It's hard being unpopular.

I just signed up here, and simply wanted to present my story.
In english class, our teacher asked us to write a story in a specific style.
She called it the "post-it" style.
I liked this style of writing, and continued to write my own story.

Tell me if you have/find:
*Grammar or writing mistakes. Please, DO point them out so I can improve.
*Any ideas to improve the plot of the story.
*Suggestions about the style of writing I used.
*Constructive criticism. Anything from "F*** you!" to "It would be better if you changed (…)" is welcome.
*If you don't like this "post-it" style, just tell me. Maybe I'll change it to a regular style of writing.
*The parts written in *[text]* are simply there to give you a clear picture of how things look like.
I didn't care about spelling in these parts, because they are simply to clarify the picture.
So if you do not like the story to give you `pictures´, and simply want to imagine your own world:
Please DO NOT read these parts.

Thank you for reading.

Any other questions? Just ask me.