A very great relief

by Theorangefox

Rating: mature
Tags: Original Character, Sex, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Other, Romance
Length: 4748

Aloe and lotus are looking for ways to improve ratings at the spa, soon enough an opportunity arises

Another remake of an old clopfic. And some more threesome action! A few wanted to see a clop with both Aloe and Lotus involved so without further ado happy reading!

Published 2012-06-01 17:44:03 UTC
Last updated 2012-06-01 17:44:03 UTC

Chapter 1

“Come on Aloe we have to think of something!” Lotus said going through the papers. “If we don’t get nominated then how else will we win that all expenses paid holiday!?” the pink earth pony shifted closer and studied the advertisement.

“Hmm get nominated for best service in ponyville, and win that trip. Yeah simple all we have to do is give massages and stuff, trouble is hardly anypony comes here!” Aloe remarked.

“I wish we’d invested more in advertising. Those new soaps don’t seem to be doing much for the skin.” Lotus frowned.

“Don’t worry I’m sure something will come along, we’ve been through thick and thin right?”

“You’re right!” Lotus chirped as she walked to the front glass doors.

Outside a lone pegasus pony was barely able to walk as he continued to feel a shooting pain in his back.

“Ouch that’s the last time I try and show off with a stunt like that.” he groaned barely able to move his wings. He happened to trudge past the spa and noticed the sign above. “Huh? I hear these places are good for aches and pains, but I’m not a girl!” he said moving on, but then he was spotted by Lotus.

“Aloe quick a customer!” she said excitedly pointing out the door at the orange pegasus.

“Huh? Are you sure?” she questioned putting the papers down.

“Look he can barely walk! He must be as sore as anything!” her sister joined her and they both bustled outside to greet the pegasus who had almost walked away.

“Hello sir!” they both chirped giving him their best customer smiles. The pegasus turned and saw them both standing and facing him.

“Would you like to try out our spa?” Aloe asked making him take a step back.

“I dunno, ain’t those places for mares?” he asked sounding unsure.

“Oh that’s silly.” Aloe giggled waving a hoof. “We cater for both genders!”

“But we haven’t had a stallion come here in ages.” Lotus whispered.

“I know.” Aloe replied with a smirk. “Just think, guys always give good ratings to the ladies!”

The orange pony searched through his saddlebags but both sides came out empty, save for a snack.

“Sorry but I’m flat out. Guess my back will just have to heal naturally.” he said feeling a sharp shooting pain that made him cry out loud in agony.

“We can’t just leave him.” Aloe whispered.

“Oh, so free customers are going to buy us advertising?” Lotus asked.

“Just lighten up already, do you want silly adverts or ice cold drinks on a hot summers day doing nothing?” Lotus couldn’t argue with that. They both looked up and smiled back at him before they left.

“It’s okay sir, we can see you’re in a lot of pain. How about a free complimentary treatment?” Aloe asked, but Lotus didn’t like where this was going.

“You’d do that for me? Uhh I’m not so sure.” he said looking shy.

“Oh come on now. Lotus if you please?” she said walking towards him making her follow reluctantly. “We promise to get that poor back of yours sorted out!” Aloe said as they both took him in.

“Why bother promising? It’s not like he paid for good service and can demand a refund.” Lotus muttered.

They took him in and closed the store doors leaving a sign on the counter, implying anyone else were to come in anyway. The orange pegasus was taken to the shower room first to get rinsed off.

“You’ll really love the relaxation pool sir!” Aloe said with a positive tone.

“Just call me Firestorm.” he mumbled not talking much. After rinsing off they left him to bathe in the warm, calm soothing waters. Already he was feeling the effects of the water soothing his aching back.

“Hey this ain’t bad.” he said with a smile relaxing himself and sinking deeper into the water. He remembered their bright happy faces, finding them both a little pretty even but he wasn’t here to worry about that.

After 15 minutes spent in the water they both came to get him and gave him a towel to dry off. He could slightly feel the pain still residing in his back, as he hobbled over with them.

“Oh my still sore? Well there’s no way our massage won’t fix that!” Aloe said sounding determined.

“A-a-what?” Firestorm stumbled.

“A nice back massage to ease the pain!” she explained making him blush. “Oh come on now, no need to be a shy pony!” she said as they took him to another room. He was still blushing when they gave him a bed to lie on, and draped a towel over him.

Aloe and Lotus stood either side both with their hooves at the ready.

“Try to relax okay?” Aloe said in a comforting voice. He felt nervous and flinched as their hooves touched his back. Lotus gave her sister a look that showed she was disappointed.

“It’s part of the care package okay?” Aloe replied keeping her voice low, but she wasn’t taking things seriously.

As they went to work Firestorm was already feeling the benefits of the massage. He could feel the creases of pain being ironed out of his back, but he still seemed a little shifty.

“Are you feeling okay? You’re really tense.” Aloe said in a calm voice looking into his eyes. He tried to respond but up close she looked beyond beautiful, not to mention her silky blue hair, and shiny, clean pink coat. He tried to string a sentence together but felt his heart leap up his throat. Aloe smiled and he blushed as she brought her head back up.

“He’s really cute.” she said quietly to Lotus whose eyes went wide with shock.

“Uh what?”

“Just look at him, I know he’s shy but he’s hiding something.” she said grinning at her.

“And that’s none of your business.” Lotus replied. “See? This is why we don’t serve guys. They’re all creeps.”

“He’s not a creep, and I bet he gets around a lot.” she said forming ideas in her mind.

“Have you gone insane?” Lotus said almost raising her voice.

“Lighten up sis. Besides...” she leaned a little closer to her. “When’s the last time we had any fun?” she asked making Lotus blush.

“Okay maybe he isn’t that bad, but if he freaks me out then he leaves.” she said. “Wait this is for the competition isn’t it?” she added.

“Of course, we’ll get an excellent review.” Aloe replied keeping the same smirk on her face.

Firestorm who was too busy relaxing to listen, continued to enjoy their treatment. Things seemed to be working out for his back, but soon they both stopped and he suddenly noticed.

“Huh? What now?” Firestorm asked opening his eyes.

“We still have more work to do!” Aloe chirped sitting him up on the bed, she removed the towel and looked into his eyes as her hooves ran down his chest.

“Umm.” Firestorm said but she ignored him.

“You’re carrying a lot of tension down here.” she said going lower. “Oh and down here too.” he panicked as her hooves rubbed the area around his groin, and he began to feel stimulated down there. He felt like telling her to stop, but she gave him a seductive look and smiled as she continued to rub him there exciting his nerves.

The beautiful look of her face and the feeling below caused him to slowly grow an erection. Aloe watched and licked her lips as he continued to grow to his full size. She rubbed it between her hooves and continued to look into his eyes as she massaged his member gently.

“It’s okay.” Aloe said. “This is the ‘special’ treatment.” he flinched and squirmed as she built up more pleasure in his groin, rhythmically stimulating him whilst Lotus worked on his shoulders which were feeling quite tense. Aloe giggled and pulled up closer to his face, her beautiful gaze met his as she leaned closer.

“I think he likes me Lotus!” she said making him blush bright red as she kissed him on the lips. She drew back and watched his shocked expression followed by another giggle as she kissed him again. This time he felt her tongue slide into his mouth as she pulled him closer. Her tongue continued to slide around his further arousing him, as she became more turned on. She hugged him close feeling his stallionhood poking her body as the kissing became more intense.

Lotus continued to rub his shoulders as Aloe took a break to catch her breath, she nuzzled his snout giving him another quick kiss that made him smile. She then went down and slowly started to lick his hardened phallus with her tongue. She continued licking it up and down, then she began massaging it again with her hooves. It wasn’t long before she licked upwards, and then she slid it slowly inside her mouth.

Firestorm gasped as he felt it slide down her throat, she sealed her lips around it and began sucking up and down. Soon enough he could feel her tongue licking around as she sucked in as much as she could. Lotus sat behind him and hugged him around his chest, then she began massaging him there. The overall feeling left him feeling aroused and relaxed at the same time, but he was more turned on by Aloe’s face as she made slurping noises with his member in her mouth.

She finished it off with a kiss to the tip and licked the precum seeping out, she smiled back at him as Lotus got up and stood next to her sister.

“What do you say Lotus? I don’t think we’re done with him yet.” Aloe smirked.

“Definitely, I think he’s still feeling tense.” why did I agree to this? she thought.

“Should we give him a choice?” Aloe asked Lotus.

“Choice for what?” she replied. Aloe grinned at him and felt a tingle around her nethers.

“Well sir, you get to choose. Either me or her first.”

“Huh?” Firestorm asked sounding a little confused making her giggle.

“I meant, who do you want to choose?” she asked sitting down and parting her hind legs exposing her bright, pink slit dripping with shiny clear fluids between her legs. Firestorm’s mouth gaped wide, and his eyes could only focus on what he saw ahead of him.

“Come here and relieve that tension of yours.” she said in a sexy voice enticing him as she rubbed her hoof between her hind legs. Firestorm felt himself magnetise towards her, his erection throbbed as he came closer and Aloe wrapped her forelegs around his neck.

“Is this okay?” Firestorm asked. “Won’t I get in trouble right?”

“Of course not, we’re the ones who run this place but we haven’t had many customers, so consider this our way of saying thanks.” she pulled him closer and he felt his tip rubbing between her soaking wet petals. She lay on her back parting her hind legs for him, and she moaned as she felt it rubbing up her clit. He guided his throbbing stallionhood against her entrance and slowly slid it in.

He gasped as he penetrated her and felt her silky, wet tight insides immediately hugging around his member as it slid in. She moaned sexually as she felt his thickness burying further inside her. She hugged him closer feeling the excitement as his hot pole slid further into her crevice. She pulled him in more moaning lovingly as it slid all the way up to his sack. Love juices leaked everywhere from her filled entrance as she stroked his body.

“Geez you’re amazing!” Firestorm gasped already feeling the effects.

“Ooh it’s so tense, want me to massage it inside me?” she asked seductively, her voice aroused him even more as he slowly began to penetrate her tight flower. She kept that sexy look fixed on him as he thrusted her increasing with speed, every inch it moved inside her he could feel her warm, wet flesh squeezing and caressing it softly. He groaned as he continued to feel the intense pleasure inside, as Aloe stroked his body with her hooves.

Lotus continued to watch them, and couldn’t deny she was being turned on, neither could she ignore the burning sensation between her hind legs. She found herself rubbing down there with her hoof, and soon enough her hind legs were apart revealing juices forming a puddle on the floor. She watched them engaging in hot passionate love wishing she too could be a part of it.

By now Aloe was moaning loudly feeling his heat penetrating her further. She held on tightly to him as he went a little faster feeling the loving pleasure coming from her amazing body, and not to mention her sexy aroused expression which only enticed him to thrust her harder. She gasped for air wanting more of his thickness inside her, it had been a long time since she’d been down this road, and now she was loving every second of it.

Her wet femness seized up as he plunged it deep into her soaking crevice, more juices leaked as her flesh gripped and contracted around his throbbing meat, as his hips bucked back and forth. They became hot and sweaty, their bodies grinding harder against each other. His waist pumped between her legs, as she continued stroking his sweaty back.

“Feeling better?” she asked in that lustrous voice. He was gasping so much he could barely reply, the tension inside him continued to mount with each thrust only making him more and more aroused.

Lotus decided to join in. She came closer and got up on her hind legs, she rested her forehooves on Firestorm’s head and brought her hips closer. Her dripping wet snatch came into view and she motioned for him to lick her there. He brought his mouth closer and teased her by licking around her wet flesh.

Lotus let out a shy gasp and she blushed bright red, his warm tongue continued to swarm around her nethers teasing her more, he continued to make her desperate for it until she moaned in sexual frustration. She pushed her hips forward squashing her vagina against his face. His tongue travelled up her slit, and rubbed gently around her sensitive clit causing her to flinch and moan. She loved feeling his tongue circling around it, and when he changed pattern she felt a new sensation each time.

He kept it up as she began gasping for air, she could feel the heat burning between her hind legs as he pleased her more and more. He gave her a long hard lick across her drenched slit causing her to emit a loud sexual moan. His tongue slid back down again before slowly sliding in between her wet folds.

Firestorm tasted her juices all over his tongue as he thrusted it in and out. She felt good but not as good as Aloe felt right now, having that big thrusting stallion cock pumping in and out of her. Lotus tried to imagine his tongue as the same thing, but it definitely didn’t measure up. She stroked his head as he continued to work his tongue between her delicate parts, his mouth was covered in her fluids, and he could feel the heat coming from inside, an indication that she wanted him inside her.

Firestorm groaned feeling another contraction coming from Aloe, she made sure he hadn’t forgotten about her, after noticing him slow down. His member slipped out of her dripping flesh hole and it rubbed between her slit stimulating her sensntive bump. She felt the heat from his shaft which was coated in her natural juices, and moaned lovingly as it rubbed her there. It slipped backwards and found her opening before sliding back snugly between her flesh.

Lotus began to feel more tense than before, she could feel her own clit throbbing and pulsing with each lick. No matter what she couldn’t seem to control her own hormones which led to more fluids seeping from her heated snatch. She wouldn’t stop until she felt him inside her, just from that alone she felt in heat and wanted to experience him for herself.

Firestorm groaned as the loving tension got to him. Aloe was hugging and stroking his back even more added with the sexual pleasure she was giving him. She looked into his eyes as she felt him throbbing below as a sign of due release. He kept on thrusting and grunting each time as Aloe stared right through him.

“Cum in me.” she whispered enticing him to thrust her faster. Her gasping increased as her breaths became shorter, and then she moaned loudly at a higher pitch. Her moans reverberated in his ears as he felt it pulsing below. The tension mounted as her femness squeezed it inside her rubbing it up and down with her warm flesh.

Firestorm groaned as he felt it give way, and then the contractions came as he pumped hot gooey cum deep inside her. Aloe giggled sexily at his face as he continued to thrust as she milked his throbbing pony cock. It slipped out leaving a mess of juices and cum on the floor.

He stopped eating Lotus out who frowned at Aloe.

“Why did you do that for?” she moaned.

“Do you have any idea how he felt inside me? I almost came myself!” she said lying on the floor.

“Well I want my turn.” Lotus said as he lay on his back. She climbed on top of him and began rubbing her slit up and down his limp member. She kept it up feeling her petals slide up and down his wet pole.

Lotus leaned forward and kissed with him, she tasted her juices on his tongue as theirs melted in each others mouths. Firestorm hugged her close as she continued pumping his shaft making it come back to life.

Soon enough she felt the warmth returning as his body reacted to her stimulating ways. Their mouths parted leaving a string of saliva between their tongues. They rubbed and licked tongues again for a while before Lotus got on all fours, and turned around presenting to him.

She lifted her tail and swished it around telling him to come close.

“P-please be gentle.” Lotus said softly as she prepared for entry. Firestorm mounted her back feeling his hooves dig softly into her silky coat. He guided his tip up against her still soaking entrance. She felt it and gasped suddenly as her petals opened slowly allowing him to penetrate. She felt his thickness sliding inside her and squirmed a little as it parted her tight insides.

“Aahh!” she moaned as he felt her warmth clamping around him. She began breathing sharply as it went all the way inside. Soon enough he began pumping away gently letting her get used to it.

Lotus felt amazing, it hurt a little but the pain was nothing compared to how she felt now. She loved feeling his body on the back of her as his hips bucked back and forth. The friction between them made them both feel the tension building as Firestorm worked it inside her. Her face flushed deep red as she began to enjoy it more.

Firestorm felt his shaft being sucked inside her, she felt amazingly tight compared to Aloe. Her soft body comforted him as he bucked against her round peachy plot. He felt his tip plunging into her wet heavenly femness every time he thrusted forwards. He felt a twitch as a surge of pleasure spread through his muscles. She continued massaging it inside her making the heat arouse her even more.

As they engaged in deep intercourse Aloe got up, and she moved closer to Firestorm. They kissed again enjoying the warmth of each others tongues, their lips slipped and rubbed around each others making wet noises as their tongues wrapped and licked each others. She distracted him from Lotus who eventually noticed.

“Don’t stop yet!” she moaned feeling it throbbing inside her. Firestorm resumed as he and Aloe continued to tongue kiss. Her beautiful face enticed him more as Lotus began to moan sexually. He felt her curvy ass against his body as he continued pounding her and his muscles went tense. He sped up a little making her plot jiggle as he smacked against it. He got on his hind legs and thrusted like mad feeling the pleasure tingle all around his shaft.

He gave a few more bucks before giving in and unloading his seed inside her. Lotus felt the slimy fluids filling her up as his warm rod squirted inside her. It slipped out making more mess as she leaked body fluids, and Firestorm collapsed to the ground having came twice in that short space of time.

The two girls caught their breath back and eyed his limp member. He could still feel the effects of his orgasm from her tight marehood pleasuring him.

Soon enough they came closer to him and began to lick his shaft with their tongues. They cleaned the hot cum off him as well as their juices, tasting the warm mixture in their mouths. They continued licking and teasing him slowly making him hard again. Aloe began massaging his maleness with her hooves, kneading it softly until it was hard again. They both resumed licking and tasting it with Firestorm watching them both.

Aloe slid her mouth up and down it whilst Lotus licked his sensitive tip making it twitch and throb. He groaned as they continued to pleasure him with their mouths. They took it in turns to suck on it whilst the other licked the side. They kept going until both of them were ready.

“We want you to pleasure us both!” Aloe said making his eyes go wide as she massaged his phallus some more. He watched them as Aloe lay on her back and Lotus lay on top of her, both of them parting their hind legs as their wet marehoods hovered above each others.

Firestorm came closer and mounted Lotus again. He slid his member between the gap, and then they sandwiched it between them. Firestorm began pumping back and forth feeling it rubbing between both their warm slits. They soaked him in juices allowing it to slide back and forth with comfort.

They began gasping feeling it rub near their clits, Aloe held onto Lotus as they felt it poking between their makeshift hole. Both of them could feel their holes being teased wanting him inside them again.

He continued to rub it in and suddenly Lotus cried out in a horny fashion feeling it rub her clit hard. It came again and she gasped once more.

“Hey do me aswell!” Aloe said wanting to feel it. Firestorm pushed down as he thrusted forwards and Aloe felt his hot length rubbing up and down her clit. He took it in turns teasing them both, but he loved hearing Lotus moan more. He began to rub hers more often getting turned on by her petite squeals of joy. She leaked more fluids making their sexes wetter as Firestorm continued to buck his hips back and forth.

Aloe and Lotus were becoming lost in the moment, they were enjoying him as much as each other, never expecting to come this far. Firestorm himself could hardly believe it, these two beautiful mares both giving him more than he bargained for, and he hadn’t even paid to get in. He thought of how stupid it would have been if he’d walked away just because of a silly stereotype.

As Firestorm continued to rub them closer to orgasm, Lotus’ tail lifted higher. He felt his member slip out and positioned it again, but as he thrusted forward Lotus screamed in pain.

Firestorm panicked as he realised he’d accidentally penetrated her anus. It felt warm and tight inside, but that shock brought a few tears.

“Take it out, take it out!” she whined.

“Sorry.” Firestorm said sliding it out slowly, but as he did his lubricated shaft slipped back in making her feel a new sensation.

“Wait.” she said making him stop. “Do it again.” Firestorm listened and gently thrusted her again, and she loved it. He decided to continue and soon enough Lotus was humming with arousal.

Each time it went in Firestorm felt her soft rump squashing against him. He went a little faster aided by her soaking juices stirring inside. To Firestorm it felt even warmer, and tighter as his throbbing phallus slid between her narrow flesh hole. He kept it up feeling it melt inside her warm passage.

Aloe began to get greedy again as Firestorm continued penetrating Lotus from behind. Her body had slid off a little and now Firestorm was pretty much focusing on her. She looked back giving him a horny look as she panted whilst enjoying this new experience.

“Hey you’re supposed to be making both of us cum together!” Aloe said as Firestorm kept bucking.

“So tight and good.” he moaned as Lotus’ sexy voice enticed him further. He kept going until it slipped out and went between her legs. Aloe pulled Lotus back onto her, and Firestorm remember she was still around. He grinned nervously as he began rubbing their clits again.

“That felt good.” Lotus whispered to him giving him a wink as he continued. By now that anal intercourse had made him rather tense, the two mares were also feeling hot and their crotch areas even hotter. Both their sensitive spots tingled as Firestorm consistently pleased them both.

They squashed their slits closer making him feel more of their flesh rubbing around it as he groaned and huffed heavily feeling his orgasm coming. By now both Aloe and Lotus were moaning together desperately, waiting for their powerful orgasms to stimulate them both.

Firestorm penetrated Aloe and thrusted her for a while, before he penetrated Lotus and felt her ass grinding against him again. He kept it up until he felt a twitch, and his maleness began throbbing. It slipped out and he rubbed them both bringing them to orgasm.

Aloe and Lotus held on as they felt the tension increase higher and higher, their bodies sweated mroe as they got hotter from the arousing feelings. And both of them felt their clits tingle intensely.

“Aloe I’m coming!” Lotus moaned.

“Me too!” she moaned back as Firestorm grunted loudly. He went on his hind legs again pumping it between them, moaning and moaning until eventually it happened.

He came all over Aloe as the sisters both climaxed squirting juices everywhere. A chorus of moans filled the room as their mixed orgasmed made their bodies spasm with pleasure. Firestorm felt the relief of his life as he continued to eject his contents onto Aloe’s body.

He soon collapsed when his orgasm passed and gasped for air. Both the sisters soon felt theirs pass, but could hardly move because of the powerful sensations paralysing them both with a stimulating feeling.

Eventually they were able to move and Firestorm sat up.

“Do you feel better sir?” they both asked with smiles on their face.

“Oh man, much better! No treatment is ever going to top this!” He replied making them both look at each other with glee.

“Thank you for choosing us.” they both said kissing and hugging him either side of his face. They went back with him to the reception after cleaning themselves off. Aloe quickly handed Firestorm a form and explained everything to him.

“You girls were amazing. I’ll definitely put in a good word! Hope you win.” he said with a smile leaving them with beaming faces.

“Come again soon!” Lotus called.

“But not too soon!” Aloe giggled as she winked at him before he left.

“I told you he likes me more.” Aloe teased.

“Who cares? He’ll tell his friends, we’ll have customers and more votes!” Lotus chirped.

“Oh and this was a bad idea was it?” Aloe smirked.

“Okay I guess not.” her sister replied. “But more customers means-”

“More stallions!” Aloe said in excitement making Lotus sigh.

“Let’s finish clearing up.” she said as Aloe followed her back. Both of them felt rather proud having satisfied yet another customer, even if it was their first in a short while.