The Rise and Fall of Nightmare Moon

Dear Pony Fans,

I just read a review of this story, here's the link to that review:

https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/559651/requested-review-the-rise-and-fall-of-nightmare-moon

I gotta say, I'm thankful for this review, because now I know that my story has some flaws that I need to work out. But from now on, I'll focus on completely rewriting the story, and focusing further into the past to when Princess Alouette and Prince Orion met. Sorry for how some people didn't like this story, I'll try to re-write it and try to make it better.

Your buddy,

MysteryHorseDude

PS. Spoiler Alert:

Luna gets her name, Nightmare Moon, after she was shunned by ponies for how they think night is fearful, and they call her "Nightmare Moon" as an insult.