Apple-Palooza (Never completing)

by Brohoof123

Rating: everyone
Tags: Comedy, Adventure
Length: 354

Sweet Apple Acres is hosting a fair. But not just any fair. An APPLE themed fair!

Sorry. Will never be completed, but I still want writing input.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-11-14 06:11:48 UTC

Chapter 1

Note: This is my first story. Please dont hate, and just present ways for me to improve. Also, PLEASE no "Grammar Sucks" I prefer "Grammar could use some work". Thanks, Enjoy or dont enjoy my story.

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Chapter 1

"Apple-Palooza TODAY! Come down to Sweet Apple Acres!" the sign read. "Hmm, Sounds interesting!" said Twilight sparkle.  "Eh, The Sign could be 20 % Cooler.." said Rainbow dash.  "PALOOZA!?" said a voice out of nowhere. It was of course, Pinkie Pie.  "THAT's LIKE A PARTY!" Pinkie yelled out. Pinkie Pie was jumping about on all four legs as she fantasized about the  party they would attend.  "What's going to be at this Palooza anyway?" Twilight inquired. " I Reckon i can answer that!" Applejack said as she approached. "We're going to have all sorts of stuff!" she said. "Such'as, Apple themed games, Apple Cakes, Apple Fritters, Apple Pies, Appl-" " Applejack, I'm sure you can spare us some details" Twilight said. "O'Course. We're gunna have a bunch of Apple Foods, and games and such" She said, Putting it into simple terms. " PARTY!" Pinkie yelled. Everyone walking by in Sugar cube corner had their eyes on Pinkie, as she bounced merrily about. " So, Ya'll going to be there?" Applejack asked her friends. "Totally!" Rainbow Dash said., "Well.. I Really do have some studying..." Twilight said quietly. "But Twiiiilightttttttttttttttt!!" A voice said, coming from behind Apple Jack. "Did your Butt just talk, AJ?" Rainbow Dash asked. "What? Naw. That there is Applebloom" Apple Jack replied. Applebloom came out from behind AJ, sporting large Puppy dog eyes; and they were targeting Twilight. "Pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase!" Applebloom pleaded. "Well.... Alright" Twilight sparkle agreed. "Yay! Twilight is coming TOO!" Pinkie called out. "I Sure am glad Ya'll are going to be there!" Applejack said to her Friends. ERRRRRRRRRRRRRRT. ERRRRRRRRRRRRRT. ERRRRRRRRRRT. "What in Tarnation?!" Applebloom said, responding to this strange noise. "Whoaaaaaaa!" Pinkie said, pointing to something. She was pointing at a large blue Police Pony Shed that had appeared out of nowhere. After a few seconds, a stallion walked out. He had spiked brown hair, and a hourglass cutie mark.

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Unfinished