The crush

by Applejack433

Rating: mature
Tags: Slice of Life, Human, Romance, Comedy
Length: 2679

Applejack and the girls have a sleep over and she confesses she has a crush on Caramel.

Its the weekend and Pinkies throwing one of her 'its the weekend so we have to celebrate' sleepovers and invites her 6 friends, Applejack, Rarity, Twilight, Fluttershy, Sunset Shimmer and Rainbow dash. So when the party starts, Rainbow decided to have everyone play Truth or dare. When it comes around to Applejack, she picks truth. But Rarity asks her who her crush is. And she says Caramel Small. The most popular guy in school. She knew she had no chance, but likes to dream about him. So when school starts again on Monday, everyone seems to know about her crush, except Caramel. When she gets made fun of for being in love with a guy on the football team by Diamond Ring, she feels she shouldn't like him. But when she punches her in the nose, everyone gets mad at her. So at lunch the girls try to calm to her down. But it doesnt work, so Applejack goes with her back up plan. She's going to kiss Caramel. When she does it goes a little too far. And leads them sleeping together on the night of Pinkies birthday party. When the fall formal comes Caramel confesses his feels about Applejack to Rarity. When Rarity tells Applejack, she's more than happy. What will happen when a jealous Diamond Ring gets in between them?

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2015-10-30 23:09:19 UTC

WEEKEND!

    The school bell just rang, and 7 seven girls walk out the school. Everyone was chatting except for Applejack.

"Applejack, darling. Are you alright? You haven't said anything all day!" Asked Rarity.

"Hu?" She asked not paying attention to the conversation.

Rarity didn't reply, she rolled her eyes.

"OK GUYS! IT THE WEEKEND SO, SLEEP OVER AT MY HOUSE!" Screamed Pinkie Pie.

"Pinkie please, stop screaming!" Said Sunset Shimmer.

Sunset also noticed Applejack staring at someone. It looked like Caramel, that's when she saw Applejack drooling.

"Applejack? Do you know your drooling?" Asked Sunset wiping Ajs face with her hanky.

"Oh um, sorry y'all." She said shaking her head and taking out her car keys.                                                                                                                                     Sunset was a little taken off by Applejacks response, but didn't look into it.

"Ok girls sleepover at my house! All of you be there by 5:30pm!" Said Pinkie.

All the girls agreed and headed home to pack.

   At Pinkies house,

"Ok everyone let's PARTY!" Yelled Pinkie while turning on the music.

When she did, it played classical music.

"Oo Pinkie I didn't know you lik-"

"Its Mauds," Pinkie said cutting Rarity off while putting on a new song. This time to rock. Everyone began dancing crazily except Applejack. She just looked at her phone the whole time.

"Hey Aj? Are you gunna dance?" Asked rainbow dash.

"Uh no," Aj said still looking at her phone.

Rainbow just shrugged and walked away.

   10 minutes later,

"Ok guys! Who's ready for Truth or Dare?" Asked Rainbow.

"I-i dont k-know if I should play," said Fluttershy.

"Me neither! Its unlady like to play such game!" Said Rarity turning away from the group.

"What about you Applejack? Wanna play?" Asked Rainbow.

Finally Applejack looked up from her phone, and looked at the group.

"Sure ah guess." She said shrugging.

"Come on guys! Applejacks playing! So is Pinkie!" Said RD.

"Fine I'll play!" They replied.

They all got in a circle, and started playing with Rarity.

"Rarity, Truth or Dare?" Asked Twilight.

"Hmm Truth." She replied.

Twilight always had a hard time thinking of Truths and Dares. Till she thought of one.

"Do you like Applejacks big brother, Big Machintosh?" Twilight asked while keeping her eyes on Applejack.

When Twilight asked this, Aj didn't even look up from her phone. At this everyone was puzzled.

"No of course not!" Rarity said with no one paying attention to her.

When it was Raritys turn to ask someone she chose Applejack.

"Applejack, Truth or dare." Asked Rarity.

This time she did look up.

"Truth...." She said quietly.

Rarity, thought until she came up with a good one.

"Applejack who do you have a crush on?" She asked smugly.

Applejack just looked at all her friends and opened her mouth.

"C-caramel...." She said in a Whisper.

Everyone gasped, while Rainbow dash just laughed.

After a couple minutes, the girls decided to talk to Applejack about it.

"Applejack darling, you do know he's out of your leave right?" Asked Rarity.

"Rarity! That's so rude!" Said Sunset Shimmer.

"What its true! She has absolutely no chance with a guy like him!" She replied.

At that point Applejack was mad she could explode.

"LIKE YOU HAVE A CHANCE EITHER? REALLY RARITY! YALL AINT GOT NOBODAY EITHER SO SHUT THE BUCK UP AND DEAL WITH IT!" Screamed Applejack as she began to cry, and run the the bathroom.

"Rude much?" Asked Rarity.

"Rarity! Stop! Can't you see she's upset already?" Asked Twilight.

   In the bathroom,

(Applejacks point of view)

Ah knew ah should have never told them! Especially Rarity! Ah'm so stupid!

"Applejack? please come out! I'm so sorry darling!" Said Rarity.

"Yeah come out or I'm kicking the door in!" Said Rainbow banging on the door.

"Why? So y'all can keep sayin' he's outta mah league?" Ah asked crying.

Ah was just so done. Bein' criticized and everything.

"We're sorry please come out! I'm so so so sorry!" Said Rarity.

"Fine," ah said unlocking the door and coming out.

"Now we're making progress!" Said Twilight.

    On Monday,

Ah was walking in the school and everyone was whisperin' stuff whenever ah walk by. Ah didn't know why and it was strange.

"Did you hear that Applejack likes Caramel?" Asked one girl.

"Yeah, does he know?" The other girl said.

"No!" The other girl replied.

Its like where ever ah go everyone watches me! Did someone tell them? Ah was deep in thought that ah didn't even see a football coming mah way and it hit me right in the back of the head.

"Ouch!" Ah said rubbing mah head and picking the ball up.

"Oh sorry Aj! I didn't mean to hit you!" Said Caramel coming over.

"Its alright Caramel," ah said giving him his football.

"Are you ok? Let me see you head." He said turning me around.

He took off my hat and put it on his head, then felt around mah hair. It felt really weird but nice in another way. Until people started whispering about the scene.

"Look at them! Dont they know we're watching?" Asked one kid.

After that was said, ah turned around fast, and came nose to nose to Caramel. Ah was so embarrassed, ah could back up.

"S-sorry," was all ah could say.

He was the one to back up, and ah grabbed mah hat. Then he frowned and took it from mah head again.

"I liked wearing your hat! Its comfy!" He said smiling that cute smile at me.

When he did that ah blushed lightly, and smiled mah own smile. It all got ruined when Diamond Ring, (Diamond Tiaras older sister) came over to us.

"Oh Caramel!" She said in a sweet voice.

He frowned and closed his eyes until she took mah hat off his head and threw it across the hallway.

"Hey! Why did yall do that?" Ah asked annoyed.

"Get lost cowgirl, I have to talk to melly here about the Fall Formal!" She said pushing me away.

Ah walked and grabbed mah hat and put it on. Then ah went to the bathroom and cried. Never in mah life have ah cried so hard. Never!

      An hour later,

It was time for mah math class, and Diamond Ring was in it. When ah walked in the class everyone looked at me. Ah knew they saw mah eyes red and stained with tears. Ah was lucky if Mr. Discord didn't pull me out to talk to me.

"Ok, Applejack? Where is your late pass?" He asked writing down on his atendence sheet.

"A-ah *sniff* dont have one." Ah said sniffling.

"Ok well one more late and you will be sent to the principles office. Are we clear?" He asked facing me.

"Yes sir..." Ah said sighing.

After that he began his lesson, but around 10:34am, the 2 girls behind me (which were Diamond Ring and Adagio Dazzle) started talking about me.

"Ugh, how long does she think that will last?" Asked Diamond.

"I dont know. But after you and Caramel go to the dance together, those two will never be around each other." Said Adagio.

Then they both laughed, attracting the attention of Mr. Discord.

"Ladies why are you laughing?" He asked.

"Oh its nothing really! Just how stupid Applejack will feel when me and Caramel go to the Fall formal together!" Laughed Diamond Ring.

"What a redneck!" Said Adagio.

That's what ticked me off. Right there ah couldn't control mahslef, so ah did the best thing ah could. Ah punched Diamond Ring right in her nose. Making it bleed.

"Ow! Oh my gosh! Ahh! My dress!" She screamed.

"CALL ME A REDNECK ONE MORE TIME! AND BOTH OF YALL WILL BE BUCKED THROUGHT THAT WALL!" Ah screamed almost in tears.

"APPLEJACK!" Screamed Mr. Discord.

Ah had enough, ah just grabbed mah bookbag and walked out of the room and went to the office. This was going to be hard to explain to Granny and Big MacIntosh.

Pinkies Party down showdown!

  "Applejack, just calm down darling!" Said Rarity hugging me.

Ah know it was wrong fur me to punch Diamond ring but, when you call me a redneck, there is only 2 ways this could go.

"Rare? Can y'all stop huggin' me?" Ah asked annoyed.

Finally she let go, and everyone looked at me with the (applejack are you ok) eyes. They always get me.

"I'm fine y'all, just upset that Diamond Ring is going to ask Caramel to the dance." Ah said sipping mah juice box.

It was lunch and ah really didn't eat anything today, except maybe an apple and a juice box.

"Ok we're just worried about you. I know it hard being looked at all the time." Said Twilight putting her arm around me.

Ah was fine but ah had to go tah mah back up plan.

   After school in the parking lot,

"Hey Applejack!" Screamed Caramel running forward me.

"Oh howdy Caramel. What are y'all doin?" Ah asked.

"I wanted you ask you something," He said putting his hands in his pockets.

Ah nodded and waited.

"Um is it true, that you punched Diamond Ring in the nose?" He asked looking into mah eyes.

Those teal eyes made me melt, ah couldn't look away. Ah just smiled and just stared into them.

"Aj? You there?" He asked tapping mah shoulder.

Ah shook mah head,

"Oh uh sorry and yeah it's true....y'all mad? Ah kinda messed your date to the Formals nose up." Ah asked looking down at mah boots.

"My date? Oh I said no. She's just too perky! I'm waiting for the right girl to ask me." He said looking at me and he started to whistle.

"Oh! That reminds me," ah said searching through mah book bag.

Ah then found a pink invitation with a ball on sticker on it and gave it to him.

"This is fur Pinkie's birthday party tonight, it would mean a lot to m-Pinkie if you would come!" Ah said trying to hide my blush.

"S-sure I'll be there, just one last thing. I'll be hanging out with you." He said grabbing mah hat off mah head and putting it on.

That's mah moment, kiss him Applejack its mah chance. But then her gave me mah hat back and ran off with his friends.

"BYE APPLEJACK! SEE YOU TONIGHT!" He yelled.

After he yelled that everyone there looked at me. Ah just ran to mah truck and drove away.

   At Pinkies party,

Ah just got here and Ratity is already rushing me into a dress. It was nice dont get me wrong, it was gold, with orange and red apples.

"Thanks Rare." Ah said twirling.

After a few minutes people started showing up. But the only person ah was looking fur was Caramel. Until ah finally saw him,

"Caramel! Over here!" Ah said throught the crowd.

He didn't hear me, he was talking with, Diamond Ring. It looked like, she was trying to kiss him. Ah could help mahself, ah ran upstairs into one of Rainbows guest rooms, and cried. Ah dont know fur how long but ah didn't care.

   And hour later,

Ah just woke up and right now ah just wanted to leave. That's until the door opened and walked in Caramel.

"Look who decided to show up!" Ah said sitting up and crossing mah arms refusing to look at him.

"Sorry, Diamond Ring just kept trying to kiss me. Like she wouldnt stop following me. I just managed to get away from her." Said grabbing mah face with his hand.

"Its ok ah guess," ah said getting lost in his eyes.

Finally after a while, ah decided it was mah time to kiss him. Ah leaned in and kisses him. He actually kissed back! He didn't pull away until someone opened the door.

"Dont worry Bon-Bon! No ones in her-" said Lyra looking at us.

Then she walked out still mouth wide open.

"That, was strange." Said Caramel looking in mah eyes.

"Y-yeah, look ah'm sorry bout that. A-ah didn't mean t-"

He kissed me again, this time putting his tounge in mah mouth. It was so wrong but felt so right. After a while ah pulled away.

"Caramel," ah began.

"Yeah?" He said.

"D-do you love me?" Ah asked looking in his eyes.

He didn't say anything, he just looked at me.

"Yes. Is that bad?" He asked.

Ah didn't say anything, ah just kissed him again this time rapping mah arms around him. It got really intense, next thing ah knew ah was on top of him and kissing him hard. He then took off the top of mah dress, and ah took of his shirt. Ah can't believe ah'm doin' this. After that he took of his pants and ah took off mah dress. He put a condom on and he grinded on me, it hurt for a while but, then ah got lost in moans.

"Oh! Oh yeah!" Ah said kissing his neck.

We continued for awhile, then we stopped and ah fell asleep. Then ah remember he getting up and leaving.

  The next day,

Ah woke up in Rainbows house and it was 6:45am.

"Aj? You in there its time to get up!" Said Rainbow.

"Ok!" Ah said getting mah clothes and putting them on. When ah walked out the girls looked at me.

"Woah! What happened to you?" Asked Pinkie looking at mah messed up hair.

"Nothing its called bed head!" Ah said rubbing mah eyes.

"Where did you go last night? We didn't see you at all!" Asked Sunset.

"Ah dont even remember!" Ah said finding it hard to walk.

Ah was hurting bad, it was probably from sleeping on that hard bed

"Are you ok? Your walking like you pulled a ton of muscles." Said Rainbow grabbing mah arm and holding on to me.

"Ah'm fine! Jus' hurtin'." Ah said trying to walk down the stairs hold onto the rails.

"Your not fine! Let me help you Applejack!" Said Twilight holding mah hands.

After we got downstairs, we ate breakfast. Then we left for school.

What about us?

         It's 7:56 am and ah just arrived at school. Ah finally got myself situated and I no longer feel the pain ah was in. The real question is, what did ah do last night?

"Applejack are you sure you don't know what you did last night?" Asked Rainbow, walking with me to class.

"Ah'm totally sure." Ah groaned, rubbing my eyes.

"Oh look who it is! The bumpkin and the lesbian althele." Spoke a snobby voice.

We turned around and saw Diamond Ring and Adagio Dazzle.

"What do yah want?" Ah snarled.

"Oh nothing much! Just wanted to know what happened to Caramel last night. He left me right in the middle of the party, probably to hang out with a bumpkin. Like.....you!" She mocked, but while smirking.

"Leave her alone Diamond." Spoke a voice behind me.

"Oh hey Caramel! Fancy....seeing you here." Diamond flirted, laying her head on his shoulder.

After that he moved and walked to my side, and grabbed my hat.

"Better leave Apples alone. Before I get my cattle prod on yah! YEHAW!" He laughed.

This didn't make me laugh, ah just wondered if he was mocking me.

"Please Caramel, you don't wanna defend her. Face it, your mine!" She snarled.

"I ain't anyone's! I'm single and ready to mingle with dis lil' lady right here!" He said putting a arm around me.

"NO! Your mine! Just......just....UGH!" She cried and stomped away.

"Yeah um this just got awkward, so ill catch you later AJ!" Yelled Rainbow dash walking away.

"Yah didn't havta do that Mel. Ah can handle myself." Ah spoke taking his arm off.

"I was just playin'! It's fun!" He says punching my arm lightly.

"Wait......you....Yah....didn't mean that?" Ah asked.

"Course not, I have a girlfriend. You know that girl Indigo Zap? Yeah that's her." He blushed.

Ah didn't say anything, ah just grabbed may hat and walked away. Ah didn't even look back.