Author's Note
Takes place about mid-way through the chapter Love of the original story. Features a lot of cleaning of a dirty pony, tongue action and tongue fucking and cum swapping.
Love - NSFW Scene
“I think we should clean up in the shower, I don’t want to meet the princess covered in… stuff.” I moved to the tub and started the shower.
“Oh wow, this is rather nice. We just had a spring at the castle that everyone would share.” She remarked. “Come on, you can wash my back.”
“Alright.” I said. We hopped into the tub and started cleaning off and I assisted her with her back and other hard to reach spots. She actually needed much more attention, the amount of filth covering her body was incredible, and I’m not sure how I didn’t notice before now.
She sat under the stream and worked the filth from her hair as I sat behind her massaging the soap into her. Now that I was behind her, relatively clean, I watched the water cascade down her back as I washed. Her skin was a bit tight, but was still rather soft under my hooves as I scrubbed out the dirt.
I worked from the base of her neck, paying special attention to make sure she was squeaky clean as I worked my way down. I traced my hooves along her back, making sure I got every piece as I thought about how we woke up together. What were my feelings for her, what were her feelings for me? What would this mean for us? I knew next to nothing about love, just the crush explained in the Hairy Trotter book, but it was vague at best.
Rose gasped a bit and shifted back and forth as my hooves reached her flanks, but didn’t say anything. I scrubbed both sides at the same time, watching as I slowly washed away the grime that was covering her cutie mark, a bright red rose with a few music notes.
“For some reason I thought you simply didn’t have a cutie mark like the other ponies.” I remarked. “It’s very nice though, represents your singing?”
“Heh, guess I was dirtier than I thought.” She said, “Yes, but it also represents my role in the order with my connection to nature magic.”
I moved onto her tail, starting at the base and combing my hooves and a brush we found through the hair. There were a lot of snags pulling on her tail as I combed, causing her grunt now and then as she kept focusing on her mane, chest, and forelegs. It was a tough battle, but her tail eventually became as clean as it was going to get.
“There we go, were there any other spots?” I asked.
Rose sighed, “Yes, actually… And it’s becoming rather painful the more I’m aware of it…” She trailed off.
“Alright, where is it? I probably missed it.” I started tracing over her back once again.
“No, my back feels nice, and the massage was lovely, but the filth is in a more… intimate… spot.” She said hesitantly.
“… I don’t follow.”
“It’s… it’s my mare parts.” She said, visibly blushing.
“Oh…” I could feel myself blushing as well. “Did you need a few moments?”
“I… don’t think I can actually… um… clean it out… you see…” She said.
“Ah.”
We sat there in silence for several minutes, too embarrassed to say anything. But I looked at her, sitting under the stream, watching as a shiver ran up her back and she let out a pained grunt. I grew sad, seeing her in pain like this. It’s not her fault she’s this way, she’s suffered enough. I know Twilight would absolutely refuse and her sister is a few hours trot away, we would miss the train to Canterlot. I realized that I was the only one able to help her, and possibly the only one willing to help her.
I steadied my nerves and took a breath, “Alright, I’ll help you. But I have no idea what I’m doing.”
She sighed in relief, “Thank you, I promise I’ll make it up to you.” She looked back at me as she stood, “Just do what you did to my back, and I’ll guide you from there.”
I gulped as I stared at her flank, her wet tail pressing between her legs keeping her modesty. I noticed that the back side of her flanks were still dirty, so I did as I did before. I started at her cutie marks and washed up to her tail, then down the back of her legs, then back up to her rump. Her tail had visibly relaxed but as I steadied myself she pulled away.
“Sorry… I think… I think it would be better if I propped myself up…” She said as she turned around. “I think it’ll be easier… and I could guide you better…”
“Okay, whatever you’re more comfortable with.” I said.
Rose turned to face me and sat back down. I was about to ask how this was better when she leaned back, now reclining against the side of the tub. She brought her tail up between her legs as she spread them out to either side, revealing the dirt and grime still covering her stomach and inner thighs.
“Yea, we still have a ways to go.” I remarked and used my magic to adjust the stream of water to hit her lower body.
Rose nodded as I started washing her tummy, feeling as her soft insides started coming to life from the food she has been eating. I didn’t really notice how dreadfully skinny she was, I could almost feel her spine though her squishy organs as I cleaned her.
“I hope your body starts absorbing the food soon.” I remarked as I cleaned out her belly button with a bit of magical assistance.
She giggled at the feeling, “Yes, I should be filling out in the coming weeks now that the worst of the waste is gone.”
“Oh good, because that was a nightmare, no offense.” I remarked.
“No I agree completely. But speaking of, what you did for me, what you’re still doing for me, I don’t think I’ve ever met someone as nice and caring as you…” She trailed off as I looked into her eyes; her beautiful red irises drew me in as I moved closer.
“Rose, even with my memory loss I can say that without a doubt, that you are the most beautiful, wonderful, talented, caring pony I have ever met, and I know this because, I think I’m in love with you… and it’s not sparking a single memory, except for when I first met you.” I said, cupping my hoof on her cheek.
She snuggled into my hoof and held it against her cheek with her own hoof with a smile, “I’m so happy… yet I want to scream and cry… I’ve never had a special some pony that I felt like this toward, and I’m sure it’s love too.”
Our muzzles were within a breath’s distance as we stared into each other’s eyes, “I’m glad, I’m really happy, Rose.” She leaned forward and out lips met softly. I closed my eyes and focused on the feeling of being filled with such emotion, it made me giddy as my heart pounded in my chest, and I didn’t want it to end.
She reached around my shoulders and pulled me into a tight embrace, but we remained kissing each other just as gently as before. I ran my hooves along her body, somehow the motions seeming all the more special compared to simply washing her before. I felt her doing the same, making my sides tickle as she traced the place my chitin ended and my soft underside began.
Eventually we parted lips, both breathing heavily from the exchange. “Oh Beetle…” She said.
I shook my head, “Sigma. My name is Sigma.”
She smiled, “You remembered?”
I smiled back, “Had a dream last night about it.”
She cooed, “Oh come here you sweet thing~”
She pulled me in for another kiss, this one a bit stronger. I pressed into it a bit as well, but what surprised me was her wet tongue tracing my lips. I opened them a bit and she pressed further. She played along my tongue with hers, and I did the same. Her taste was rather sweet, having just consumed a mass of pancakes for breakfast. Her recovery must be going quickly as well, it never occurred to me that her tongue might be shriveled and dry, but feeling it as wet and fleshy as mine made me want more of it.
I turned my head a bit and pressed a bit further, sliding my longer tongue along hers as I entered her mouth. I felt her start tracing my fangs a bit as she shivered under me. I traced around inside her mouth as well, not wanting to press too far but making sure to taste as much of her sweetness as I could. I moaned into her mouth as she continued to hold me, tracing her hooves all over me.
I started to feel a bit funny though, my groin was pressed up against her stomach, I could feel my ball sack being teased by the hairs of her tail that was pinned between us, and something else. I couldn’t recall what it was exactly, but it felt incredible and seemed to grow in length along my underside, trapped between us.
Rose broke the kiss, “Well, I’m glad I’m not the only one excited over this.” She said, and then flexed her hips to press against the length between us. I let out a gasp as a jolt of pleasure surged through me, what was that!?
“But I’m not clean yet, I’m such a dirty filly~” She said in a sultry tone with lidded eyes.
I nodded in understanding. I gave her a quick kiss before moving back, my length moving with me and sliding through her tail pleasingly. I looked to the work I had left, her inner thighs and below her belly button.
I decided to start with her left thigh, tenderly moving her leg out to grant access to the inner joint. I traced my hoof along her leg, scrubbing out the dirt that had stuck there all the way to her tail, under which was a fleshy mound putting out quite a bit of heat. I did my best to keep my distance and focus on the dirt, making her clean as possible.
I then repeated the action on her right thigh, going right up to her pubic region but stopping short each pass. Rose moaned in pleasure, enjoying my ministrations as she watched me work. I moved to her lower belly, working away the dirt that had built up there. She suddenly gasped as my hoof ran over a hard spot I thought was a lump of dirt, but she shook her head and motioned for me to keep going.
As the grime washed away the lump revealed it to be a pert pink nipple on the end of a starved teat. Rose seemed to enjoy the attention I was giving it, her sighs and moans helping guide my actions. I needed to move onto the other one, but as I did I slid out my tongue and ran it over her sensitive flesh. She shuddered and gasped, so I took it into my mouth, lightly suckling and licking it lovingly as I cleaned the other teat.
Once the other was free of dirt I gave it the same special treatment as its twin. Rose gasped and caressed my cheeks as I pleased her. There was motion beneath me; she had moved her tail away. I took the hint and moved lower, all that remained was her rose that rested between her thighs. I took a moment to look her special area over and assess the best way to clean it.
I lay down to come eye level with her dirty petals, but the hard tub smashing my rod against my belly was uncomfortable so I shifted to half lie on my side. I looked back at it, it was long and pink, ending in a flared head, my penis, I realized. I saw Rose lower her leg a bit and ran a hind hoof along my length. I shivered from the pleasure.
After a few strokes she returned to how she was sitting with her legs held up a bit and spread to either side, I looked up at her and she had a soft smile on her face. I nodded and returned my attention to her place of need. I took my soapy hoof and ran it along the outside of her folds, carefully cleaning around her mound and her outer lips. As I passed over the top of her slit, I felt her flex against me as something poked my hoof for a second and vanished within her folds.
The outside was clean now, but I wasn’t about to stop. I positioned my hooves on either side of her petals and felt her flex again; I watched a little pink nub poke out for a second before vanishing. I smirked and slowly pulled her lips apart, revealing the pink within. There was a sheen of fluid other than water and the fleshy nub I saw was a bit redder than the rest and seemed to pulsate to her heartbeat, but there was dirt here as well.
Rose seemed to sigh in relief as I opened her petals, perhaps she was referring to inside her flower earlier, a place where hooves would have a hard time reaching. Mine were no different, too large to be of much use. But my tongue would be able to clean her out rather well, and I would get to know what she tastes like.
My nose was right above her mound, her scent driving my own lust as I absently humped against the tub, but I had a job to do. I hesitantly stuck out my tongue and licked long and slow from bottom to top, making sure to clean up the nub as well. The dirt tasted like dirt, but there was a metallic sweetness mixed with it. I lapped her inner lips several more times, clearing away any dirt that was there, leaving just smooth soft flesh and her sweet taste.
Rose was moaning above me, running her fore hooves along my head and neck as I worked. “Mmm, yes~! Just a bit more… go inside, deep inside!” She said.
I obliged. My tongue ran over her button a few more times, causing her to squeak in pleasure before I slowly slid my tongue into her opening at the base of her flower. She gasped out in pleasure causing a fresh flow of her juices mixed with more dirt into my mouth. I spat it out as before then slid back in. I moved my tongue all along her inner walls, clearing out as much of the dirt as I could find.
My tongue eventually reached the far end of her love tunnel, causing her to gasp and whimper in pleasure as I made sure to clean it as best I could. I withdrew once more, this time tracing along the top of her tunnel, but this time I ran it across a hard lump of flesh. Rose gasped and convulsed a bit and started breathing heavily.
I spit out the last of the dirt, “There you are my lady, all clean. Shall I continue?” She was breathing heavily and nodded. I obliged once again and searched out that elusive lump inside her. It just took a moment, but once I found it I started running the length of my tongue back and forth into her, making sure to press against the nub as it did.
I saw her other button wink up at me as well, my hooves and mouth were full at the moment, but my nose was right there. I timed it, and when it winked again I pressed my nose against it and rubbed her spot inside at the same time. The next moment Rose took a huge breath and screamed silently as she clamped her eyes shut. Her tunnel clasped around my tongue, locking it in place as her hind legs wrapped around my head and held me against her as she convulsed for nearly a minute before releasing me, panting heavily. Her slit was leaving much more of the fluid than before and I took a bunch onto my mouth as I slid my tongue out of her. This time it was much stronger tasting and seemed much more satisfying.
“Oh wow… Just… Wow…” Was all she could saw between pants as I continued to clean up her petals.
“Was that good then?” I asked as I moved to lie next to her. My cock was still rock hard and rested against her belly as we snuggled a bit under the stream of water.
“That was the best… Your tongue is amazing, you must get all the mares~” She teased.
“Only the ones I love.” I responded.
“And who might that be?” She asked rhetorically.
I leaned in and kissed her deeply, our tongues playing across each other’s once again. I was pretty sure I still had some of her juices in my mouth but she seemed to enjoy the taste. We broke apart after a moment.
“I’m glad I still somewhat taste the same after a thousand years. But now I think you need some attention, that looks almost painful.” She said, looking at my cock hungrily. I looked as well, it was as stiff as ever and throbbing intensely as my heart pounded. “Just relax, and leave it to me.”
She moved down between my legs in much the same way I did for her, but didn’t hesitate to bring her snout under my testicles and nuzzle them affectionately. My cock twitched as the pleasure ran though me as she licked me, pulling them into her mouth and rolling them around. Her hoof reached up as she did and started lightly stroking it.
She let my balls pop out of her mouth with a wet pop and licked her lips in need as she eyed my length. She stuck out her tongue and ran it up to the top of the flare, where a bead of clear liquid slowly eased its way out. She licked it up readily, sending a jolt though my body as my head flared a bit. She seemed to scrutinize the taste a bit before licking at the newly formed bead again, causing another jolt of pleasure.
She continued to run her hooves along my length, periodically lapping up the spot of pre that would appear. I started to feel a pressure building in my groin as she did so. Almost as though she sensed it as well she opened her mouth and slid the first few inches of it inside her. My mind went blank at the feeling, it felt so wonderful and exotic, and I could feel her tongue caressing every inch of it.
Her head continued to lower, I could only stare and pant as I watched more and more of my cock vanish inside her mouth, all the way up to the ring near the base. I could feel my flared head bumping the far back of her throat, the pressure inside me had built almost up to a bursting point as her tongue worked all around me and her hooves massaged my balls and my lower shaft.
Then she looked up at me with those beautiful eyes. I gasped as the pressure broke through, causing my cock to flare wide and twitch erratically and my mind exploded in white pleasure. Coherent thought ceased as my legs flailed wildly, my twitching length squirting spurt after spurt of cum into Rose’s mouth as she continued to assault it with her tongue, swallowing it down when her mouth was too full.
Eventually the pleasure peaked out and I started coming back to my senses, my first being that my cock was now painfully sensitive against her tongue, but thankfully she let it slide out of her mouth and it retreated back into its sheath.
“Wow… That was… Was I…?” I tried to speak, but she held a hoof against my lips to silence me.
She moved her hoof behind me and pulled me into a kiss, but this time it was different again. There was something thick and stringy mixed in with our spit and it had a strong flavor of salt and something I else couldn’t think of. After a moment I realized that this was probably what pumped out of my cock, and it wasn’t half bad.
Rose broke the kiss, a strand of cum and spit lingered between us, “Was that good then?” She asked slyly.
I chuckled and pulled her closer, “Come here you goofy mare~!” and pulled her into another deep kiss.
We continued to make out in the shower for several more minutes, we were starting to get heated up again, but before we could go another round there was a loud knocking at the door.
“Would you two hurry up in there?! You’ve been in there for nearly an hour!” Twilight yelled through the door.
“I suppose there is always later.” I said.
“And you would be right~” Rose said and kissed me again, “Come on, let’s dry off and get to Canterlot.”
A New Life clop scene: train
I looked out the window with a sigh, “This is quickly getting boring. How long to Canterlot?”
“Probably at least an hour at this rate, but I can think of something to pass the time~” Rose said with a wink.
“Cuddling?” I asked.
“Pretty much.” She sat on the large bench next to me and presses into my side. Her left arm snaked around behind me as she pulled me close.
I moved my arms around her back and pulled her into a kiss. Our lips met and soon parted only slightly, her tongue reaching out momentarily for me to suckle, before pressing my lips against hers as our tongues explored each other.
Rose’s right hoof caressed my chest through the suit I was wearing while my own hooves trailed tenderly down her sides. Her dress was soft and sensational in my hooves as I trailed lower, down her waist and over her flank. As we made out I massaged her cutie mark through her dress.
Rose moaned into my mouth, moving her hoof from my chest to the back of my head, using it as leverage to press deeper into the kiss.
As much as I enjoyed it my neck was starting to cramp, so I pulled her over to lay on top of me. She squeaked in surprise but giggled as she straddled me, returning to the kiss, this time using both hooves to hold and caress my head and neck as our chests pressed against each other.
I traced my hooves around her sides, her body twitching with giggles as I discovered her ticklish spots. In my wanderings I discovered the underside of the dress was open, leaving her backside only covered by the long fabric draped over her flank.
I broke the kiss as I squeezed her flank cheeks, “Odd design choice.”
She kissed my nose, “Same to you.” She reached a hoof down and traced around my sheath, my underside uncovered in much the same way. A light tingle of pleasure caused my sheath to throb slightly, the head of my shaft poking out as my sheath filled.
“I think I thought of something to better pass the time~” She said, straddling me again.
As we resumed kissing I felt a heated wetness pressing against the base of my sheath. Rose moaned into my mouth as she ground herself against me. I moaned back, slightly bucking my hips as the pleasure flowed through me.
We broke the kiss as I reached full mast, she leaned back and looked me over, licking her lips. “We best not ruin our outfits so soon, but what can we do~?”
“I can think of some place~”
“Oh? Care to show me?”
Rose lifted off me a bit, allowing me to pull the coattails from under me just in case. I leaned forward, inhaling her scent, her musk, her excitement. I trailed some kisses down her chest, licking lightly at the exposed fur as I reached her belly. Unable to reach further I snaked my long tongue out and lapped at the pert nipples resting above her dripping sex.
She moaned in pleasure at the sensation, her clit winking as I licked. “I think I found the place~”
Rose whined in anticipation as I lined up my throbbing cock to her hot entrance. I traced around her labia with the head of my shaft, her slick juices trailing down the length of my shaft.
“Please,” Rose moaned, “I need this…”
Once I was lined up I pulled her head into a deep kiss as I pushed against her entrance. She moaned loudly as the head popped inside, followed by another three inches of my shaft before she held herself still and broke the kiss.
“You're a lot bigger than your tongue.” She panted. After a few moments she nodded and continued to work her way lower.
I threw my head back and moaned, her inner walls were tight and hot, the muscles worked to massage me as they pulled me in deeper inside. After what seemed like eternity our hips met. I looked down to see her pussy stretched around the base of my cock, her clit winking furiously. I used my hoof to give it a quick stroke, she yelped in surprise as her entire tunnel clasped around me almost painfully tight as my thighs were soaked in her juices.
“Oh gods, Sigma, I'm cumming!” She panted, holding my tight as her body convulsed.
Outside the door to the cabin, the guard mare could hear everything they were doing. Normally this isn't an issue, but there are very few occasions where the couples would indulge themselves during the ride. Especially during heat season it wasn't uncommon to see several mares and stallions fucking each other or masturbaring out in the open.
Unfortunately it wasn't heat season, so the mare had to hide the heat growing in her nethers. It wasn't until an exceptionally loud moan from behind her that she felt the first drop of her mare juices trailing down her leg.
She shivered as her juices cooled and dried in her fur only to be replaced with another trail, the scent of her must reached her nose, making her even more turned on as she could only stand at stone faced attention.
Her ear flicked as the muffled words ‘I’m cumming’ washed over her. She felt her clit wink in need as her pussy stayed to gape open, now constantly flowing with her need.
A bead of sweat dripped from her forehead as her need reached impossible levels. She looked around discreetly to see nopony was paying her any mind. She carefully lit her horn and lifted her tail slowly as she widened her stance.
She shuddered as she traced her lips with her magic, pulling herself open even wider and trembling as she massaged her clit. She kept her head and face level as she pushed her magic deeper inside herself, forming it into a large cock.
With her rump to the door there were none who would be able to see what she was doing, as she slowly fucked herself with her magic while on duty.
Rose came down from her high and kissed me deeply, I took that as a sign to start moving slowly. I flexed my hips, pressing into her just slightly deeper. My cock grew in girth as it flexed in pleasure. I moaned into her mouth as I lifted Rose up slightly to allow her to drop down on my shaft as I pressed up into her.
We panted heavily as the wet slaps of our love making filled the cabin. “Oh gods…” I whispered as I felt myself approaching the edge.
“Just a bit, mmm, more!” Rose encouraged. I obliged, focusing instead on the motions and steadily picking up the speed and the force. Roses moans were quickly growing in volume as she closed in on her second orgasm.
I was right on the edge, there was no holding it in anymore. “Rose!” I tried to warn her and pull off, but instead she slammed back down as she came again. The rippling sensation drove me over as I bit her shoulder as the pleasure overwhelmed me.
I felt my cock throbbing deep inside her as I filled her with my seed. I moaned at the feeling as Rose did much the same, panting each other’s names before pulling into a kiss once more.
As we made out I felt myself soften and pull out of her messy pussy. I looked down to see us both covered in clear and white fluids.
“We made quite the mess.” I remarked.
“Then we best clean it up~” She giggled and pushed me back so I was laying down, my softening cock slapped against my thigh as Rose turned to stand over me. My head was under her dress and I was able to clearly see her messy marehood.
I felt her tongue start lapping up the mess around my groin and got the hint. I extended my tongue to clean up her messy fur as well, her pussy was still leaking our mixed fluids so I started there, doing my best to clean up our cun so she wouldn't leave a trail through Canterlot.
I moaned into her snatch as she took my soft member into her mouth and licked it clean before it fully returned to its sheath. She in turn moaned as she took my balls into her mouth and rolled them around with her tongue.
After a few more moments of pleasing cleaning we broke apart and kissed once more. A grunt to our left made us turn to see the door slightly ajar, through which we were able to see the guard pleasing her own sex. A moment later she shuttered in place, a few drops of her cum squirted into the cabin.
“Looks like we're not the only ones having fun, should we help make her presentable again?” Rose asked.
“If it's fine with you it's fine with me.” I said.
We snuck up to the door and opened it just wide enough so we both could reach her soaked mound. As our tongues got to work, the mare squeaked and tensed ul, but did nothing to stop our minstrations.
The mare picked up her pace as she heard them going at it, but she needed to hear more. She carefully opened the door just a crack with her magic, allowing the telltale sounds of wet slapping sex to meet her ears.
She shivered in excitement as she sped up her magic dildo to match the sounds as she imagined heing rutted like that on the train. She heard him call out to his mare friend ad the slapping stopped, they were moaning in pleasure as they came.
She moved the dildo faster and harder as she massaged her clit, trying to push herself over the edge as quickly as possible. It wasn't quite enough though, she needed something more.
She cast her eyes around the passengers for a moment before she saw her prize. A decent looking stallion had fallen asleep on the bench and was unconsciously exposing himself.
The others didn't seem to care and ignored it but to her she was imagining him stroking his hard shaft as she sucked on the head, rolling those heavy balls around in her hooves.
She took a deep breath and shuddered as she finally came, some of her juice splattering the floor behind her. As she rode out the orgasm she slowly moved the dildo back and forth inside her to prolong the feelings as she moaned quietly in her throat.
She was about to sigh in relief when she suddenly felt a pair of dexterous tongues lapping at her labia. She shivered as her excitement sores anew. She stopped her magic as they took over, a pair of two different hooves cupped her teats and massaged the nipples and one mouth suckles her clit, the other using his long tongue to penetrating deep inside her.
Her face flushed as she started panting heavily, holding herself as still as she could as she was pleased beyond anything she's ever felt before.
She grunted and shivered violently as she came even harder than she just did, the tongues licking up her cum as fast as they could, she could feel herself gushing into their greedy mouths.
When she finally came down she calmly turned around and stuck her head into the cabin to kiss each of them deeply.
“If you ever need a third, my name is Phoebe.” They looked to each other and smiled, they would definitely enjoy her company in the future.
Author's Note
Written on my phone!
Hope you enjoy!
