Tiara in the Rough

by Locomotion
Diamond Tiara goes too far with her bullying and is sent to boarding school in disgrace, where she soon learns the error of her ways. Silver Spoon, meanwhile, is struggling with her own emotions.

Diamond Tiara has always been loathed by the Cutie Mark Crusaders for being the school bully, but Silver Spoon has recently been viewing her in a different light. When she accidentally reveals this, Diamond Tiara lashes out at her and ends up being expelled from Ponyville School for her unruly behaviour. Heartbroken by the loss of her only friend, Silver Spoon finds herself gaining the sympathy of her former targets while Diamond Tiara is sent away to a Manehattan boarding school.

Over the course of time, Silver Spoon gradually gains the trust of the Crusaders and their other friends, but feels empty without Diamond Tiara in her life. In an attempt to heal the breach between the two fillies, the Crusaders head off to Manehattan to pay her a visit, taking a reluctant Locomotion with them. But what they don't know is that Diamond Tiara needs Silver Spoon more than ever...

As with its prequel story, this one contains plot elements that contradict a recently aired episode - in this case, Crusaders of the Lost Mark. It was still being written when the episode was first broadcast, and I nearly cancelled this and the conclusion to the saga, which I'll reveal in due course, when I found out that the Crusaders had gained their Cutie Marks; but I eventually bit the bullet and decided to finish this off as an AU story. The same will be true of the next one, but after that, I'll be reverting to show canon for the CMC in future stories.

This story contains a fair amount of Unwinese, which may confuse some readers. Translations have been provided at the bottom of each chapter for those who are unable to understand.

Teen
Complete
Alternate Universe
Sad
Romance
Drama
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
 
SOCOD

31228 words: Estimated about 3 hours to read

12 Chapters:

  1. Chapter 1: For the Love of a Bully 2015-10-20 08:43:58 UTC
    1817
  2. Chapter 2: A Messy Break-Up 2015-10-22 07:01:07 UTC
    2936
  3. Chapter 3: Expulsion 2015-10-23 06:45:16 UTC
    2586
  4. Chapter 4: Making Amends 2015-10-24 06:31:54 UTC
    2332
  5. Chapter 5: Forging New Friendships 2015-10-25 07:56:56 UTC
    2878
  6. Chapter 6: Off to Liberty Hall 2015-10-26 08:01:32 UTC
    3396
  7. Chapter 7: Absence Makes The Heart Grow...Lonesome? 2015-10-27 08:02:24 UTC
    2936
  8. Chapter 8: The Manehattan Crusaders 2015-10-28 07:44:35 UTC
    2848
  9. Chapter 9: Diamonds to Ashes 2015-10-29 08:19:44 UTC
    2803
  10. Chapter 10: The Reconciliation 2015-10-30 08:55:53 UTC
    2856
  11. Chapter 11: Bye-Bye, Boarding School 2015-10-31 08:28:47 UTC
    2361
  12. Epilogue 2015-10-31 19:31:21 UTC
    1479