My Little Pony:The Phoenix Rises

by Andoid

Rating: teen
Tags: Dark, Drama, Tragedy, Horror, Adventure
Length: 1699

Equestria is a prideful nation. So what if it was brought to its knees? What if the previous villains came back with a vengeance? What if there was more to Equestria and beyond than we thought? This fanfiction answers all of those questions.

Equestria is a prideful, almost utopia. So what if it was brought to its knees?
What if the previous villains came back with a vengeance?
What if there was more to Equestria and beyond than we thought?
What if we bring ponies to PG-13 levels of awesomeness!
What if the creatures and monsters were a bit more DEADLY!
What if i could stop saying what if!
This fanfiction answers all of those questions, "except the humorous what if question".

So take a ride though a very brutal, dark, gorey, adventurous, and dramatic reading experience.
We BrohamProductions present to you, My Little Pony: The Phoenix Rises.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2016-03-19 00:55:02 UTC

Episode 1:The Fall Of Canterlot

Prologue

        A long time ago there was six mares.

And they brought Loving peace and Beautiful harmony to Equestria.

But that legacy was short lived.

Because prophecy tells of the Allicorn of Friendship taking up the throne in times of strife.

Taking up the responisiblity of a broken nation.

And a hero and his friends aiding her in that task.

The Fall Of Canterlot

        The city of Canterlot!

Half up the mountain from the valley with its white marble walls and gold minuette roofs.

A society of the rich and knowledgable.

The crown jewel of such a prosperous nation!

Yet what is about to happen will change that forever.

        It was high noon, when the sun is high and the shadows face down towards the valley.

the royal guard saw nothing, nobody saw anything.

Canterlot's shield was suddenly activated and instantly there was panic and terror!

Silently up from the valley there was a titanic being of terrifying power!

But it was formless, until it immediately formed into a giant changling!

With five powerful thundering hits, the shield broke!

"80% shield capacity

60% shield capacity

40% shield capacity

20% shield capacity

0% shield capacity"

Hollered the member of the royal guard as he stood there in horror.

        Members of the rearguard fired their 930mm crystal powered plasma cannons at the beast.

but when smoke and dust cleared.

The titanic beast lie there slain.

Its blood stained three city blocks.

While it's dead body covered six city blocks.

         Just then as if it were green fiery rain.

Hundreds of thousands of changling warriors descended upon Canterlot.

For they came crashing down with the sound of thunder.

Celestia and Luna were in shock and awe.

For they have never seen such destructive power since Discord or Sombra were in rule.

They knew they could not face such a deadly army for that action would bring them to their end.

Watching their city burn and their people die one by one in horror uptop from their city in their castle.

They heard the ominous humming of changling wings buzz into the throne room.

   "Its a horror seeing your people die right in front of you isn't it" Queen Chrysalis uttered as she chuckled.

Celestia stared at her with intense hateful eyes and exclaimed "you monster!" and then her hateful eyes turned into a sorrowful look.

Queen Chrysalis's chuckle turned into a soft laugh.

       Then Queen Chrysalis said in monologue "you are responisible for many changling deaths Celestia. When i asked for help as an ally. You came back empty handed! Without my great Crystal Empire and beloved husband Sombra.

And when asked for refuge you ignored me!

So in desperation i tried to feed my people. But your acomplices staved us even more! And left us to rot even more. But then we found another kind of food. a very filling food, ripe with energy and abundant in great quantities. The very life force of living beings.

So consider this a punishment by changling law!"

        Celestia gasped in fear of what is to happen next.

Queen Chrysalis charged up her Magic Beam Spell and fired. Luna reacted with a Energy Shield Spell.

But the shield broke!

so Celestia reacted and moved Luna out of the way. And by doing so she got in the way of the beam and was killed. Luna burst into tears.

But those tears turned into steam as her saddness turned into rage.

        Luna began to transform.

Her night blue fur and mane turned into a jet black color.

Her pupils and teeth changed.

And a dark aura formed around her as she stared at Queen Chrysalis with a hateful stare.

Luna has changed into Nightmare Moon again!

Queen Chrysalis stood there with a look of amazment.

Queen Chrysalis smirked saying "it looks as if i have found my equal".

        Nightmare Moon fired a Magic Beam Spell at Queen Chrysalis.

Queen Chrysalis dodged the attack.

Queen Chrysalis laughed evilly saying "You're petty even when your at your full power"!

Nightmare Moon growled and fired again.

Queen Chrysalis dodged the attack again and said "this is becoming very futile Luna, quit being blinded by your rage and attack me full on"!

Nightmare Moon charged at Queen Chrysalis at an unnatural galloping speed.

But then a huge piece of rubble fell upon Luna.

Queen Chrysalis troted over to Nightmare Moon with smile on her face saying. "Right now my children are destroying the pillars that support

this city to the mountain. Allowing it to fall into the valley killing everyone"!

        Queen Chrysalis burst into laughter.

Nightmare Moon started to change back into Luna.

Blood was pooling under the piece of rubble.

Luna with the last of her swiftly fading strength fired again.

it hit Queen Chrysalis and started to slowly incenerate her.

Luna finally died due to blood loss.

As she died, a great sorrow fell upon Equestria that day as they saw Canterlot fall into the valley.

this story will be continued on the next episode!

Episode 2:From The Ashes

From The Ashes

A certain colt's destiny was revealed that day. This is the story of that colt.

        It all started in a small nice house in Canterlot. It was high noon.

A 12 year old colt by the name of Comet Starlight and his mother Nebula Starlight and his father Galaxy Starlight were having Lunch.

A lunch comprised of cucumber and lettuce sandwiches.

Then Galaxy Starlight went to work because he works in Royal Night Guard.

They said their goodbyes and then he left for his job.

        A few hours later it became afternoon and that was when the Canterlot Shield became online.

Comet Starlight and his mother heard panic and screaming in the street.

So they went into the basement of their house to shelter from the chaos.

Then they heard five thundering booms as the ground shook as if it were a earthquake.

Dust fell from the basement ceiling falling on Comet Starlight's nose.

He sneezed and then asked his mother "are we going to be allright?".

She replied "yes we are honey, yes we are".

        Then they heard the heard the monstrous boom of the Plasma Cannons followed by the sound of buildings being smashed to bits.

Thinking that whatever threat that Canterlot was facing was defeated.

They made their way back up to their house.

Comet Starlight was standing in the living room when he saw something that crashed into their yard.

He went outside to investigate what was happening.

When the cloud of smoke and dust cleared.

It revealed a creature that Canterlot has seen before.

A changling!

it lifted its head up and saw the young colt standing there in fright and horror.

It hissed and growled at Comet Starlight with a menacing stare.

Comet Starlight ran into the house yelling

"Mom,mom there is a changling in the front yard!".

        She looked at him with a terrified look.

Then she pushed him behind her and went into a battle stance.

The changling got inside the house finding the two terrified ponys standing there.

It made a creepy chuckle-like sound and then got in a pouncing position.

It tackled his mother and pulled his blade out of its sheath.

The changling posed to strike but she shot a Magic Beam Spell at the Changling.

And it hit killing the Changling.

She got off the ground, but right though the window came a bolt of Changling Magic Beam Spell fatally injuring her!

Comet burst into tears.

He ran over to her body to see if she was still alive.

She was.

With the last of her strenght she whispered to him

"I will allways be with you, and i will always love you forever".

Comet Starlight replied sorrowfully "n-no please dont die, y-you can't die please i d-don't want to lose you".

         Just as he had stopped speaking she died.

He had a fit of crying and mourning and then

he layed her to peace and exited the house.

        Comet made his way to the Canterlot Train Station.

But halfway on the path to he was stopped and surrounded by changlings.

They all unsheathed their swords and got ready to battle, althought it wasn't much of a battle anyway.

But then something activated inside of him.

Something powerful, Something ancient.

        The power of the Phoenix! It temporarily changed him.

His eyes started to glow and burn like white fire.

His mane and tail were no longer hair, it was made of fire!

His fur was white and it was brighter than day.

Then there was a huge exsplosion of white fire.

        Comet had no recelection of what just happened.

To him one moment he was surrounded, and the next standing in a scorched crater.

And then their was a flash of light that appeared behind him.

He felt this weird feeling on his flank.

So he looked at his flank and there was his cutie mark.

It had a phoenix in the middle with five embers around it.

        Then he made his way again to the train station with the other refugees.

For which they followed the train tracks down the mountain.

Halfway down the mountain they looked behind at Canterlot and saw it falling down into the valley.

The refugees stopped to pay their respects to those that have been lost.

The story will continue in the next episode!

Prologue

Prologue:

A long time ago at the time of the three tribes, there was a prophecy.

It told of the two sisters, Celestia and Luna taking the throne of Equestria.

It also told of six ponies taking the mantle of friendship and bringing peace and harmony.

But as there is a rise there is a fall.

The evil that has fallen shall rise again and bring vengeance and retribution to all of Equestria.

The enemy shall strike again, more powerful than ever!

But out of the ashes comes hope!

There shall be a new hero, Who burns the darkness away.

Who shines a blinding light upon the darkness.

Who is like a wildfire in battle.

This hero's name is The Phoenix.