FIM: Rise of the Creata

by Kaijeno

The Beginning...

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Author's Note

Hi and welcome to my Comic adaptation of 'A Creative Tail' which is now known as 'Rise of the Creata.
I'll still draw the comic, but this is more faster. Lets get started shall we?


The Beginning...

1st POV (Point of View)
Fate can be a powerful thing.
It can be good or bad
Mine was both.
What I am about to tell you is a little story about me.
This is my tale.


Darkness and pain. That was what I was feeling. I felt like I couldn't move at all. How did I get here? Why I am in so much pain? All these questions were rushing into my head.

"Hello! Art thou awake?"

Who is that? Is someone there? I tried to open my eyes. It felt painful, like I was opening my eyes for the first time. I was still squinting, but what I saw was a blurry purplish or bluish figure looking at me. I really couldn't focus at all.

"Art thou dead?" the voice said again.

I was now certain that it was a female voice. My eyes were getting clearer, and it was
coming into the focus. It was a blue horse talking? Maybe my eyes were not good after all.

“Ah, thou art alive.” The blue pony sighed in relief and smiled. “Art thou hurt anywhere? We were afraid that thou were dead. We are glad that you are alive.”

She kept talking and talking. She seemed so real and lifelike, plus her breath smelled. Wait, her breath smells, she seems real and I am feeling real pain. She IS real. Normally s would stay calm and observe the situation, but I freaked out, jumped and shouted.

“HOLY CRAP! THE BAD BREATH HORSE IS TALKING!”

I just blurted that out as I jumped and landed on my feet. Wait why am I on all fours? I was trying to figure that out. but then the blue pony looked at me with a pissed-off expression.

“How dare you mock me, you little commoner! You dare insult my royalty!?” the horse shouted.

Her voice got like 10 times louder and was blowing me back a bit. God, her breath smells. She kept shouting like that for a full ten minutes. She then calmed down and spoke to me at her regular volume.

“Now that my anger has subsided,” she said with a huff, “we shall take you to the castle.”

Suddenly, the pony’s horn glowed, which I hadn’t noticed until now. Next thing I knew, I was glowing the same color as her horn, and she picked me up. She then started flying with her wings. Wait, she has wings too. What do you call a horse with wings and a horn again? I don't remember.

“Unicorn, tellest me thine name,” the horse asked.

“Unicorn? What unicorn?” I replied, confused.

“You are a commoner. Thou dost not know what thou art?” the pony asked with a confused face.

When she said that, I recalled landing on all fours. Plus I couldn’t feel my han--

No way. I checked to see, and I saw that my hands were hooves. I really am a pony.

“ What the...I’m a pony? How? I'm a human, not a pony.”

“Hu-man?” she asked. “What is this Hu-man you speak of”

I was so confused, and I really had no idea what was going on. I really couldn’t move that much due to the energy from her horn that she was carrying me with.

“Hmm, thou thinkest something may have happened to thee. For now, I wished for thine name,” the horse asked once again.

I broke out of my trance as she asked again for my name.

“O-oh, right. My name is… is… Huh?”

That's weird... What IS my name? I can’t remember it. Now that you mention it, I don't remember anything up until I woke up here.

‘“Thy name is Huh?” Luna asked, holding in a laugh.

“N-No, I just can’t remember, nor anything from my past. But I know I am a human.”

Luna gave a weird look like I was crazy or something. To be honest, it sure sounded that way.

“We think that thou mayest amnesia. Thou art sure thou art this Human thing?”

I nodded at her. I just know I am human. For some reason, I know I remember being in a body of a human.

Luna gave a sigh and smiled once again. Her eyes also twinkled with determination. “So be it. I shall help you recover myself. This will be my first good deed after my 1000-year imprisonment. I swear on my life that I, Princess Luna, will help you be human again.”

I got a bad feeling about this. However, I also got some info on her. So she is a Princess named Luna, eh? Wow. Wait, I just realized that even though she’s a princess, I called her a bad breath horse. Oh crap.

“Princess Luna? I would bow, but I can’t. Also, sorry for calling you a bad breath horse. I was freaking out, ya know?” I said with a nervous smile.
“It is okay, but I am not a horse. I am a pony.’

Not that there is much of a difference. Still, I can’t believe I am talking to a royal.

Canterlot Castle
We arrived at a large castle, where I was immediately treated. After the treatment, Princess Luna came to see me. She also brought another unicorn/pegasus pony with her. She looked really beautiful with that rainbow mane of hers.

“Unicorn, this is my sister, Celestia. Thou mustest show thine respect and--”

Celestia interrupted Luna and gave her a disappointed look. “Luna, that way of speaking is over. I’ve told you a countless times to speak in today’s language,” Celestia said

Luna looked at her sister with a concerned face. “But-But we can’t just--”

Tia again gave her a more disappointed look, “Luna…”

They really are sisters. They’re bickering over Luna’s speak pattern. Though I can’t say I blame Celestia for saying to cut the old-timey speaking. Luna puffed up her cheeks and looked at me.

We--I mean, I told Celestia about thy--I mean, your condition,” Luna said, blushing.

This is just torture for her. I sorta feel bad for her. Suddenly, the rainbow-maned pony walked closer to me and had a weird look on her face. It was like she knew me or something. I must’ve been seeing things. After that small silence, she spoke.

As you already know, I am Princess Celestia. She told me that you were a human that was turned into a pony. I believe you.” She then gave a smile.

I was actually...shocked. Judging from Luna’s face she didn’t believe at all. Still, who would?

“W-wait, you believe me? W-why?”

Even Luna wanted to know.

A human DID come here before.” Celesta then quickly turned to Luna. “You remember that story that mother told us? About the female human that came from a different universe and actually helped the ponies of that time beat the Demon Lord Tirek?”

“I had actually forgotten about that story.” Luna said with her hoof to her chin.

Celestia quickly turned back to me. “ Maybe you are somepony--or in your case, somebody--was sent here for a reason.”

I should really ask her about that story since I’m gonna be hospitalized for awhile. She also looks like she has something else to say.

“You also said that you can’t remember anything. For now, how about I give you a name.” Celestia thought for a while, then a smile appeared on her face. “How about Leady Star?”

Luna quickly disagreed with that name. “TIA!”

“What? It's not sorta like that name.” Celestia laughed as she sticked her tongue out,

I… kinda like the name. It's nice. It also sounds familiar. Maybe it's something close to my real name?

I like the name. If, for some reason, Luna doesn’t want me to take it.”

Luna looked at me with an angry look but calmed down and muttered out something a bit.

“ Fine... Leady.” She gave a smile. “For now, please get some bedrest. Some sleep may help you remember something.”

I nodded in agreement, and they nodded back as well. The both of them left the room as I placed my head on this comfy pillow. Why was I sent here? I then lifted up my bandaged hand-I mean hoof. So many questions… Maybe Luna is right. Some sleep will do me good. Good night.

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