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End of Loyalty

by SteffaniStar
After Rainbow's return to Ponyville, things got out of control, but it's even worse when an ancient evil gets his eyes on the Mane 6...

After finally coming home from her Wonderbolts trainings, instead of her usual behavior, Rainbow behaves odd, and Twilight is determined to find out what's wrong, but that didn't go as planned. Things take an unexpected turn when an ancient villain returns and gets his eyes on the Mane 6. Rainbow blames herself for everything that happened and wants to fix the situation, but it won't be so easy...



Special thanks to Manaphy for writing advices :twilightsmile:
First chapter was re-written. Cover art isn't done by me.
Rated Teen for some darker scenes and topics in later chapters.
Now updating weekly-every Sunday.
Possible spoilers in the comments

Teen
Complete
Sad
Adventure
Tragedy
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
 
MNPRP

20164 words: Estimated about 2 hours to read

12 Chapters:

  1. Chapter 1 2015-11-09 14:15:03 UTC
    1400
  2. Chapter 2 2015-12-04 15:29:26 UTC
    1039
  3. Chapter 3 2015-12-11 15:02:58 UTC
    2192
  4. Chapter 4 2015-12-18 15:53:33 UTC
    2247
  5. Chapter 5 2015-12-25 08:34:40 UTC
    2575
  6. Chapter 6 2016-01-02 20:53:03 UTC
  7. Chapter 7 2016-01-08 20:59:28 UTC
    2482
  8. Chapter 8 2016-01-17 15:56:31 UTC
    2613
  9. Chapter 9 2016-01-24 19:49:01 UTC
  10. Chapter 10 2016-02-07 20:35:13 UTC
    1552
  11. Chapter 11 2016-02-21 21:21:29 UTC
    1766
  12. Chapter 12 2016-02-27 19:32:19 UTC
    2298