Immortals

by Blazing_Dusk

Rating: everyone
Tags: Alternate Universe, Romance, Comedy, Adventure
Length: 1108

Every immortal has an angel and a demon who guard tarterus to keep the evil that's there, there.

Every immortal has an angel and a demon who guard tarterus to keep the evil that's there, there.

What happens when the evil gets out? What if the angels and demons seek out their equestrian counterparts? What if love forms between some of the equestrians?

Will have some shipping
Over analyzed elements of harmony
Edit: I meant to go back over this but forgot my bad.
Edit2: will be delayed until I get a better way of updating

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2015-11-02 04:30:02 UTC

Chapter One (edit)

Twilight was running around the friandship castle gathering her things, a letter lay forgotten on the ground.

Dear Twilight,

It is imperative that you come to Canterlot immediately. I and my sister have something to tell you. Make sure you bring your marefriend and your other friends.

Sincerely,

Celestia

Twilight froze once she realised something.

"How did she find out about me and Dash?" Twilight asked no one at all.

Tartarus

Two beings that looked almost identical to Twilight sat together. One had a longer horn, was a lighter shade of lavender, and had larger more angel like wings, while the other had a longer sharper horn, a darker coat, a more sinister cutie mark, and bat like wings.

"So, what's the matter Starlight?" The bat winged one asked.

"You try being an angel in love with a demon." Starlight answered.

"Hey, it's the same both ways."

"I know that, Dark Star."

Suddenly an alarm went off. Starlight and Dark Star shot off down the hall.

Canterlot throne room

Celestia was sitting on her throne beside Luna.

"Does thou feel like this may be a bad idea?" Luna asked her sister with a hint of worry and eagerness. The guards in the room looked at the two, not knowing what Luna was talking about, but then again, even if you did know you usually didn't.

"Of course I feel that way, but I still have to do this." Celestial answered, clearly understanding Luna, which caused more confusion, because the guards aren't around Luna enough. Celestia gazed at the door with an un-readable expresion..

"Can we have our video-games back?" Luna asked with a cute and innocent look on her face.

"No."

Tartarus

The prisoners had banned together to fight the angels and demons, and were winning. Nightmare Moon was hit and sent to the ground.

"You should be a prisoner like us."

"She was trying to protect our immortal." An angel said as she blasted the monster away from Nightmare Moon, who signed in relief.

"Thanks Moondust." Nightmare Moon said as she looked up at the mare above her.

"No problem, now let's get back to work!" Moondust said before she shot off like a rocket to attack more of the prisoners. Starlight and Dark Star could be seen fighting alongside an angel and demon that each had a rainbow colored mane and tail. The Demon was hit with an attack and sent flying.

"Spectrum!" Starlight screamed as she watched her mare friend sail through the air and land fifty or so meters away.

"We can not win this battle." A white alicorn angel with a sunset colored mane announced. A draconaquus appeared next to her.

"I say we flee to the surface and find our immortals, wouldn't you agree?" The draconaquus said as he floted around on a pink cotten candy cloud.

"We shall flee to the surface!" The white alicorn announced to her alies.

Ponyvill

Train station

"Um, girls, does anypony know what the princess wants?" Flutershy asked her friends, who looked at her. Flutershy was glad that her friends had learned to hear her when she talked normally, well, normally for her.

"Sorry Fluters', We don't have any idea." Rainbow Dash said rubbing the back of her neck.

"Oh, well, alright then."

Applejack looked down the track to check if she could see the train.

"Ah sure do hope that th' train gets 'ere soon though." She said looking back at her friends.

"Did the Princess's letter say anything else, Twilight dear?" Rarity asked as the train pulled into the station. The group of friends border the train. Twilight was blushing for no apparent reason.

"Um, just that she knows about me and Dashie." Twilight answered causing Rainbow Dash to do a spit take.

"What the buck! Who told Princess Celestia about us?!" Rainbow asked in shock. Earning strange looks from the others in the train car.

"Nothing to see here."

"Honestly Rainbow Dash, do you have to use such vulger language." Rarity said with a roll of her eyes, earning a laugh from all her friends. The train continued down the track on it's way to Canterlot. Unknown to Twilight and her friends, a platoon of gaurds would be awaiting them at the station. The gaurds were under strict orders to escort Twilight and her friends directly to the castle and then lead them to the throne room.

"I can't wait to sEe the Princess and ask her about Me planning the neXt gala!" Pinky said excitedly while bouncing around the car, forcing everypony else to leave the car.

"It'll be great to be back in Canterlot again, if only for a short time." Spike said with a smile. After another hour the train pulled into the station. Twilight and her friends got off the train and a gaurd walked up to them and bowed.

"My apoligys your highness, but me and my men have been told to escort you and the rest of the Friendship Councle to the Castle so that you are not delayed at all." The gaurd informed the group.

"That is perfectly fine." Twilight told the guard before her and her friends begain to follow the gaurds through the city to words the Castle. Once they reached the castle, most of the gaurds left, leaving only two leading the friendships councle to the throne room. Celestia seemed to perk up at the sight of Twilight.

"Twilight, We have much to tell you." Celestia said, "First things first, every immortal has an angel and a demon, these angels and demons are the guards of tarterus. An immortal can use their angels and demons powers. An angel or demon is equal in power to their immortale. There are eleven immortales. You and your friends are six of these immortals."

"What?" The Friendship Council all said together.

"Thy are not the Bearers of the Elements of Harmany, but are the Elements themselves." Luna told the group.

"You each have different affinitys that I do not know about." Celestial said, "I will be reinstating the Solar and Lunar gaurds, and will be introducing the Cristle gaurd and the Harmony gaurd, as well as making Ponyvill the capitol of a new kingdom lead by you six."

"You want me to pick my own captain." Twilight guesed.

"Yes." Celestia said. Suddenly Discord appeared in a puff of… chickens?

"Hello everypony." He said as he floated around the room.

"Discord, I'm sure you have something to tell us. So what is it?" Celestia asked the draconaquss.

"The angels and demons were forced out of tarterus." Discord told the group.