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Breaking Point

by EvanGravelle
An ex-cop kills his daughters rapist. He commits suicide and then wakes up in a land of ponies.

Hey my name is…unimportant. What is, is the fact that I am broken. I have fallen over the precipice of all that is considered sane and normal. All I feel is anger. When that leaves me, I feel hollow, like a dead man walking with no where to go. All of this, because of one critical instance in my past which sent me down this long, arduous descent into the bowels of hell.

Don't get me wrong, I'm not asking for sympathy of empathy or whatever. I'm just telling you the facts. Don't want to hear them? Then leave, but if you do, the door is always open.

So why don't you walk it, and take trip with me as we see just what happens when you break a man.

It's not rated mature due to the fact that what occurs in the first chapter will not occur again. It is simply there to set the scene and I'm not making some gore fic. The intro just happens to have gore in it.

Teen
On Hiatus
Dark
Sad
Tragedy
Human
 

2706 words: Estimated 14 minutes to read

1 Chapter:

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