Commissar Vasili comes to Equestria

by Commissar_Junior

Rating: teen
Tags: Alternate Universe, Sad, Romance, Adventure
Length: 1183

After a life of war and living amongst humans, Vasili builds a portal that takes him to equestria. Will the battle hardened Scientist fit in with the kind and loving ponies of equestria or will he destroy them all? Read and Find out.

Vasili Kalishnikov, also known as Junior because of being shorter to human's, is a Commissar in the Soviet Red Army. For most of his life, he fought alongside his fellow comrades during World War Two. After the war he studied and created weapon's of mass destruction and tested experiment's on himself often. He decided to move to Equestria so his studies and experiment's would not harm his beloved mother land.

This is my first story and I am not great at writing but I hope that you will enjoy it.
(I'm back and working on it once again)

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2016-05-29 13:32:25 UTC

Leaving for Equestria

The sun peaks over the snow covered building's, activity is everywhere in the military base, aircraft fly high in the sky, troops march across the snow and vehicles drive on there usual routes. Meanwhile in a warm and cozy room, the sun shines thru a window and onto the face of a sleep deprived pony who groans and turns over, trying to hide from the bright yellow light. 'Curse you sun'.

With a grunt, he sits up and rubs his eyes, after a long stretch, he get's out of bed and puts his uniform on before pulling his custom made boots onto his rear hooves. As he reaches for his cap, he hears a knock on the door which he goes and answers it. A tall and somewhat muscular human looks down at Vasili with a silly grin.

"Good Morning 'Junior', sleep well?" The human says with a slight chuckle when the Pony rolls it eyes.

"Da, I was Chernov, till the damn sun decided to wake me up early from my nice nap" He answered with a quiet growl.

Chernov Chuckles louder "Well, I'll take sun waking me up over gunfire" He clears his throat "anyway, Professor Borsig wanted to let you know the portal machine is ready when you are set to go"

"Excellent, tell him I will be there in a couple minutes, I shall gather my things and meet him at the portal" With a Salute, Chernov turns around and leaves, Vasili closes the door and walks back to his room where he goes to his closet and opens it. He puts on his army coat and ushanka before reaching for his weapon's.

Vasili picks up his Scoped  Mosin-Nagant rifle and shoulders it, he then walks to the nightstand beside the bed and picks up his TT-33 pistol and  he then opens the drawer's and pockets the ammunition for the guns and puts 2 grenades onto his belt. He moves his pillow and holds his large titanium machete in the sun light, gently touching the diamond jagged edge, then clips it onto his belt. Before walking out of his room, he stop's at a mirror and examines himself.

His fur is white and groomed, his eyes are red and his mane is black and messy. He straightens his coat and fixes his belt before heading out the door and closing it behind him. As he walks thru the base, humming the soviet hell march to himself and returning salutes that are given by fellow soldiers before he his hit in the back by a snowball. He quickly turns around to face a group of soldiers smiling and laughing. Vasili shakes his head and grins as he reaches down and makes a snowball and throws it back, hitting one of the soldiers in the groin, causing him to fall to the ground, howling in pain. His fellow soldiers explode into laughter, Junior chuckles and continues his walk.

He reaches a concrete building with 2 guards standing side by side at a metal door, as Vasili approaches, they open the door and salute, Vasili returns the salute and walks inside to see a human in a black German uniform that has soviet emblems. The human hears Vasili's hoof steps and turns around with a pipe in his mouth

"Zere you are Junior, zi vas wondering ven you would show up, you soviets are always so slow" he says with a grin.

"oh shutup Nazi" Vasili chuckles softly and hugs the human who smiles and hugs him back, after a short time they release from each other. "so, is the portal ready?"

"Indeed zit is, whenever you are ready my Freund, zi vill activate it" He stops and looks at Vasili with a slight chuckle. "Vhats vith all ze weapons? Not going to start World War Three are you kamerad?"

Vasili laughs "Nyet, but I will if I have too, anyway, I want Yuri to have my favorite tank sent thru the portal, along with some vodka and a box of those blueberry muffins his wife makes" I step up to the portal machine.

"Ja Ja, I will tell him, just stay safe mein freund" He activates the portal machine, creating a large blue swirling circle in the floor.

"You know I will Borsig..." I look down into the portal and gulp, I hold my rifle in my hooves tightly and sigh, I close my eyes and step forward into the portal.

The Arrival of the Soviet

It is a beautiful day in Ponyville's park, the birds are chirping, butterfly's on flowers, a nice gently breeze in the warm sunny day.  Suddenly a blue swirling portal opens in the center of the park, creating loud static sounds, the birds and other critters flee in fear, Junior is thrown out of the portal, yelling out in surprise and lands hard on the grass as the portal disappears

"ughhh..." groans slightly in pain and gets up and takes a long look around "what a peaceful place...no craters...no smell of gunpowder...no gunfire in the distance...where am I?" he starts to stroll around the park, listening to the sounds of nature, his battle hardened hearing picks up the smallest and softest sounds, he observes everything, from the smallest of ants, to the largest of trees

His ears twitch and he turns too find a little bunny looking up at him with a curious look "hey there little guy...." reaches down and holds a hoof out to the bunny, it hops closer and sniffs his hoof, suddenly Junior unclips his machete and slice its throat, and holds the bunny upside down to train the blood "what a cute creature...i have not had rabbit in a whi-" hearing sounds of hoof steps, he bites the bunny's ear and quickly climbs up the tree and hides

"angel? aaanngeeeel?" the yellow pegasus searches around the area "angel, where are you? come out silly bunny, don't you want your bath?" she suddenly stops, here eyes widen when she spots the small puddle of blood "EEEEEKK!! she screams so high pitched it causes Junior to flinch "Angel???" She searches frantically, picking up every stone, checking every inch of grass "Rainbow dash!!!" She flies off quickly

Junior hops down out of the tree, still holding his kill "What a strange mix of colors...i'm going to get epilepsy if I look too much" chuckles quietly but stops when the teleporter reopens, a large T-34-85 tank suddenly appears and the teleporter closes once again, Junior grins happily "excellent..my ride is here..."

He opens the drivers hatch of the tank and climbs inside and shuts it, turning on the inside lights, he places the dead bunny into an empty ammo box, then starts the ignition, the 600 horse power diesel engine roars to life, black fumes come out of the exhaust pipes "purrs like a kitten..." pushing the two levers forward, the tank lurches and moves at a slow speed, leaving large muddy tread marks in the grass and crushing trees, the tank leaves the forest and heads for a town known as ponyville.