A Factory Fallen
After Peyton's 'death', he wakes to find an Equestria set two years after he last appeared.
So many years ago, hidden in Cloudsdale history, lies the center point of Equestria's sorrow. Each day, five or ten young ponies go missing. From their homes or tests they are taken, and placed inside a world of pain. A boy awakens soon, who gives it all to redeem himself. For only a few lives, he saves millions. Such is the cost of the world, and the dictation of many things.
An eye for an eye, so to speak.
I always felt as if The Pegasus Device was unsatisfactory, and that Peyton's story isn't over. So, I combined two things, and maybe made the finale. If this story doesn't go up, which it may not, I will just paste it's name and description in a blog post or whatever. By the way, for the blog readers, this story's name is: "A Factory Fallen".
Anyway, see you when it's up, or when the post goes out. But still, this story might be good enough to trump my other sequels. IF this does appear on a blog post, expect more procrastination before finality.
So yeah. Also, the unpublished viewing password is Undertale. Remember, you can still read this if it fails. I don't delete these fails, I archive them. I learn from my mistakes. Finally, don't trust the flower.
DAMMIT FLOWEY! He stole the password. But secretly I still have it. It will be posted in the preview post. Derp.
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