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Celestia Visits Nightmare Moon

by Bad Dragon
Nightmare Moon tries to persuade Celestia to let her off the moon.

It’s time for a routine check up on Nightmare Moon. Celestia removes all potential means of escape to make sure the dark captive stays put. Despite her busy schedule and the memory of her sister still fresh in her mind, the alicorn in mourning finds it in her heart to talk to the condemned pony on the moon.

[You may also enjoy the Youtube reading and mp3 download that are available for this story.]

*The story was inspired by DramaPony video.

*This story was also granted a sequel: A Monster In Thine Image, written by Foals Errand.

Not all of the feedback is in the comment section below, so I’m posting the rest of it here:

The story is painful to read if you really love Luna. ~Starlight Uplifting

This story is great, I love how you depicted Celestia and Luna’s characters! The vague mystery strewn throughout the story is brilliant, you did a great job with this story, and I hope that the suggestions I’ve made serve to help you make the story even better! You have a great and creative mind, keep it up! ~Plagueboy23

The violence is justified, I mean, Luna did some pretty nasty stuff, and Celestia feels utterly betrayed. ~DaeCat

Complete
Tragedy
Dark
Drama
Gore
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
 
PNP

3298 words: Estimated 16 minutes to read

1 Chapter:

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