FIM: Rise of the Creata

by Kaijeno

The tale of the Creata and Tana

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The tale of the Creata and Tana

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…...Ugh...wha?

I woke up clutching my head, ugh, it feels like a hangover without the bad consequences. After I glanced at my appendages, noticed that I am back to my original pony form.

[Leady? Are you okay?]

Tana? Oh good she's still here.

[Of course I’m still here…”]

Wait you can hear my thoughts?

[I guess so, it appears I can.]

Huh, well this is eerie... wait… something's off.

I got out of this bed and open the door to see steel black bars that blocked my entrance, and I immediately thought “Hostage”, upon close inspection, the bars emanated a soft gold glow, so I knew magic was involved… that was it, there was no escape, I was silently hoping for a man on the other side holding a camera and uttering the phrase “It’s just a prank bro”.

“This isn’t a prank video, is it?” I uttered

“Ah you're awake.” A familiar Guard was near the side of the Door.

“Wait, you’re the guard that gave me the letter correct?

He nodded, “Correct, Princess Luna told me to keep a strict eye on you, think of this as a house arrest”

“Guard is the prisoner awake?”

“Oh hush, he is no Prisoner.”

Those voices, yes it's Luna and Tia… and from the nature of Luna Voice, she sounds pretty damn pissed. The guard gave a Salute and opened the Prison bars on an invisible hinge as the royals entered my “cell”.

I gave a sigh of relief “You have no idea how glad I am to see a really familiar fa-”

I wanted to continue but when I saw Luna… she was....Tiny, she was approximately the size of a filly.

“You look so ADORABLE!” I gasped in awe “I just wanna Hu-”

“SILENCE!!!” Luna interjected, using the Canterlot Voice and blushing.

That was enough to scare the living daylights out of me, It was at that precise moment, I knew I was screwed..

“Tis-I mean, you are now charged with harbouring a deadly villain.” Luna Said angrily. “And… K-K-Ki…”

Celestia Continued “Ignore her. I think she's still fed up on the whole kissing thing.”

“Well sorry about th-Wait kissing?!”

I’m little confused here, when did I kiss Luna?

[Oh that was me, when I took over, I needed power so I absorbed her power, which is why I kissed her and also why she’s in that state of charging.}

State of charging? I’m a little confused with that as well?

[Do I have to explain everything to you? When a Creata uses too much power, they enter a forced charging state, meaning they shrink and temporally can’t access their Creata abilities until a certain amount of time has passed, then they are allowed to transform but they are still in the charging state]

I tasted my lips a little, I tasted some fruity lip gloss.

“Is that why my lips taste like blueberry fruit punch?”

Luna Blushed even harder “DAMMIT shut up!”

Oh man her getting even more ticked off. Celestia was watching her go off and She was just smiling throughout all this.

[Okay time to take over. Get out the way leady]

Wait no hold on a se………

Tana Pov

[Not Cool Tana]

Oh hush, let me deal with them.

“Oh Luna you don't know when to shut up, do you?”

Luna quickly hushes, while Celestia put her hoof to her mouth. “T-Tana. It really is you.?”

“Hey there Solar Flank, nice to see you once more” I said giving out a smile.

[W-Wow. Tia Seems really happy to see you]

Me and Celestia are buddies and share a good bond, Luna However…

“Tana. You freaking pervy pet phoenix, I will get you for what you did….” Luna shouting while flailing her hoof

I just grinned at her “Or what? Are you going to hit me with your tiny hooves? You know what, how about we play that game we always play when I’m bored.

Suddenly Luna got scared “No...Not that…”

[Tana...what are you doing….]

“Hey Luna you want to Ride the moon?”

She then started Screaming in annoyance while Tia just laughed.

[Crappy puns?]

All puns are “crappy”, but yes.

I grinned as I said more. “Did it hurt when you fell from the moon? Because your face is messed up.”

[THAT WASN’T EVEN A PUN!]

Tia was laughing up a storm as I said more and more puns. Heck the Guard Laughed as well.

Luna had enough as she was covering her ears “Just what do you want…”

“Simple, I want my new buddy here to be free”

Celestia Sat on the floor as she started to Speak “We would love to but the thing is, we don't know it that same event will happen again.”

Oh yeah...She’s right...That incident…

[You mind explaining that?]

I’ll tell that when I’m ready…

“I want to give you a chance, but it's up to Luna.” Tia said

Curses so close…

Luna now walked to me,” I WONT allow it. I am sending you back…”

[Gosh, what did you do to piss her off this much?]

I TOLD you, I’ll explain later. Besides I have a plan.

“Oh really?” I now gave a grin, “You DID swear to Leady that you will help him no matter what, and if I remember correctly, you always keep your word. So by banishing me again you are breaking your promise, the latter will tarnish your name as a Princess”

As per usual I was on the money as Luna got ticked, wow, I am the master of aggravating her.

“..Fine. I will allow you to stay, but only on one condition.” Luna said calmly

I nodded “What's the condition?”

Luna gave a menacing smile,” You and me...We’ll have a Creata Duel…”

Okay that technically scared me a little, I can’t beat her in this form because she can kick my feathery or in this case ‘furry’ ass in an instant….

“O-Oh...you can’t be serious…”

“I am serious, we are going to test your Power, we will go by our rules and you DO remember what happens to the underdog, correct?” Luna said as she gave a menacing yet flirty grin…

I gulped as I remembered all the crazy shit we did…”Y_Yeah..”

She then Smiled, “Good.” Luna then walked out with a smile on her face. Tia followed as well and then looked back at me and said.

“Good Luck Tana...”

...I am so dead.

[You can’t beat her?]

...Leady I’m going to tell you the story on how I was born. It will explain everything.

[Okay. I’m Listening Tana.]

Before I tell that Story, I should first tell you the Lore of the Creata Pony.

Creata Race

Meaning: Creation

The Original God of Creation vs the Demon God of Destruction. This war has been going on for Centuries. For so long in fact, that worlds were made in the Process. Out of the infinite number of worlds that were created, two of them contained a race of humans that shared the almighty power of God, and another world where demons that shared the destructive power of the demon, just like their almighty idols, they too fought and in the process made worlds of their own. Each world just kept fighting until instead of one world, one figure of each race were born and sent to different parts of the universe. Then, the power of the gods was reduced.

One Alicorn was born, she made the world we lived in and the Kingdom, known as Equestria. Making a World is very powerful task and by now she needed offspring. She was about to give birth when a demon type of Alicorn like her attacked her and gave her some deep wounds, it would take time for her to heal and to give birth as well so she made a race made in her image and called it Creata. These Creata ponies were created to protect her until she has recovered. She made this race weaker than herself so they won't rebel, they also helped finish making the world that she made. Because they couldn't create everything their cutie marks determine what they can create. If a pony has a tree CM, it means they either create trees, destroy them or both.

As the years went by, she had finally recovered and gave birth to two Alicorns named Celestia and Luna. They were as strong and powerful as her, so it took a very long time to make them. She also bestowed the Creata Power to one of the Said fillies. The Creata Race also gave birth to more Creata’s and even regular ponies with no type of Creta powers so on. Later on she needed to leave so she could find the Demon Pony that attacked her. She left her world in her daughter's care and gave a Special task to watch over her Sister and the ponies as well. As she left, the Creata’s disappeared and only came out when certain events happened. Some stayed hidden while some were out in the open to help the other ponies.

Time to time they Fought these shadow like ponies they called NeoCreata and Shadows because they almost have the same abilities. The battle between them continued it has said that The Creatas sealed this world and hid it away from the Neos but who knows when they will return. As of now the Creata race is dying out due to the race not giving birth to Creata ponies.

[So that's what you meant when I was a Creata. wow! Did this Alicorn ever come back?]

She would come back once every few years to see them, from what Luna and Tia told me, She was very beautiful, strong and caring.

[That’s amazing}

I know right? I wish I’d get the Chance to meet her….

[So Tana now about your past now?]

Oh yeah that’s right… I’ll continue…

One thousand fifty years ago I was created by Starswirl the Bearded. He was the first pony that managed to create living breathing life with Creata magic…. I was a gift for Luna but back then I was just a normal Phoenix, but as time progressed I started changing and underwent a transformation and became… well… Anthropomorphic.
Starswirl started studying me, when he was Finished I would go play with Luna.

As time progressed, we slowly became closer until our first kiss.

Yup, I started to get romantic and Luna didn’t mind, It went from a friendship to a loving relationship, we were happy. More time Progressed and I started to gain magical abilities. Luna then helped me with my magic and that just strengthened our relationship. I would Always Lose in a Fight with Luna So I kept using Teasing methods to win some fights. We would then make the loser do some crazy shit. It was so fun...until ‘that’ day happened.

I don't know why but I started to hate everything. I was ridiculously powerful. In my eyes everything was red. I kept destroying things. I hurt Tia, Luna, Philomena, Everyone.. Until Starswirl defeated me. I remembered being sealed in the pocket Dimension with him still there.

There was something else he told me but I just can’t remember. It’s been too long.

[Sorry Tana. I’m just processing all of this and all I can say is...Wow]

It’s Okay Leady, during that imprisonment I learned a few things, It was lonely in there but now it’s not anymore, I only met you for a day and look at all the Shit we caused?

Leady started laughing uncontrollably

[Maybe so but we still have one more Obstacle. Luna and this Creata Duel, So how does that work?]

Basically it’s just two Creata Fighting to prove who’s stronger. It’s either that or to settle debates, we say an incantation to create an invisible field so we won't receive true damage to our bodies. We will feel the pain but when the battle is over, the only thing you will be feeling is fatigue and your power dropping or not.

[Hmm Interesting, well we have time can you explain some more?]

Sure thing Leady.

We talked for hours until the Guard unlocked the room and made us follow to the training field, It still hasn't changed after all these years.

We Then Saw Celestia, the Purple Pony from last night and Luna already transformed into her base form… So, her Power is not yet there it seems?. A Base Form Only consists of Clothing and Hers Just looks like Training Clothing.

“So, are you Ready Tana?” Luna Said with a serious tone.

I nodded back at her “I am Luna “

[Hey um go easy on my body okay]

No Promises.

[…shit.]

Since, Leady’s body is still adapting to Creata Power, I had to be careful, so I transformed as well and positioned myself. Celstia then walked straight to the outer centre of the field.

“Okay you two, I want a good fight, since technically Tana is In Leady’s body, Luna agreed to give herself a handicap. You only hit her four times to win but, she will attack you at full strength.

[That Sounds Simple enough]

Easy for you to say

“Now..” Celestia Raise her hoof high in the Sky “Both Challengers begin the Chant.”

“Creatas locked in battle.”

“Ready to prove who’s best”

“So we can challenge the Rest”

“Oh great mother protect the land”

“With your arcane magic to also protect your children”

“Field Of Battle: CREATE”

A large white Spell circle covered the field and probably spread across Canterlot. Since Creata like to move a lot, but now that the field is up...

LUNA Ready….

...Shit is Most definitely…

...Tana READY…

..Going to get Real…

Creataaaaas

DUEL!!


Author's Note

No drawing this chapter but there will be one next chap.

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