Sweet Alternate massacre

by Stripytails777

Rating: mature
Tags: Dark, Tragedy
Length: 2534

A alternate ending, to the infamous sweet apple massacre. (rated M to be safe)

Hello!, this is my first fanfiction based on a fanfiction!.
Also my first fanfiction of FiM fiction.net!.
Anyway this fanfiction is based off sweet apple massacre.
Well to be honest it didn't get much positive feedback for how cruel, twisted, and out of character it was.
But i thought i could do something that would work with this story.
So yeah sweet apple massacre is a "okay" fanfic, but i felt like it needed less rape and such.
So anyway i decided to start RIGHT where apple bloom got her tongue cut off, but nonetheless, she was still alive.
This is where i wanted to start.
Also this is my first time making a MLP fanfiction so bear with me
I hope you enjoy!
(Rated M to be safe)

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-05-28 08:04:01 UTC

Chapter 1

-SWEET ALTERNATE MASSACRE-

Apple bloom was unconscious, big mac cut off apple bloom's tongue.

Big macintosh said to scootaloo: "Ya'll hungry?", "No..." Scootaloo replied

Big macintosh put the tongue in the pile of putrid vomit that sweetie belle had caused.

He used the vomit as a dip and gave it to scootaloo, "Ya'll better eat!"

Scootaloo picked up the tongue, looked at apple bloom, and dropped a tear and shouted: "NO!"

Big macintosh looked at scootaloo with a intimidating glare.

"What did you say you little bitch!", he said with a furious voice.

"I said NO!!!". She shouted as she threw the tongue to the ground

Meanwhile Applejack came back with a cart filled with apples, green and red.

She then realized, that apple bloom was still missing, she went back to the barn to see if big macintosh was there.

To see if he knew anything.

Applejack went inside the barn and looked around, "Bic mac?" thinking that he was here

Then applejack heard arguements and screaming from down below, "What was that!?"

Back to big macintosch and the two remaining cutie mark crusaders, "YOU MONSTER, you are nothing but a selfish stallion!, you are so sick enough to even hurt you're own sister!", Scootaloo said with a voice of rage and frustration.

Big macintosh's intimidating glare turned into a evil grin, "Heh, silly me, i realized that i started with the wrong filly", He grinned even more.

"I could care less if shes my sister" He replied "She needed to be tought a lesson like you two!" Big macintosh picked up his knife and headed straight for scootaloo.

"If rainbow dash were here, she would beat you're ass!", bic macintosh was not imtimidated by this statement and said "She ain't as tough as you think lil filly, SHES GARBADGE!, besides she ain't here, nobody can help you now!"

Sweetie belle went infront of scootaloo protecting her with both arms stretching out, "Leave her alone!, if she can stand up for herself i can stand up for her!" sweetie belle said in such bravery.

Bic macintosh just took the knife out and slashed sweetie belle with one swipe, and then stabbed her, luckily she was not stabbed in anything important.

"SWEETIE BELLE!!!!" She said with many tears going down her eyes, sweetie belle collasped, but she was still conscious.

Big macintosch helt her up and said "I'll deal with you later" he threw her across the room to the wall, adding more injury but she was still conscious.

Scootaloo rushed to sweetie belle, big macintosh looked at scootaloo with a frustrated glare, "HEY get back here you stupid filly!"

"Sweetie belle!" sweetie belle tried to reply and she was able to, "Sc-Scootaloo, am i gonna die cutie markless?", she said in true fear and sadness.

"NO!!, SWEETIE BELLE", With many tears going down from head to the ground, "DON'T YOU DARE DIE ON ME"

Bic macintosh was galloping to scootaloo in order to finish her off, "Time to end this once and for all!"

Scootaloo was scared this time, scootaloo closed her eyes head facing sweetie belle and helt her hoof.

In exchange sweetie belle grasped scootaloo's hoof with her last remaining strength.

Scootaloo opened her eyes and saw sweetie belle smiling with watery eyes.

"If we are going to die, we are gonna die together" Sweetie belle said, scootaloo nodded in agreement and smiled.

big macintosh is now infront of the two filles.

Scootaloo's smile dissapeared, and again closed her eyes the same way as before, and said "Just get it over with.."

Big macintosh let out a smirk at this suprising cooperation, He took the knife held it up high, ready to kill  scootaloo.

This was it!, he was finally gonna get the peace and quiet he wanted!, finally his quiet life is going to begin!.

Then he got a kick to the head, he collasped to the floor.

A loud thump was heard and scootaloo opened her eyes and saw that applejack

He gained consciousness quickly and saw that applejack was there.

Applejack looked at bic macintosh with a very angry look,"WHAT ARE YOU DO'N BIG MACINTOSH!??!"

Bic macintosh got back up and replied with a smirk, "Teaching these fillies a lesson"

Applejack took a good look around the room, she saw that scootaloo and sweetie belle were looking at her, but apple bloom was on the floor bleeding from the mouth.

Applejack rushed to apple bloom, she shaked her in frustration and fear that she is dead.

"Wake up little squirt!, WAKE UP!" She said with intense tears running down her face.

Apple bloom woke up, suprised that she was alive, "Big sis?" she said with weak eyes and her voice was very muffled due to the removal of her tongue.

"Don't worry little sis!, i'll get you healed up so you can talk again, just don't talk, yer gonna lose strength!".

Apple bloom nodded, with the last of her strength she got up and hugged her sister, applejack in exchanged hugged back.

Then she collasped, she looked pretty dead, but she can still be saved.

Then applejack picked up her own head, with a face of fear andd frustration, turned into a face of anger and vengence.

"You, MONSTER!", then applejack fought bic macintosh they were neck and neck, it was hard to make a bet on this fight..

Scootaloo watched and applejack knocked big macintosh down and shouted to scootaloo, "Don't just sit there!, RUN!!!"

Scootaloo replied with a nod she ran to the exit, she forgot about sweetie belle and went straight back for her.

Bic macintosh blocked the path, "oh you gon to take yer freind sweetie belle and escape now?, silly filly!" he slashed scootaloo in the right arm, it was a mild cut, but it was bleeding immensely

Applejack rushed to big macintsoh and delivered a hoof kick to the head, applejack continued to fight with bic macintosh and scootaloo took this opportunity to get sweetie belle and get out of this hell hole!.

Sweetie belle was suprisingly still conscious but she was very weak at this moment, scootaloo picked up sweetie belle on her back and climbed the ladder out of the room.

Scootaloo went running outside, but she was barley mobile due to the fact that she was carrying sweetie belle, and she was suffering from blood loss.

Also due to big macintosh injuring her wing, she was unable to just fly to help.

She was able to walk all the way to town, right near sugarcube corner.

They were just at the middle of town still near sugarcube corner.

Lyra heartstrings and bon bon were at the local smoothie spot, they were drinking smoothies at a outdoor table.

Lyra was the first to catch the sight of the two crippled fillies.

Lyra stopped drinking her smoothie and looked at the two filles in terror "Oh my goodness!, bon bon... , LOOK!", bon bon in curiosity looked toward the two crippled filles, once a look of happiness and relaxation turned to a look of terror on bon bon's face.

Dnd then they started walking towards them, "Are you guys okay!?!?", Scootaloo stopped walking and started to collapse.

She thought she was going to die here, the world was spinning and she was losing consciousness.

Then the crippled ponies started drawing a crowd when lyra and bon bon started getting even more worried.

From stallions to mares, the crowd kept growing.

And then right when rainbow dash floating around on a cloud, she saw the crowd.

She felt that something was not right, so she flew down, "Whats all the fuss about?" rainbow dash questioned.

Minuette pointed at the two crippled filles, rainbow dash then loooked at her little freind scootaloo, at this moment she was more terrified than all the other ponies, those weren't some ponies that were in a accident or anything, those were her freinds!

Rainbow dash rushed right infront of scootaloo in fear that she would die,"SCOOTS!, SWEETIE BELLE!" "What happend!?, Tell me now!"

Scootaloo was losing alot of consciousness here, and blood, she wanted to reply but nothing happend.

Scootaloo was dying, "big macintosh did this to us", scootaloo saw that sweetie belle was conscious enough to save her, then she lost consciousness, and died.

Scootaloo collasped along with sweeetie belle and suffered the same fate.

"Shall i call the police?" Lyra asked, "No", rainbow replied, "Call the ambulence, i'll take care of the murderer"

Lyra nodded and rushed to the nearest hospital.

Rainbow dash however, was not gonna sit back and watch.

Rainbow dash went straight to her cloud home, got her hoodie, a baseball bat, and a knife.

She was set, she then flew straight to sweet apple acres.

Meanwhile Applejack was fighting bic macintosh still, she was losing the fight.

"I thin its time to end this Hoo hah", big macintosh took a hatchet and wacked applejack with the side, the non blade part, She collasped and was defeated, She was severly injured in multible areas due to bic macintosh's brute strength.

"Why big bro.. , Why?"

Bic macintosh smirked, "You remember the 'accident' back at that harvest back'n september?", "It WAS a accident big bro, i never meant to injure you!, i thought you forgave me!", Apple jack replied.

Big macintosh kept his look, "I'm sorry, i forgive you, i hope you forgive this 'accident' " he held his hatchet up high, applejack was more scared than she had ever been before.

"Yo", Bic macintosh put down the hatchet and looked back, he  saw a certain cyan pony, with a black hoodie, a knife in pocket, and a bat in hand.

Rainbow dash had her hoofs wrapped in bandages, knowing that she would have to fight.

"Heh, look what the flight school rejects dragged in" he said with a evil smirk.

"I Know my mistakes, they can be fixed, yours however" she readied her bat "ARE UNFIXABLE!!!!", she rushed to big macintosh with bat in hand.

She did her first swing, it connected and it hurt big macintosh greatly.

She did another swing, but this time, big macintosh was able to grab the bat and discard it.

Then she decided to use her kung fu skills that she had tought apple bloom, she tried a straight punch, but big macintosh grabbed her hoof and twisted it.

"AGH!!!", she let out a scream, "RAINBOW!" applejack screamed, Big macintosh threw rainbow at a mildly large distance, she got back up and tried for a jump kick, it connected but didn't do that much damage due to big macintosh blocking the attack.

Rainbow then tried a punch to the gut, but big macintosh countered with a punch to the face.

She then tried to combo, most of the hits were blocked, but some of the hits are moves that big macintosh was not expecting, so it connected.

Big macintosh made a comeback and made a large hook to rainbow dash's skull, She fell down on the floor and saw that blood was coming out of her mouth, she wiped it off and kept of fighting.

Rainbow dash tried to connect a punch to bic macintosh's skull but it didn't connect due to him blocking the attack.

"Stop fight'n, let me put you in your place!" Big macintosh said as he tried to deliver a left hook to the cyan pony, "Never!, Not after what you did to little scoots and her freinds!" She said as she blocked the left hook and kicked him in the hip.

After a exchange of punches grabs and kicks."big macintosh then got angry and decided to beat up rainbow dash completly, rainbow dash went for another punch, but he countered with a grab, he snapped rainbow dash's arm disabling her, then he did a huge jab to face, then a grab keeping her from falling, he punched her multible time in the face, then a kick to the stomach, then for the big finale, a roundhouse kick sending her flying.

"RAINBOW!!!!" Apple jack screamed, as  rainbowdash fell to the ground, "YOU GOTTA GET BACK UP!," Applejack screamed as she still had hope. "Ugh" Rainbowd ash said, then she coughed up blood.

Big macintosh grabbed rainbow dash by the neck, she was suffocating by this and big macintosh held her up high. "You think you can beat me stupid pegasi"Rainbow dash struggled, hoping to get out of his deadly grasp. "Tough luck." He threw her to the ground and rainbowdash gasped for air, She then got scared knowing that shes beat.

Pain was surrounding her body, she was afraid to move,  she saw alot of blood coming out of her arms to legs, and plenty of scars were all over her body, big macintosh then picked up the hatchet and held it up high, the same way that was supposed to be the fate of applejack, "I'M GOING TO END YOU!". Rainbowdash closed her eyes knowing this is the end for her

"NO!" Applejack suprisingly comes from behind and gets on the back of big macintosh.

Big macintosh didn't take this lightly as he shook off applejack and looked back at her, "BE PATIENT!, i'll be done with you right when i'm done with her!"

He looked back to the direction of where he was going to kill rainbow dash, then *STAB*, rainbow dash had tooken the knife out of her pocket and stabbed big macintosh in a frontal region, hitting the heart, guaranteed death.

Big macintosh looked at the knife struck into his heart with widened eyes.

"Game.. Over.." Rainbow dash said, then big macintosh collasped, he was dead, nothing could save him from the brutal stab.

She then was huffing and panting hardly, she put her hoof on her head, and said with a large sigh "Its over.. Its finally over.."

-EPILOGUE-

Rainbowdash, the hero, was not charged with murder, better yet the authorities knew that big macintosh was a criminal for 5 counts of attempted murder, so it was deemed in self defense.

Sweetie belle took longest to recover, apple bloom had her tongue repaired due to a new healing spell, and scootaloo.. the brave filly that escaped the grasp of a psychopath, recovered faster than sweetie belle, but she has a cut in one of her kidneys. it won't recover but atleast her wing healed, and shes alive and well.

applejack also needed time in the hospital due to her injuries, but she made it out okay, the only one who did die, was big macintosh.

The only one who missed him was applejack, she was very depressed after this day, she goes to big macintosh's grave frequently, due to the nostalgia from when they were kids, and the memories they had, before this change in behavior.

She is not holding a grudge against rainbowdash, but it was still very sad for her.

But nonetheless, ponyville was back to normal, the end.

A/N: Thank you for reading!, it took half of the day to make this story!, i hope you liked it!.

Please no trolling or inconsiderate feedback.

And also please leave any constructive criticsm below!.

Again, thanks for reading!

(Bigmacintosh2011 is the original creator of big apple massacre)