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The normal life of Nitpick Bittersweet

by Ryusun
Meet Nitpick Bittersweet, a painfully average guy who transfered to CHS in his second year of High School. There he will learn the values of life with other people and how to be someone more likable. This is his story.

Follow the life of Nitpick Bittersweet, a whinny, insensitive, reckless and prideful teenager that over-thinks life with poetic nonsense. Along the way, he'll forge new allies, rekindle with old friends, and create new enemies. With each mistake he makes, a new problem arises for him. With each lesson learned, he becomes a better person... but will it be too late when all is said and done?

This is his story... and it's not a very good one.

Notes:
-Each chapter has a different story telling method. Some are from a first person perspective with a certain character in particular and others are from a third person perspective exploring multiple characters at the same time.
-The pacing of this story is slower than a snail. If you are a not a fan of long novels, then don't read unless you want to give it a shot. This is my first fanfic and the first several chapters clearly shows.
-Any constructive comment is welcomed on the comment section.

Teen
Incomplete
Slice of Life
Human
Equestria Girls
 
SMO

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107 Chapters:

  1. Chapter 1 - Enter Nitpick Bittersweet 2015-10-02 20:21:11 UTC
    2108
  2. Chapter 2 - A tour around CHS! My name is Sunset Shimmer! 2015-10-03 02:17:48 UTC
    1765
  3. Chapter 3 - As brave as shy! Kindful Fluttershy! 2015-10-03 22:50:49 UTC
    1180
  4. Chapter 4 - Loyal Passion! Sassy Rainbow Dash! 2015-10-04 00:50:18 UTC
    1779
  5. Chapter 5 - Intellectual Might! Prodigious Twilight Sparkle! 2015-10-04 03:24:25 UTC
    2550
  6. Chapter 6 - Guardian Dog, Caring Spike! 2015-10-05 00:16:29 UTC
    1598
  7. Chapter 7- Old friends... Tweaking Lightbulb and Chocolate Dancer 2015-10-05 01:51:54 UTC
    2609
  8. Chapter 8 - Cranky lesson! 2015-10-09 21:25:06 UTC
    2688
  9. Chapter 9.1 - You are being negative, Flash Sentry! 2015-11-07 07:29:36 UTC
    3150
  10. Chapter 9.2 - You are being wary, Nitpick! 2015-11-07 07:29:46 UTC
    2653
  11. Chapter 10 - His party was popped, Obnoxious Pinkie Pie! 2015-11-09 02:59:51 UTC
    3903
  12. Chapter 11 - A Generous Spirit, Fabulous Rarity! 2015-11-11 21:55:25 UTC
    3694
  13. Chapter 12 - Friendly bickering! And you are annoying her, Flash. 2015-11-16 07:08:04 UTC
    3381
  14. Chapter 13 - A girl´s conversation. 2015-11-18 06:25:45 UTC
    2839
  15. Chapter 14 - Master Librarian, Patient Cheerilee! 2015-11-19 17:56:57 UTC
    2329
  16. Chapter 15 - Applejack´s Pride and the foundation of Ponyville! 2015-11-20 22:24:24 UTC
    1813
  17. Chapter 16 - Nitpick and Twilight´s meaningful moments! Tale 1 2015-11-25 04:28:42 UTC
    3512
  18. Chapter 17 - A Social Confusion starts with a Gossip! 2015-11-26 22:37:05 UTC
    2480
  19. Chapter 18 - Anti-Misunderstaning planning! 2015-11-29 23:00:41 UTC
    2431
  20. Chapter 19 - A fashionable outcome! 2015-12-03 04:39:53 UTC
    4782
  21. Chapter 20 - You are a jerk to me. 2015-12-04 04:10:59 UTC
    1732
  22. Chapter 21 - You are unsociable. 2015-12-05 01:05:18 UTC
    1465
  23. Chapter 22- Unfriendly but reasonable. 2015-12-09 18:14:49 UTC
    2849
  24. Chapter 23- Thanks for keeping your promise. 2015-12-13 15:57:41 UTC
    1341
  25. Chapter 24- Pinkie and Twilight´s meaningful moments! Tale 2 2015-12-14 03:43:26 UTC
    1843
  26. Chapter 25- You are horrible! 2015-12-15 03:14:44 UTC
    3280
  27. Chapter 26- A talk between old friends. 2015-12-16 04:59:00 UTC
    3902
  28. Chapter 27- Just when I thought I could relax. 2015-12-17 05:05:14 UTC
    1734
  29. Chapter 28- Unexpected attitudes. 2015-12-18 04:36:31 UTC
    1762
  30. Chapter 29 - Rainbow and Twilight´s meaningful moments! Tale 3 2015-12-19 03:06:23 UTC
    2882
  31. Chapter 30 - Ideal Loyalty! 2015-12-20 18:30:59 UTC
    5061
  32. Chapter 31- History classes 2015-12-22 00:32:06 UTC
    2408
  33. Chapter 32 - Just hanging around! 2015-12-23 16:45:28 UTC
    3294
  34. Chapter 33 - We will rise again! 2015-12-24 18:25:09 UTC
    2367
  35. Chapter 34- Fluttershy and Twilight´s meaningful moments! Tale 4 2015-12-26 01:22:38 UTC
    1991
  36. Chapter 35- Normal school tests. 2015-12-27 01:02:56 UTC
    2556
  37. Chapter 36- Uncomfortable Awareness. 2015-12-28 06:16:35 UTC
    2149
  38. Chapter 37- Rarity and Twilight´s meaningful moments! Tale 5 2015-12-29 04:56:47 UTC
    2175
  39. Chapter 38- Incomplete reflections. 2015-12-30 21:16:07 UTC
    1992
  40. Chapter 39- Ideal Kindness. 2016-01-01 04:32:29 UTC
    5159
  41. Chapter 40- Am I getting too soft? 2016-01-02 01:05:32 UTC
    2006
  42. Chapter 41 - Applejack and Twilight's meaningful moments! Tale 6 2016-01-04 19:42:52 UTC
    3473
  43. Chapter 42 - Enjoying the fair. 2016-01-08 03:26:35 UTC
    5164
  44. Chapter 43 - With our fists! 2016-01-09 01:39:52 UTC
    6540
  45. Chapter 44 - Sunset and Twilight's meaningful moments! Tale 7 2016-01-10 02:02:33 UTC
    2498
  46. Chapter 45 - Unluckiest, lucky man. 2016-01-11 02:28:08 UTC
    2261
  47. Chapter 46- The Romance of the same Coin! 2016-01-15 04:15:06 UTC
    10519
  48. Chapter 47- The first steps to change. 2016-01-18 03:54:43 UTC
    3968
  49. Chapter 48- An obscure allience. 2016-01-25 00:10:25 UTC
    6632
  50. Chapter 49- A catalyst. 2016-01-29 18:18:05 UTC
    5126
  51. Chapter 50 - Twilight, my friend. 2016-02-04 03:38:35 UTC
    9090
  52. Chapter 51- New beginning and clearing doubts. 2016-02-07 18:52:18 UTC
    4359
  53. Chapter 52 - Lightbulb and Twilight's meaningful moments! Tale 8 2016-02-13 06:22:34 UTC
    5317
  54. Chapter 53- I'm not Princess Twilight! Part 1 2016-02-19 03:42:59 UTC
    5342
  55. Chapter 54- I'm not Princess Twilight! Part 2 2016-02-21 07:55:17 UTC
    5201
  56. Chapter 55- I'm not Princess Twilight! Final Part 2016-02-29 04:49:06 UTC
    5022
  57. Chapter 56- You are our one and only 2016-03-06 18:45:19 UTC
    2907
  58. Chapter 57- Women are trouble... or is it me? 2016-03-10 04:13:54 UTC
    6149
  59. Chapter 58- Shared Leadership 2016-03-18 20:18:47 UTC
    6017
  60. Chapter 59- Persuasions... 2016-03-25 18:53:51 UTC
    6382
  61. Chapter 60- The starting chores. 2016-04-09 04:05:39 UTC
    5182
  62. Chapter 61- The annoying Royals! 2016-04-18 05:44:35 UTC
    5996
  63. Chapter 62- Happy Birthday, Pinkie Pie! 2016-04-18 05:44:45 UTC
    2816
  64. Chapter 63- You are scaring her, Flash! 2016-04-25 01:15:52 UTC
    2764
  65. Chapter 64- Slowly accepting you... 2016-05-01 19:16:30 UTC
    5179
  66. Chapter 65- A time with strangers! 2016-05-10 03:41:10 UTC
    2984
  67. Chapter 66- How we became friends! - Gilda! 2016-05-10 03:41:13 UTC
    2528
  68. Chapter 67- A time with my old role model! 2016-05-15 23:48:51 UTC
    1499
  69. Chapter 68- How we became friends! - Sugarcoat! 2016-05-15 23:48:56 UTC
    4230
  70. Chapter 69- A time in a new place! 2016-05-24 19:19:42 UTC
    2772
  71. Chapter 70- How we became friends! - Reem! 2016-05-30 03:38:19 UTC
    3201
  72. Chapter 71 - How we became friends! - Blueblood! 2016-06-10 22:56:53 UTC
    3622
  73. Chapter 72 - The Evil Dungeon of References! Part 1 2016-06-10 22:56:58 UTC
    4906
  74. Chapter 73- The Evil Dungeon of References! Part 2 2016-06-25 03:41:32 UTC
    6779
  75. Chapter 74 - The Evil Dungeon of References! Part 3 2016-07-09 23:51:13 UTC
    6314
  76. Chapter 75 - The Evil Dungeon of References! Finale! 2016-07-09 23:51:21 UTC
    3065
  77. Chapter 76 - Your Friendship doesn't make sense! 2016-07-17 23:00:43 UTC
    5226
  78. Chapter 77 - The reason why we always win! 2016-08-03 04:55:32 UTC
    8908
  79. Chapter 78 - Gilda and Twilight's meaningful moments! Tale 9 2016-08-19 17:33:00 UTC
    6659
  80. Chapter 79 - Even in the rain, we all like to talk. 2016-08-31 21:27:41 UTC
    6346
  81. Chapter 80 - The prodigious secretary! 2016-09-10 02:52:38 UTC
    6899
  82. Chapter 81 - Ideal Laughter! 2016-09-22 18:25:21 UTC
    2953
  83. Chapter 82 - A good student! 2016-10-04 19:37:54 UTC
    5874
  84. Chapter 83 - Meeting their expectations! Part 1 2016-10-18 18:16:42 UTC
    5543
  85. Chapter 84 - Meeting their expectations! Part 2 2016-10-25 23:41:07 UTC
    4812
  86. Chapter 85 - Meeting their expectations! Part 3 2016-11-01 02:04:01 UTC
    7194
  87. Chapter 86 - Meeting their expectations! Final part 2016-11-08 03:22:10 UTC
    5489
  88. Chapter 87 -Even in our free time, we all like to talk. 2016-11-17 07:37:30 UTC
    7237
  89. Chapter 88 - One uncomfortable moment. 2016-11-25 04:57:10 UTC
    5304
  90. Chapter 89 - Blueblood and Twilight's meaningful moments! Tale 10 2016-12-10 04:06:16 UTC
    6579
  91. Chapter 90 - The first storytelling. 2016-12-23 01:45:34 UTC
    3936
  92. Chapter 91 - An unexpected behavior. 2017-01-13 01:15:18 UTC
    8589
  93. Chapter 92 - Preparations for a fun day! 2017-01-24 02:29:08 UTC
    7027
  94. Chapter 93 - A little talk between Equines. 2017-02-03 01:07:29 UTC
    4725
  95. Chapter 94 - Because everything... 2017-02-15 04:24:24 UTC
    8365
  96. Chapter 95 - Can be deceiving... 2017-02-27 23:44:58 UTC
    9433
  97. Chapter 96 - And troubling Princess Twilight... 2017-03-28 04:13:26 UTC
    9188
  98. Chapter 97 - Was a means to an end. 2017-04-11 04:21:55 UTC
    9879
  99. Chapter 98 - The state of my reality. 2017-04-27 04:36:39 UTC
    9203
  100. Chapter 99 - The second storytelling. 2017-05-09 04:28:21 UTC
    6049
  101. Chapter 100 - The reason I must go on! 2017-05-22 05:14:25 UTC
    10928
  102. Chapter 101 - Because the little voice awakened me. 2017-07-06 05:14:14 UTC
    3804
  103. Chapter 102 - Found by a peculiar source of hope. 2017-07-06 05:14:19 UTC
    10008
  104. Chapter 103 - A nice talk, followed by an unsettling argue, and an uncertain future. 2017-09-24 01:39:37 UTC
    10874
  105. Chapter 104 - Because the little voice is acknowledges me. 2017-09-24 01:39:42 UTC
    6834
  106. Chapter 105 - Screwing people... 2018-01-01 01:00:58 UTC
    6459
  107. Chapter 106 - And screwed futures. 2018-01-01 01:16:03 UTC
    4666