Four and a half kingdoms

by HarmonyTouch

Rating: teen
Tags: Tragedy, Wonderbolts, Dark, Alternate Universe, Sad, Main 6, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Cutie Mark Crusaders, Other, Romance, Adventure
Length: 1278

Defeated a monster and their legacys hiding a deep seacret.

Astelle has wrecked the land keeping only two of his kind and killing older royals. Teenagers and saviours...

Thousands of years later their legacys take on an adventure called life.

My first story! Ok so I'm writing on my phone 'cuz I kinda don't have a computer anymore. So any grammar isues, point them out. Constucrive critsizm is apreciated.Enjoy!

Published 2015-12-17 00:40:02 UTC
Last updated 2015-12-17 00:40:02 UTC

The legend

Once upon a time there were four kingdoms; The kingdom of Princess Platinum, ruled by the princess, who was later pronouced queen, and her husband BellHoop, The kingdom of Balimare was ruled by Queen Cookie Dough and King Flintstone, at their side were the Queen's sister Princess AppleBlossom and her husband Prince Cider Fizz, The third kingdom, named Cloudsdale, was ruled by King Wind Storm and Queen Flora, The kingdom of Battlecloud was ruled by King Flashing Storm and Queen Silver Dust.

There was another kingdom, The kingdom of Alicorns. There lived a lot of alicorns. They were the protectors of the land. The rulers were King Solarious; a yellow and orange mane, with a white coat and blue eyes,and Queen Stella Cresentmoon. They had a son; they named him Astelle, he had a light gray coat and dark red mane, his eyes blue like his fathers. Astelle's cutie mark was simply, three stars

The king and queen of Platinum's kingdom had three daughters; Jewana, Diam and Rupy. Jewana was 15, she had a purple coat, blue eyes. a blue and pink mane and a cutie mark of a blue jewl. Diam, she had a pink coat, a cutie mark of a diamond, blue eyes and purple mane. Rupy had a red mane, green eyes and a white coat, she was the yungest sister.

The king and queen of Baltimare had a son and daughter named Silvia and Globestone. Silvia had a brown mane, light brown coat and light blue eyes, her cutie mark was three cookies and stones and Globe had a silver and white mane, a dark blue coat and brown eyes. The princess and prince of the same kingdom had a daughter named AppleJuice. The filly had a light orange coat, red mane and green eyes, her cutie mark was that of a picture of apple juice.

The rulers of Cloudsdale had a little colt too; his name was Flapps. Flapps had a light yellow coat and a green mane with teal eyes. His cutie mark was a blue pegasuss wing.

Then there was the young filly of Battlecloud; Prim Dash. Prim had a messy blue, yellow and red mane. she had rossie eyes and a dark blue coat. Her cutie mark was of blue, yellow and red lightning bolts.

As years whent by Astelle had got two baby sisters; Celestia and Luna. When he turned 12 Celestia was born and then two years later Luna. He also fell in love with one of his best friends; Prim. But he was jelous of another colt who got her intrested.

Prim Dash had just turned 14 when her parents said she has to go in an aranged marrige. She had no choice but to do it and leave her love behind. On the day of the wedding, thousands of ponies were in a big garden to celebrate the two. But Astelle wanted to be the one Prim loved, the one she married. Every mare in the land wanted to be with him, but the one he wanted to be with didn't.

The jelousy in Astelle's heart turnd him into a shadow monster. He used his magic to wreck the ponies' homes, the kingdoms.

Baltimare was separated from the land and became an island, Platinums castel was crumbled peaces on the grond, Battlecloud was no more, the only kingdom left standing was Cloudsdale since it was where Luna and Tia were.

Clover The Clever's daughter; Sprinkle Dot, around her neck was a magenta gem that matched her mane and eyes and sparkled on her lavander coat. The stone was a gift from her love; Speed Fril. She had no idea that it ment more that what she and anyone thought.

Prim, rid herself of the uncomfortble dress and jewlery but left a necklace she never took of. The gem was a shiny red color, it was given to her by the only colt she ever loved; Storm Flash.

Princess Diam had a perly necklece with a purple gem in it. Silver Sheild, her boyfriend gave it to her.

Salem, Flapps' girlfriend had a pink jewl around her neck. Flapps gave her the gem as a sign of his love.

Silvia also had a beautifull necklece. The gem was blue. Slipstoner, her lover gave her it after their adventure in the caves. She never took it off. Speaking of pretty jewlery, AJ also had one, Swinder gave it to her, the orange gem was just like her mane.

The young fillies and colts gatherd around lying bodies of their parents. They were lifeless. A little over was Jewlana trying to calm the shaking Rupy and Globestone.

The fourteen and thirteen year-olds started crying along with them until the six gems glowed. The gems let out magic and formed a rainbow. The rainbow shot into Astelle. They watched in amazement. Sprinklees eyes glowed and in a goulp of light Astelle vanished.

Author's Note

The story was wrrien when my phone decidedto have a working screen and its here after two months of writing!

Finding it out

"So... Um... You called us here just to tell us this story?" Rainbow Dash ashed the princess. She and her best friends were called to Canterlot by the two sissters.

The princesses just told them the legend of The Four Kingdoms. A story Dash knew all to well. She knew it because she was one of the kingdom's future rulers, Battlecloud.

Princess Luna replied to her, "There is more to it as you allredy know Rainbow Dash..."

Rainbow froze. Fluttershy glanced bettwen the princess of the night and Rainbow. Fluttershy and Rainbow have been best friends since they were born. Fluttershy and Rainbow promised each other that they would keep each others secrets, even though Flutteshy was also a princess of one of the kingdoms, where she grew up, Cloudsdale.

"H-how do you know abut that?" Rainbow sttarted to panic.

"Princess, what is going on." came Twilight's confused voice.

Cellestia sighed, "We did some reshearch on the subject. We have come to realize that, even though it doesen't seem like it, the fammilies and traditions go on and that, your friends Twilight, are the legacies of those kingdoms." The princess replied.

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After Twilight got it through her head she started asking questions abut the subject.

"But what is the quincidence that they all became barrers of the Elements of Harmony?"

"The six girls that founded the elements have been special, so are you six, Starswirl The Bearded, as the book sais,fouded a profecy. It sais "The Harmony gems will be hidden in a cave, in a forest they were found in until a spontanious turn of events, when a legacy of mine along with the other kingdoms legacies will find them. The Gems will show the true colors of the world. The six princesses have it upon themselves to do the next act."" Luna read the part in the book, well it was more of a diary.

The girls were shocked,they havent known of that part. Twilight was the most shocked. 'a legacy of mine'? What did this mean? Was she really the great-something grandaughter oh Starswirl The Bearded? The Starswirl!?

"Ohh look a te time! Gotta go somewhere..." Rainbow dashed of before anyone could question her.

"Well that was wierd." Twilight pointed out the obvious, "Where is se going?"

Luna and Fluttershy chuckled.

Author's Note

Gonna maybe write a Starburst story...

Don't exactly know why I used the spoler...

Use constructive critisism if you like...

I'm bored!

Who else is waiting on GF?

"Ohh girls do what we like,..."

I'm gonna go now...