EX-Cakes (sad version)

by 5H4W_913_

Rating: mature
Tags: Dark, Alternate Universe, Sad, Romance, Tragedy
Length: 1064

this is a sad version of my original story EX-Cakes it's basically EX-Cakes minus any comedy and plus more sad moments

this is the story about how the life of any innocent pony named Shaw has his life fall apart. In this story he is tortured and forced to do the worst things imagine able to those he cares about, has the mare he loves the most killed right in front of him and well, I'll leave you to find out the end. If this doesn't explain shit imagine Romeo and Juliet, now imagine the characters being ponies, now imagine it taking place in the rainbow factory, now imagine modern technology, now imagine extreme amounts of blood and gore. That should paint a retarded picture. Just read the story it's better than this stupid ass description. I recommend for no reason you listen to hollywood undead war child or pimpin' or mlg music.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2015-09-09 13:30:02 UTC

My diary.

I woke up one morning to see bloody hoove prints on the ground. I looked in the cellar seeing my brother's skull was smashed on the ground. I was on the verge of tears. I walked up to the body and felt a hard object hit my head and passed out.

I woke up in a car in clouds dale. It was a mess I covered my eyes until I saw one little bit of light. A blue pony with a rainbow mane. It was love at first sight. "Who-who is that?" I said.

"I didn't expect you to wake up." she said. "And I don't know or give a shit." she said. We parked at the factory and she threw me on the ground and kicked my skull.

I woke up in the factory from a kick in the stomach. I yelled in pain. "Wake up plot hole!" said another blue pony with a rainbow mane. She looked older than the one racing and was wearing a black leather suit. She kicked me again and I vomited blood. "I SAID WAKE UP YOU FUCKING BRAT!!!" she yelled. She kicked me in the head and I barely stood up sobbing. "So you woke up?" she said. she kicked me into a room. "Get you're plot in there." she said. I barely slept that night it was far too hard to close my eyes.

10 Days later I woke up again and was beaten. I never stopped sobbing. I just hoped one day I could see that other cyan blue pony again. Just one time. I got up and stepped on a nail. It stabbed deep into my hoove but, I didn't care anymore. I was beaten so much that I didn't care about pain anymore. I walked over to a drinking fountain and got some water before crying myself to sleep.

It was about 6 years later. I was told to torture someone. I walked into the chamber and found out the sad truth. It was the blue pony I saw before. A tear of blood came out of my eye and I asked her how she got in. "Why do you give a fuckin' shit?" she said. I felt my heart sink. I loved that pony and she thought I was one of them. I cried my eyes out. All of my tears were made of blood. She looked at me and tried to get my attention and I looked her straight in the eye and told her what I had been through and there was no point in living anymore.

"I-I didn't know that much shit happened." she said.

"Please get me out." I said through my tears.

I handed her a mask and a worker uniform and we started walking out. I told the guard I was going out to get some shots with my friend and right after we went through Dash's mask fell off. We froze in fear and someone knocked me out.

I woke up being held against my will and Corrupt Rainbow Dash walked up to Rainbow Dash who was tied up.

"Shaw we can't have these kinds of distractions." she said. She hit her on the head multiple times with a wooden plank with a nail in it. I yelled at the top of my lungs. "DON'T FUCKIN' HURT HER! PLEASE KILL ME! MOTHER FUCKING PLOT HOLE!!! PLEASE!!!" I wouldn't stop trying to break free. They let go and I ran to her. She was dead I was shocked I cried tears of blood. "Dash please wake up... FUCKING WAKE UP!!!" I yelled. The tears clotted on her coat sticking me to her and I was happy with that.

For 3 days I'd sleep and cry on her. One day Corrupt Rainbow Dash walked into the room she looked at me crying on her coat and she walked up to me and put her hoof on my shoulder.

"Shaw I think I went to far especially with you. I fucked up you're life and made you suffer. I had no right to do that and I'm sorry... I think I might... be able to fix it." she said. "Is Dash any more damaged than she was before?" she asked.

"No..." I sobbed.

"I might be able to bring her back." she said. I didn't know what to say. I hugged Corrupt Dash and sobbed tears of joy.

"Thank you, thank you so fucking much..." I said. I hadn't eaten for so long my ribs were showing. She handed me 40 bits and told me to go get something to eat and she carried Dash away.

I woke up one morning at 3:00 noticing something furry in my mussel. I opened my eyes and saw Rainbow Dash right in front of me. I immediately hugged her crying tears of joy. I was so happy she was alive I couldn't even speak. She had slight dents in her head but, I didn't care. I was happy she was back

Two days after she was brought back a couple workers thought Corrupt Dash went soft and grabbed crowbars beating us too a pulp. I wasn't going to let it happen again I jumped onto dash and was being hit with crowbars. I sobbed trying to keep her from being hit. they walked away and I was covered in cuts and bruises.

We went back to sleep and woke up again dash looked at me and said it wasn't safe to live anymore. I had a 1911 on the table. "If we let go..." I said. "We'll do it with both hands." she said. "I'll do it for you, I don't want you to watch" she said. "OK" I said. "but first let me write something." I said. If this diary is found please remember it. Goodbye I hope next time life will be better.

Hello this is corrupt Rainbow Dash finishing this diary. I don't think Shaw had a chance in the world so I'm giving him one. The surgery will be done by tomorrow. Shaw and Rainbow Dash will be free citizens of a town called Ponyville. I thought it would be safe enough. Shaw, if you ever see me again I'm sorry for fucking up your life. Like I said I had no right to do that. Please forgive me

Sincerely, Corrupt Rainbow Dash.