
Thunder of Celestia
Thunder is assigned to a Spaceship, and gets more than he bargained for when a mission goes wrong.
Thunder has just been assigned to captain the newest ship, the Celestia. He is sent to quell a rebellion, an assignment that should be simple for his newest ship, but the mission is much more complicated than anypony could possibly have imagined...
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