the injuries, he would spend the rest of his life on a bed, but that was highly unlikely, seeing that konoha and suna were completely destroyed, not a single sand or leaf ninja left, well.... Except for him of course, though it probably wouldn't be long until he died. His sight started to dim, " so this is it " he said to himself, as he fell forward, he remembered Jiraiya, his godfather, and his parents Minato and Kushina. " Mom, dad.... I can finally meet you.... ". He sighed quietly as he fell forward, his only regret that he couldn't fulfill Sakura's promise of bring back Sasuke and not spending more time with Hinata, though the last one would change once he went to the afterlife. The ground came nearer.... and nearer.... then, everything went black.

Meeting the Mane 6 part 2

"ummm, hi, my name is Naruto, Naruto Uzumaki" Naruto tried to sound as friendly as possible. "M-my name is F-fluttershy" The yellow pony replied quietly. "Can you tell me where I am?" Naruto asked. "Your in P-ponyville" Ponyville? That was a weird name to naruto, then again, they were probably all ponies so this town might of been named after it. 'Sweet kami where did you send me?' Naruto thought silently. "Ummmm, I think you should meet my friend T-twillight, I think she should be able to help you find out what happened to you" Twillight? Did all ponies here have such weird names? Naruto asked himself. Oh well, he could ask once he met this Twillight pony. "well, ok, let's go."

On the way to Twillight's house, Naruto was receiving lots of glances. 'this feels a lot like my childhood' Naruto thought uncomfortably. "Sorry about this, but we never seen your species here before, some ponies might get scarred" Fluttershy muttered over two or three ponies yelling "the horror!" and another one burying it's face in a pie as if it would protect it. "I can see that" Naruto chuckled lightly. He was so used to those eyes, those cold, unforgiving eyes, as if the moment a chance came up, they would try to kill him. It happened on a daily basis when he was a small child in Konoha, before he earned the villagers trust. He just hoped that he could earn the trust form these ponies as well.

"Here we are" Fluttershy said quietly. Naruto looked around with confusion. There wern't any houses, there was just a giant tree. "Where is her house?" Naruto asked in confusion. "ummmm I-it's the tree, t-the tree is her house." Fluttershy replied. HUUUUUUU?! Inside the tree?!" he asked in shock from what he heard. "T-twillight lives in the library" Fluttershy informs him after he calmed down. "Is somepony out there? Please don't yell. A voice said from the tree. "Sorry Twillight, but my friend here has never seen any kind of structures inside trees" Fluttershy answered. I found him hurt in the everfree forest, he needs your help with something" "Oh come in then!" The voice, Now much friendlier replied. Once they went in Naruto looked around. The inside of the tree was filled with bookshelves, each filled to the brim with different colored books. The air was extremely musty and smelled of old tomes, it was a lot like the room in the hokage tower where the forbidden scroll was located in, Naruto noted. As he passed them, he saw hundreds of titles. History of Equestria, A Guide to Beginner's Magic, History of summoning circles, classic poems, wait.... Icha Icha Paridise?! DaFaq? Once they passed the almost endless amount of books, they reached a small clearing of what seemed to be a living room. There sat a purple pony. She had a violet mane and tail with a pink stript in between. "Hello Fluttershy! Where is the pony that needs my help? And what is this creature that you brought along?" "Oi! That's rude! I can talk you know!" Naruto said in annoyance. The purple pony's eyes bugged out. "You can talk?! OmygoshomygoshomygoshthisisanewdiscoveryWhereareyoufromhowcanyoutalkwhatareyou-mmmmffffff!" Naruto covered the pony's mouth from saying anymore, she sounded a lot like one of sasuke's fan girls, which made naruto grimace because he know how annoying they could be. "okay, sit down and let me explain everything."

one long explanation of Naruto's arrival later

Naruto only told her the details of when he got here. He left out his past because he did not feel the need to talk about it. The purple pony had her mouth open in shock. "Sooooo let me get this straight, you just suddenly found yourself falling from the sky? What were you doing before that happened?" Oh no, Naruto did NOT want to talk about his past. "uhhhhhh stuff?" He replied and tried to sound as convincing as possible, though even he knew how meek it sounded. "Stuff? Ok, what kind of stuff?" The purple pony asked suspicisouly, Naruto could tell that she was the type that wouldn't give up until she got an answer. He could try to escape from the window, but that would make them even more suspicious, so he decided to only tell a little of what happened. "Well, I......I died." Naruto said sighing. The purple pony was now even more shocked. "Oh! I'm so sorry! Do you want to talk about it?" "No thanks....." Naruto replied now sounding a little depressed. "Well since your here, I guess I could tell you about the history of this place."

one more long explanation, this time of equestria later

It was Naruto's turn for his eyes to bug out, though his face was a bit more shocked. His eyes had no puipls and were bigger than the ramen bowels he ate at ichirakus, he face faulted several times throughout the lesson, and his jaws literally hit the floor halfway through the lesson..... and they were still on the ground right now. "Naruto?" Fluttershy asked worriedly. "Huh? Oh.... yeah..... I'm fine...... I going for a walk, I be back in a hour...." "Naruto wait!" Fluttershy said. "Leave him be Fluttershy, he needs time to take in the information."

Naruto walked into the everfree forest. Since he was little, he was very attached to nature. It didn't insult him like the villagers did in the village and was very peaceful, so he would usually go to the forest outside konoha when the states became to much. Naruto lifted his face, letting the light and shadows dance across his skin. Humming birds chirped and flew in and out of a patch of pennyroyal. He inhaled the minty scent and continued on, delighting in the sound of his feet sliding along the leaves. The forest shined with a plea sent glow as he watched little critters go along with daily business, how inviting the forest look right now, it made him want to live in the valley of green. The trees danced along with the wind in a gentle breeze, as if they were alive. Naruto perched himself on top of a tree and soon fell asleep.

Update

I have good news and bad news, bad news is I won't update until Friday due to school, good news is that after this week, I'm having summer vacation so you can look forward to longer chapters.