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Changeling: Monster, or Misunderstood?

by LegionofPony
A changeling needs love and Twilight Sparkle wants to learn more about changelings. Perhaps a deal can be struck?

Alone and near death in an alley, a lone Changeling drone has barely gotten by in Ponyville, nearly always starved for love, which is just as important as water for a changeling. Love is apparently very hard to come by for a Changeling however, even in Equestria where it is given freely among the ponies themselves. One day however its life suddenly changes, all thanks to a certain lavender-colored alicorn...

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Edit: This story is now revamped with a steady past-tense, as well as many other inconsistencies and structuring issues sorted out too, all thanks to Koekelbag. Thank you very much for all of your help! :pinkiehappy:


On 6/14/16- 6/15/16, this was front-page featured.


On 7/12/16, this story has broken 5,000 views! Thank you all so much for reading!

This story is written in alternating-perspective first person and is my first public attempt at this style of writing, so sorry if it sucks. Also it's pretty much a clopshot, so yeah...

Discussion of what I did right/wrong in the comments, and anything that could be done to fix it, would be appreciated. As this was changed from and partially copy-pasted from a roleplay from two first-person perspectives and writers, there may be the rare 'you' where another pronoun should be. Sorry about this, I tried to get them all and will probably get all after future editing.

This will contain: some very creative views on changeling anatomy and reproduction , willing (questionable consent for a short while) interspecies sex, first time/loss of virginity (male), a small predator/prey roleplay, including cheesy pseudo-rape, knotting/tying, painless, slight cervical penetration, excessive cum and slight belly bulge, possible impregnation as well as genuine love between two species who usually hate each other.


Credits:

My friend Void and I wrote this together in a roleplay, which I then modified and refined into a story. The original changeling dialogue is by them and modified by me, and all Twilight is by me.

Koekelbag, for post-publish editing. Thank you very much for all of your help!

Cover art is a modified version of an image owned by 'pixel-prism', and its original was from derpibooru. Source of the original, unmodified image is linked in the image.

On Hiatus
Sex
Slice of Life
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Romance
Drama
 
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16482 words: Estimated about 1 hour to read

4 Chapters:

  1. A Toothless Wolf Among Ponies 2016-06-14 08:42:47 UTC
    4798
  2. Exploration 2016-06-15 00:00:19 UTC
    3293
  3. Experimentation 2016-06-18 03:19:52 UTC
    3343
  4. The Main Project 2016-06-21 03:08:15 UTC
    5048