Bazz Quills early birthday surprise

by ShadowAndEmil

Rating: mature
Tags: Dark, Sad
Length: 747

The young colt Bazz Quill wakes up the day before his birthday, unknowing of what lie ahead.

The story is about the young, 4 year old colt, Bazz Quill. The story takes place the day before his birthday and is about the events that leads up to the most horrible experience in his life.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-05-31 21:31:17 UTC

Chapter 1

"Bazz Quills early birthday surprise" - By Emil and ShadowThePony

It was an early morning, the sun was shining and the birds where singing their beautiful songs.

The young colt Bazz Quill had just woken up. He was in a very good mood for tomorrow was his 5th birthday.

Bazz got out of his bed and jumped down the stairs and into the living room where his mother had prepared his breakfast. She had made a tasty apple pie with some big macintosh apples in it and some hay and oats on the sides. The young colt quickly ate it all for he wanted to prepare for his big day tomorrow.

Shortly after, the two ponies went out to the market to buy some delicious apples and the other ingredients for a perfect apple cake to celebrate Bazz's 5th birthday. His mother spottet Apple Jack and Apple Bloom selling some fresh and delicious looking apples.

She told Bazz to come quickly and she started to galop towards them to get the best apples of the bunch. The young pony tried to keep up with her, but with his short legs he quickly fell behind and then his mother disappeared in the crowd.

The marketplace was huge seen through the young colts eyes, so he decided to look around the market himself. He was amazed at all the shops and all the goods being sold. He walked around for a few minutes but then he saw some cake on the grass. He walked over and thought to himself: "I might as well eat it".

It tasted delicious and he quickly spotted another piece. He ran over and ate that too and when he was done, he saw another piece of cake!

He kept spotting cake and eating it. He slowly came further and further away from the marketplace and before he knew what happened, he was in a old, dark and abandoned house.

As he reached for the last piece of cake, he looked up and saw 2 unfamiliar eyes and a scary smile. It was way to dark for him to see whom he was looking at. The only thing he could see, was that the pony in front of him was a stallion, a really big one.

The young colts heart started to beat very fast and he was too scared to move! As the stallion moved closer to the little paralyzed colt, Bazz was wondering what was happening. He looked down and saw something that he had seen before, but never in this size.

The stallion jumped over him and then the little pony felt something poking him from behind. He was scared out of his mind, and in an instant the stallions long and hard penis penetrated his tiny arsehole.

Bazz screamed in pain as his butt was forcibly stretched to a point where his anus ring almost thore apart.

The little colt screamed "IT HURTS, IT HURTS!" as he was continuously pounded by the huge stallions rock hard penis. There was a short break in the pounding as the stallion responded with a single "Eeyup". Then he continued to violently rape the young and helpless colt.

42 minutes and several orgasms later, Bazz had no more energy to even make a single sound and he was completely still. The stallion took his empty penis out of the colts anus and disappeared from the house and the exhausted little colt was left alone, completely covered in sperm and tears, then he blacked out.

Several hours later he heard a familiar voice coming from outside, it was his mother and several other ponies shouting his name and looking for him. He mustered up what little strength he had left to get outside and yell "I'm here!" and then he collapsed on the ground with sperm and blood still dripping out of his asshole. His last thought before losing consciousness was "It's finally over".

He woke up the next day in the hospital, his mother had fallen asleap but he clearly saw the the dry tears all over her face. He was wearing a diper and had several needles in him connected to several blood bags.

He his body was paralyzed from the neck down but he could still move his head a little and look around. He closed his eyes and thought about his terrible experience, but then he heard a deep voice from outside. The voice said

"Happy birthday"

The End.