Trixie's Revenge

by nerdyGAMERgrl

Rating: everyone
Tags: Original Character, Trixie, Spike, Adventure, Main 6, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Other
Length: 2608

Trixie has had enough with Twilight Sparkle's magical abilities. She has decided to take control of her, then, all of Equestria.

Trixie returns to Ponyville to revisit Twilight Sparkle, ever since she became the Princess of Friendship, she craved and longed for power. This time, Twilight was going to obey her commands then, all of Equestria.

Will the Mane Six and Spike save Equestria before it's too late? Or will they fall under Trixie's spell?

Published 2015-10-03 04:10:01 UTC
Last updated 2015-10-03 17:50:01 UTC

The Visit

-Trixie's P.O.V-

I trotted down to Twilight's castle quickly, I knew that she would be surprised to see me. After all, I am The Great and Powerful Trixie, the one who tried to pretty much rule Ponyville. I knocked on the door to hear hoofsteps stepping closer to the door, the door opened and I saw Twilight's face.

"Trixie?" Twilight said, confused. "Why are you here?"

"I just wanted to practice my new magic abilities." I said, smiling.

"Let me guess, you want another magic duel like last time?" Twilight said, chuckling a little.

"No, I've learned my mistake from that..."

"Then what?"

"Well, it's called hypnotism."

"Hypnotism? That is just in old Pony Tales!"

"Please Twilight? I really want to make it up to you!" I said, looking sincere.

"Well, alright. But make it quick, I have a spell book from the Princesses i'm going to read." She said, levitating a old purple book with her magic.

She led me inside and into her room, where Spike was sleeping peacefully. Twilight sat down and looked at me, "Okay, I'm ready Trixie!" Twilight said, smiling. I focused on my magic, a pink glow began to appear and Twilight stared into it. What she didn't know was that hypnotism wasn't an old pony tale, her eyes began to turn pink as she stared.

"T-T-Trixie... something's h-happening..." Twilight said, her eyes halfway shut.

"Relax Twilight, fall deeper into my trance. It's okay..." I intoned.

Twilight smiled and said, "O-Okay..." Her eyes glowing pink almost completely.

"Don't resist, it's much more pleasant to let yourself go..."

"It is pleasant..." Twilight said, smiling.

"You feel very relaxed, your eyes are starting to close.. just let them shut. You must sleep."

With that, Twilight's eyes glowed completely and she lay down on her bed, she was in hypnotic sleep.

"Listen to me Twilight, all you want to do is obey my every command..."

"Yes... obey..." Twilight mumbled drowsily.

"Whenever I say the word, 'Obey Trixie', you will obey my every command. But when I say, 'Natural Twilight' you will awaken from your trance." I said, happy with myself.

"Yes... Trixie..."

"Awaken."

Twilight woke up and looked at me, her eyes back to normal. "Woah, did it work or not?" she asked me, a dazed look on her face. "Oh, it was great," I said, smiling. "Thank's Twilight. Oh, and one more thing..."

"Yes?"

"Obey Trixie."

Twilight's eyes changed to pink and she looked at me.

"Trixie, what shall I do for you?" She asked, completely under my spell.

"Give me a book on hypnotism." I said.

She grabbed a book with her magic, the book was labelled Hypnosis & Mind Control. I turned to her and gave her another command, "Very good Twilight, now go to sleep. You will wake up as you're normal self and tell your friends that I will be staying here. Understood?".

"Yes, Trixie..." She said, before crawling into bed.

I smiled as she fell asleep, I then went into the guest room and slept. Soon her little group of friends will be under my control, but I had to do it in secret. All I had to do was figure out my next target, I knew just who to go after,

Fluttershy.

Author's Note

Quote from next chapter:

"Of course Trixie! I'd be happy to practice magic with you!" I said, smiling.

I hope you enjoyed! This is my first fanfic, I really hope you like it.

A Shy Subject

-Fluttershy's P.O.V-

I woke up to Angel jumping for my attention, he seemed to have something urgent to say. I looked at him sleepily, "What is it Angel? Are you hungry?" I asked. Angel pulled out a purple wizard hat covered in blue and white stars, I knew what was happening in an instant. I leaped out of bed and ran out into the throne room to find Twilight drinking some tea with Trixie.

"Twilight? Why is Trixie here? What is going on?" I asked, confused.

"Oh, Fluttershy! You are just the person I wanted to see, I'm thinking of training Trixie in her magic abilities, so she will be staying here for a while." Twilight said, smiling.

Trixie looked at me and smiled too, I knew something was up, I knew she was up to no good. "So, Fluttershy, you would be perfect for a little magic spell I've been working on! What do you say, Will you help out?" she said, still smiling.

"Of course Trixie! I'd be happy to practice magic with you! " I said, smiling.

I knew it wouldn't be effective anyway, it would probably tickle. Trixie smiled and nodded, "How does 1:00 tonight sound? When everyone's asleep." She said.

That's when I totally knew that something was up.

"Well, okay..." I said.

-Trixie's P.O.V-

I waited by the door hoping Fluttershy would be there. It was 1:20 at night, how could she be 20 minutes late? Suddenly the door creaked open and Fluttershy peeked in, "Sorry I'm late, I'm still having trouble finding my way around the castle..." she said in her usual whispery voice.

"It's fine, wanna start?" I said, smiling at her.

"First, tell me what's really going on," She said sternly, "Why are you really here?"

"I wanted to improve my magic, and look... I'm sorry about that whole Alicorn Amulet fiasco... It was the amulet's fault." I said, looking upset.

Fluttershy blinked twice and frowned, "Sorry, I just felt like I couldn't trust you..." She said.

"It's fine..." I said, my horn glowing with magic, "Just look at my horn's magic."

Fluttershy looked at my horn, her eyes suddenly flickered a bit of pink and then turned completely pink. She smiled as I said, "You want to obey my commands..."

She nodded.

"When I say the word, Obey Trixie, you will obey me. When I say, Neutral Fluttershy, you will go back to being your normal self." I commanded.

"Yes, Trixie..."

"Awaken."

Fluttershy shook her head, her eyes turned back to normal.

"Huh? Did we do the spell?" she asked drowsily.

"We sure did... Obey Trixie." I said.

Fluttershy's eyes turned pink, "I want you to tell Rainbow Dash to meet you in the guest room tomorrow night at midnight. It will be urgent. Understood?" I commanded.

"Yes, Trixie." Fluttershy said as she flew to her room to sleep.

I smiled with pleasure. I knew that Rainbow Dash would be a challenge, but it would work out.

Author's Note

Quote For Next Chapter:

"Woah, Fluttershy. What's with your eyes? Why are we even here?" I said, confused.

After Rainbow, who should Trixie's next victim be? Your choice!

Rainbow's Surprise

-Rainbow Dash's P.O.V-

I sneaked down the hallway drowsily, why would Fluttershy want me in the guest room in the middle of the night? Maybe it was something important, I decided to question it when I got there. I saw a faint pink glow in the guest room as I walked in, "Fluttershy?" I whispered, but loud enough for her to hear.

"Oh, she's right here Rainbow Dash..." said a voice.

"Wha?"

Before I could rush out, I heard the door shut. There was no way to get out of there. The lights flickered on and I saw Fluttershy, but her eyes were bright pink and Trixie stood next to her.

"Woah, Fluttershy. What's with your eyes? Why are we even here?" I said, confused.

Fluttershy didn't answer, but Trixie said, "Hold her eyes in place, will you Fluttershy?"

"Yes, Trixie." Fluttershy said.

My eyes widened, I knew exactly what was going on. I had to get out of there. I tried to unlock the door, but Fluttershy grabbed me and dragged me towards Trixie. Crap! I thought, struggling to get free from Fluttershy's grasp.

Trixie's horn began to glow.

"Relax," Trixie intoned, "You are becoming very calm..."

No! You can keep her out!

"It's much more pleasant to let go..."

NO!

"Fall deeper under the spell, let your mind fade..."

I... No... maybe falling deeper is a good idea... I thought, letting the beautiful pink color of the horn put me in deeper.

"How do you feel Rainbow Dash?" Trixie said, smiling.

"Mmm... Incredible..." I said, smiling at her.

"You can always feel this way..."

That is so true... I thought, smiling more.

"You need to do one thing, obey me... It feels good to obey me..."

"Yes, Trixie..." I said, allowing her beautiful horn take full control of me.

"Whenever I say Obey Trixie, you will obey my commands. When I say Neutral Rainbow, you will return to normal." Trixie intoned.

"Yes, Trixie..."

"Awaken."

I woke up, suddenly aware of my surroundings. I realized the hadn't probably hypnotized me yet, I ran towards the door when I heard Trixie say, "Obey Trixie." I stopped, what was I thinking? I was running away from Trixie! I turned and bowed to her, "What shall I do Trixie?" I asked, smiling.

"Forget about my true plans when you wake up. You will also help me even out of your trance, Understood?"

"Yes Trixie."

-Trixie's P.O.V-

It took a while, but I did it. I hypnotized Rainbow Dash! I watched her walk off into her room to sleep in Neutral Mode. I realized someone was at the window, her horn glowing a vibrant blue. "Hey! Who are you?" I shouted. The pony sped off and hid, she was nowhere to be found.

-Mysterious Pony P.O.V-

I shut the door to my house and panted, I took pulled down my hood and decided to send a letter to someone special, a friend of mine. This was urgent. I took out a note and wrote;

Dear Spike,

I need your help, Trixie has hypnotized Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash. I think she's using some sort of black magic, if she invites you to the Guest Room, don't listen to her. She will try to take over your mind, Twilight is hypnotized too. She knows I've been around, but not my true identity.

You must not show her this note, send it back to me with a response on the back as soon as you can tonight. Do NOT let anyone see you. She might hypnotize you next, I don't know. Just be careful

-Lovely Heart

I finished my note and sent it with a magic spell. A few minutes later, it returned and it said;

Dear Lovely Heart,

Thank you SO much for sending me this. Twilight HAS been a little nicer to Trixie than normal, Listen, meet me behind the castle tomorrow at 6:00 A.M. I won't tell anyone I promise.

-Spike the Dragon

I smiled. I just hoped he wouldn't be hypnotized when I got there.

A Hypnotic Party

-Pinkie Pie's P.O.V-

I was decorating my bedroom with balloons and streamers when a knock at the door interrupted me. I looked over at the door, "Who's there?" I asked, I loved a good knock knock joke.

"It's Spike!" said a familiar voice.

"It's Spike, who?"

"Pinkie, just open the door."

"Huh, I don't get it." I said, shrugging.

"Pinkie!"

"Ohhhh!" I realized, opening the door to see Spike.

"Pinkie, we need to talk."

I nodded and sat down.

"Listen-"

"Let me guess, a giant cake monster covered all of the Everfree Forest with ice cream and you want me to eat it. Right?" I asked.

"No, not even close," Spike said, "This is serious Pinkie!"

"Okay..."

"Trixie-"

"Has returned and has taken over Fluttershy, Twilight, and Rainbow's mind and wants to take over all of Equestria?" I asked, smiling.

"H-How did you-"

"Just a hunch. Anyway, let's stop Trixie!" I said, bouncing out of my chair.

-Spike's P.O.V-

I was happy that Pinkie Pie understood, and wanted to help. But I couldn't put all of my trust in her, she could be under Trixie's spell. That night, me and Pinkie sneaked over to Trixie's room, she was smiling and happy about something.

She turned around and looked at the door, her horn glowing as she chuckled.

She knew we were here!

-Trixie's P.O.V-

Well of course I knew they were there!

I could hear Pinkie say as I passed her room, "Let's stop Trixie, then they spoke their plan out loud! What a bunch of idiotic ponies- er pony and a dragon.

I began to see their eyes flicker a bit of pink.

"Come in and relax, it's good to relax."

They began to enter, smiling.

"Just relax, it's amazing to relax. Allow this wonderful feeling to travel through your body." I said, chuckling a little.

Pinkie began to drool a little and Spike did too. That's SO nasty, "Wipe that drool off your face." They did as I commanded and I smiled at them, their eyes were almost completely glowing.

"Fall deeply under my spell, it's good to fall under." I said, chuckling.

Their eyes were glowing completely now, they were totally under.

"When I say Obey Trixie, you will obey my commands. When I say Neutral Pinkie to Pinkie Pie, she will return to normal. When I say Neutral Spike to Spike, he will return to normal." I said.

"Yes, Trixie." They both said.

"Oh, and forget about me hypnotizing everyone in Neutral Mode."

"Yes, Trixie."

"Awaken."

Spike and Pinkie went to normal, staring at me, they said, "What are we doing in here?"

"You were sleepwalking." I said. "Go back to bed."

"Well, okay. Goodnight." Spike said, leading Pinkie away.

I chuckled happily.

-Lovely Heart's P.O.V-

I ran into my house, slamming the door behind me. My little sister, suddenly awoke and looked at me. "Sis, what's going on? What did Trixie do this time?" She asked, her bright blue hair in her eyes.

"She hypnotized Spike and Pinkie." I said, a tear running down my cheek.

My sister sighed and walked over to me, "It's fine, we'll be okay. We know her secret, we can ignore her."

"Joy, listen. Life isn't like a video game. You can't just ignore the bad guys like you do. You have to take action." I said.

Joy Stick frowned.

"I don't ignore the bad guys." she said, brows furrowed.

"Right." I said, chuckling. "Get to sleep."

"Oh, I need to get the mail. I forgot to today."

"Alright, I'll be asleep." I said, trotting off to bed.

I sighed, thinking about my sister. Joy Stick was my life, I had never met my father. My mother died from a fire in Fillydelphia, we lived in Dusk Shine's Home for Fillys, my sister was the only thing I had left. If something happened to her, I would have never forgiven myself. I turned to the window, the stars glistened and the moon shined brightly. I smiled.

Joy Stick would be okay.

-Joy Stick's P.O.V-

I stepped over to the mail box, I frowned. It was all bills just like last month, I began to walk in when I felt a tap on my shoulder. I turned around to see a pony with white hair and a purple robe.

"Hello there," I said, smiling, "Do you need something?"

"Indeed," the mare said, her horn glowing.

"I need you to relax."

Author's Note

Dun dun DUUUUUNNNNNNNN!!!!

What do you think Trixie will do? Your choice! Comment below! :pinkiehappy:

P.S I added some background to Lovely Heart because there's gonna be something HUGE happening later in the story. Something you guys will like. It's also why I added Dark as a category. There might be a little bit of gore. Okay, A LOT OF GORE. But it'll still be cool. Please enjoy.