Stuck in the city

by Grulaz

Rating: everyone
Tags: Adventure, Romance
Length: 2607

to be honest i always wondered what spike did in S5 premiere...

The Story about where spike was during S5 premiere © goes to hasbro i do not own these characters )

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2015-09-09 16:36:37 UTC

Chapter 1 : we are late

*Caramel was walking through the streets of ponyville

Caramel : damn i don't even know how can i propose to her...*he stumbled upon sugarcube corner and walked inside*

Big Mac : hay there Caramel why the long face?

Caramel : ahh you know... i want to propose to sash but i dont know how...

Big mac : your telling me i got even a bigger problem

Caramel : and what might that be?

Big mac : i gotta meet Cheerilee at the train station and meet Spike at the castle so my hooves are tied up at the moment

Caramel : wow thats hard to choose

Big mac : true...

Caramel : who is your marefriend anyway?

Big mac : i.ll give ya a hint : she is an earth pony

Caramel : mabe we should take spike with us to the train station?

Big mac : not a bad idea mabe the little guy will want to come too? anyway lets go *they walk to the castle*

Caramel : this castle? i remember it

Big mac : cmon he should be inside *they enter the throne room and notice that spike is asleep*

Caramel : looks like he was waiting for you big mac

Big mac : now ah just feel terrible for making him wait....eh Spike!

Spike : *wakes up* huh what? i,m honest!

Big mac : relax little guy its just me

Spike : you came for that hoofball you promised?

Big mac : no we are going to the train station to meet cheerilee you wanna come?

Spike : i dont see why not... *he puts the glove and the hat on the table *

Caramel : are you sure she is still at the station?

Big mac : why wouldnt she be? i,m sure she will be there...

*they arrive at the train station*

Cheerilee : what took you?? were almost late!

Big mac : sorry i...

Cheerilee : never mind...come on lets get on the train...oh hey Spike

Spike : hi...cheerilee...

*they abord the train and the train takes off*

Caramel : so where we going exactly?

Cheerilee : Cherry Hill Ranch Dodge Junction

Spike : never heard of that place before

Big mac : that place is like sweet apple acres spike except it has cherries instead of apples

Caramel : i dont know i,m not used to cherries that much

Cheerilee : well you will be surprised cause well its cherry family reunion..!

Spike : cherry family?

Cheerilee : its like Apple family Spike but well its not that big actually

Big mac : ah thats okay i,m sure they will be nice to meet

Spike : yep... i cant wait to meet them too

*sometime later the 3 ponies and...1 dragon fall asleep and wake up sometime after...*

Spike : huh? are we here?

Conductor : last stop arriving! Manehattan!

Cheerilee : what?? manehattan?? oh great..

Big mac : what in the hay? big city?

Caramel : well this was unexpected...

Cheerilee : cmon lets go look around the city while were here anyway *they get off the train and walk into the city*

Spike : ahh Manehattan...i really hope i wont be left alone in the city like last time...

Big mac : dont worry about that buddy *he puts spike on his back* i aint gonna leave you in this town

Cheerilee : hmm a dress shop? this could be usefull...hey spike you wanna come with me?

Spike : why not? *spike follows cheerilee to the dress shop*

Big mac : allrighty then well meet you 2 here later i guess...

Caramel : cmon big mac lets go see the city...

*Big mac and caramel walk into the city*

Cheerilee : lets see here i hope this pony is as nice as rarity *she knocks at the door and a pink earth pony opens it*

Suri : hello there... youre looking for a dress?

Cheerilee : why yes infact i am...

Suri : then come in i.ll show you around... *Suri Cheerilee and spike walk inside and suri closes the door*

Spike : *mutters* she might be a dress pony but shes still not as pretty as rarity...

Suri : can you atleast draw what kind of dress you want?

Cheerilee : i guess i could do that....*she grabs the pencil and begins sketching...

Spike : well this should be interesting...

Caramel : Big mac look!

Big mac : what?

Caramel : the Pony republic concert is in manehattan tonight...

Big mac : there is no way am spending mah bits on some concert...!

Caramel : i dont think were gonna have to...look! Lucky clover is in this band...

Big mac : so?

Caramel : Lucky clover was a schoolbuddy of mine i think he could get us backstage passes...

Big mac : you make a good point... but we still got some time until that concert begins...

Caramel : true

Big mac : so lets go see the supermodel show...

Caramel : *gulps* are you sure thats a good idea? i mean what if cheerilee finds out?

Big mac : cmon she wouldnt be mad for...this i guess? *they walk inside*

Caramel : ooh look its fleur dis lee

Big mac : sorry caramel i dont know fancy ponies from canterlot that much....

*Meanwhile......*

Suri : hmm i like this design indeed i.ll do it

Cheerilee : you sure?

Spike : this is boring...

Suri :  i agree how about i.ll help you finish this sketch and we can go somewhere?

Spike : but we dont even know you!

Chapter 2 : Bored Spike

Spike : ahh cmon! your taking too long cheerilee!

Cheerilee : cmon spike dont rush me i.ll be done soon...

Spike : yea right thats what Rarity always says...

Suri : *eye starts to twitch* did...you said Rarity?

Cheerilee : yes i did...why?

Suri : you know what? *she takes the pencil from Cheerilee* i.ll design the dress myself for you free of charge i can prove myself that i can be better then that unicorn!

Spike : i would like to see that...

Suri : watch me...*she takes the Pencil and begins sketching*

Cheerilee : my my that really does look interesting...

Suri : you havent seen nothing yet...

Big mac : are you sure this is a good idea? i mean we dont even have tickets...!

Caramel : keep it cool man i told you i know lucky clover they will let me in...

Big mac : we shall see about that...

Caramel : you bet...*they approacha security guard*

Guard : who goes there?

Caramel : i would like to speak to lucky clover...

*the guard mumbles something and goes inside and comesback with lucky clover*

Lucky : Caramel mah man!

Caramel : ha! id knew you would recodnise me!

Lucky : its okay Beige they are VIP

*the guard nods and lets big mac and caramel inside*

Big mac : fancy...

Caramel : so Lucky how did you came up with this band?

Lucky : oh it wasnt just me it was all of us cmon i.ll introduce you to them

*he enters a room and they see 4 stallions inside*

Caramel : wait a second... Comet tail?

Comet tail : Caramel ??

Caramel : maan this is getting more awkward..

Lucky : anyway this wave chill fire streak rare find and i see you already met comet tail

Comet tail : our concert is about to start you 2 can stay here no worries the guards wont do anything to ya...

Big mac : or else...

Caramel : easy there big guy...

Big mac : no worries caramel i aint going to do that...

Caramel : i think we should head back by the way i,m pretty sure cheerilee and spike are waiting for us...

Lucky : no way are you telling me you actually hooked up with cheerilee? i would have never guessed you liked her

Caramel : she is with big mac not me anyway lets go big mac..

Big mac : cmon..

*they head into the city*

Caramel : great... now where are we??

Big mac : uhh...

Suri : there its done!

*Cheerilee looks at the sketch*

Cheerilee : its perfect! Spike wake up!

Spike : huh?! what? oh sorry

Suri : its okay...Spike isnt it?

Spike : yes maam

Suri : do you think you could leave alone for a minute? we kinda need to be alone for a bit...

Cheerilee : yea spike it will be Quick..!

Spike : what? Fine ! *he leaves and closes the door*

Big mac : so Caramel uhh any ideas how we can get back?

Caramel : no idea honestly do you have any clues?

Big mac : hmm nope but ah am kinda thirsty what about you?

Caramel :i am too but shouldnt we head back?

Big mac : your right..but i dont know which way

Caramel : yea good point..

*Spike walks outside angrily*

Spike : i cant believe this! those 2 dont even need me! i might aswell just go find Big mac and caramel myself *he goes into the city angrily *

Suri : my my this looks lovely on you

Cheerilee : it does?

Suri : Sure i know a good dress when i see one especially when its made by me

Cheerilee : you make a good point

Spike : oh great where am i?

*suddenly caramel notices Spike*

Caramel : Spike? your here?

Spike : yea... i guess i found you 2 huh?

Big mac : ayup say are those 2 done with the dresses yet?

Spike : i dont know to be honest i,m getting sick of this city

Caramel : you tell me by the way do you think you could show us the way back?

Spike : sure... its this way c’mon... *he starts walking back to the dress shop*

Cheerilee : ok this is the last one i think this one will be perfect!

Suri : you bet it will and it looks even better on you then it does on me actually youre the best model I’ve  ever had...

*they hear a knock on the door*

Cheerilee : who could that be?

Suri : let me see... *she opens the door and sees Big mac Caramel and Spike*

Spike : i think we have enough of this city Miss Cheerilee!

Big mac : yea i hate to break it to ya but i,m not used to a big city...

Caramel : me too...

Cheerilee : allright fine C’mon we are going to the train station i hope we can still make it to the family reunion...

Spike : lets hope so...

*they arrive at the train station and board the train*

Big mac : lets just hope we wont fall asleep this time...

Spike : good point i.ll stay up in case...

Chapter 3 : Cherry all the way

Big mac : so wait your actually tellin me that all this time we were in manehattan you were trying dresses?

Cheerilee : yup...and i forgot to pay for them...

Caramel : naah i dont think she will mind something like that

Spike : i agree with caramel Suri seemed like such a nice pony

Big mac : so uh cheerilee how come you never told me you belong to the cherry family?

Cheerilee : well i guess it just never occured to me

Caramel : really? but your family is the biggest cherry harvester in all of equestria

Cheerilee : thats true cherries to us is like apples to apple family

Spike : family...i wonder what twilight is doing...

Big mac : i,m sure she is fine Spike i mean she is a princess after all...

Spike : i guess your right...

Caramel : how long till we arrive anyway?

Cheerilee : about 3 hours its pretty far from manehattan so its gonna take some time... OH by the way big mac i got you something *she searches her saddlebag and takes out a pair of white wings*

Big mac : what in the hay would i need something like this for?

Caramel : yea where did you get this Cheerilee?

Cheerilee : oh suri gave it to me as a gift

Spike : but...wings? i just dont understand are they even real?

Cheerilee : no ofcourse not they are fake i guess

Big mac : ah dont want to sound rude or anythin but i dont want em its just...well i think they will suit you better not me...

Cheerilee : ah well i guess i can use it as a decoration then it still looks nice anyway

Big mac : it sure does you will find a much better use for it then i did anyway...i think we are here... *the train stops *

*They exit the train*

Cheerilee : ahh we are here Dodge Junction...

Caramel : where is the ranch?

Cheerilee : its this way

Big mac : this place kinda reminds me of appleloosa

Spike : come to think of it Appleloosa isnt actually that far from here

Big mac : dont remind me...

*they approach Cherry Jubilee*

CJ : i,m glad you made it Cheerilee

Cheerilee : yes i,m so sorry i got a little late

CJ : actually the others are gonna come real soon

Cheerilee : huh? are you telling me? that i am first?

CJ : yep aparently you got here really fast somehow...

Spike : oh great another nice pony but she isnt a dress maker...

Caramel : cmon spike we came here to keep cheerilee company

CJ : c,mon i.ll show you inside *she heads towards the cherry ranch* wait a second....do i smell apples? i hate apples...

Cheerilee : what? but...you never told me about it

CJ : you never asked me about it anyway here they are...

*a large group of earth ponies enter the ranch*

Spike : this is the cherry family?

Cheerilee : sure is!

Spike : well i hope its not gonna be like...

CJ : now *she looks at Spike Caramel and Big Mac near the table* let me introduce you to the cherry family...

Big mac : i swear i heard this before...

CJ : this here is Cherry Fizzy , Cherry Berry , Cherry Cream , Cherry Pie , Cherry Bomb , Cherry Chenga , aaaaand i see you already know cheerilee  * she looks at big mac* you wouldnt happen to be an apple would you?

Big mac : ah sure am!

CJ : *grinds her teeth* of all the rotten never keep it together cherry mabe it wont be so bad...

Spike : why you hate Apple family so much miss Jubilee ?

CJ : its a long story it started many centuries ago my family was originaly from ponyville but well

Caramel : what happened?

CJ : well..its..what do you care rotten apple?! i,m not gonna tell ya

Big mac : well am sorry for trying to be nice!

Spike : easy there i think your getting too angry a bit

CJ : i guess your right..

Big mac : say uh... *caramel puts a hoof on his mouth*

Caramel : do you have anything to drink? we are kinda thirsty

CJ : i sure do...Cherry Punch all the way

Caramel : *he drinks some cherry punch* mm it tastes pretty good i,m guessing this stuff is like apple cider in your family?

CJ : in one way yes cause i dont think there is a way to make cider from cherries

*they all laugh*