A long While

by CreepyEyesGuy

Rating: mature
Tags: Adventure, Dark, Alternate Universe, Sad
Length: 461

"I am Paen... I am fulfilling my duty... Penance. I am a monster that never is in full control... Run."

"I am Paen… I am fulfilling my duty… Penance. I am a monster that never is in full control… Run."

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WRITER HERE!!!
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NOW ON TO THE STORY

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2015-09-05 10:56:52 UTC

Prologue: My Cell

My Cell

By CreepyEyesGuy

I've marked the walls each day to see how long i've been here...

drip...

I ran out of room...

drip...

I marked the floors...

drip...

No room there either

drip...

Maybe the roof?

BANG!

Not tall enough...

BANG! BANG BANG!

Might be time to leave...

HAHAHA!!!

Definitely time to leave...

           I look to my withering striped hoofs for the first time in years... To my marking shiv... to the long open door. Odd a pony stands there now... Especially covered in blood, smiling... They raise a strange box thing to me...

zap!

"That stung..." I say bluntly

"you talk?" The stallion replies confusedly

"THAT STUNG!!!" I say while politely introducing his throat to  my shiv

drip...

A new red coat of paint...

drip...

A small box that stings...

drip...

I smile

drip...

"all's well that ends well"

Chapter 1: Rain Washes Pain

Rain Washes Pain

By CreepyEyesGuy

The steady pitter patter of rain is good for me...

I FEEL good

Clip Clop...

I hear pony nearby...

Clip Clop...

New RED paint!

I begin to sneak towards my victims... Stinging box in hand...

"Lucky?" An already crimson mare asks her accomplice

"Yea?" The gruff brown stallion replies

"ever feel like your being watched?" The mare asks

"Yea im being watched by you!" he says loudly

"ugh... of course" he says looking to a small box on his wrist emitting a soft green glow "he's late..."

"Saddle still has five minutes" The mare says looking at her identical box

"well since I have time to kill..." the stallion says walking away from her... towards me...

"I'm going to go take a piss" the stallion calls to the mare "keep an eye out!" he says halfheartedly

Clip Clop...

I prepare my shiv...

Clip Clop...

I get ready to lunge...

Clip...

no clop...

"what in the?!?" he yells out a half second before im ready

I stand...

"fuck are you?"

I smile...

he raises his box... A little slow...

THWIP

the stallion's head falls to my side...

I take it and drench it in my nice... RED paint...

I come for the mare...

She is standing... box up shakily

"Lucky?" she asks hopefully at my obvious approach

I stand with a gift in my hooves... Painted red...

BANG!

her box rings out missing its intended target...

CLICK!

"oh fuck..."

I run at her... she cowers... I break her legs... One by one... She screams at each break...

"please!" she cries out loudly... far too loudly... Her friend was far more quiet...

I remove the mares head... Place a quiet head in its place... my gift

Clip Clop...

I walk away...

Clip Clop...

More gifts to give...

Clip Clop...

more RED paint!

"all's well that ends well"