Sweet Alternate massacre

by Stripytails777

First published

Hello!, this is my first fanfiction based on a fanfiction!.
Also my first fanfiction of FiM fiction.net!.
Anyway this fanfiction is based off sweet apple massacre.
Well to be honest it didn't get much positive feedback for how cruel, twisted, and out of character it was.
But i thought i could do something that would work with this story.
So yeah sweet apple massacre is a "okay" fanfic, but i felt like it needed less rape and such.
So anyway i decided to start RIGHT where apple bloom got her tongue cut off, but nonetheless, she was still alive.
This is where i wanted to start.
Also this is my first time making a MLP fanfiction so bear with me
I hope you enjoy!
(Rated M to be safe)