Carnage in Ponyville

by The insane joker

Rating: teen
Tags: Mystery, Comedy, Horror, Adventure, Crossover, Human
Length: 1095

This is a carnage story

A meteorite lands in the Everfree forest and a red liquid spills from it and forms a scary pony named carnage. will equestria be friendly to this visitor and will he be friendly find out soon.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2015-11-13 19:07:45 UTC

Chapter 2 enter castle in chains

So we headed to a train station to go to

Canterlot. I got on with twilight ( she insisted

That I say twilight) I started to fall asleep with bad

Dreams ones that would make you lose your

Mind. I started shake in my sleep. few hours later

I woke up screaming in pain holding my chest

  breathing heavy I looked around at my

surrounding everypony was looking at me

   worried even twilight was freaked out for what

Happened to me. So I break the awkward silence

Everything's fine with me go back to your routine

  i said. so that's what they did. few hours later

   We walked up to a golden gate with five day

   guards starring me down. i went to the female

Captain guard and put my hand out for a

handshake I waited for her to shake it but it

didn't come so I just put my hand in my pocket

  to give her the royal paper pass to talk to

Princess celestia and luna but she didn't take it.

The female guard went to ask the other guards

what to do the other guards pointed to the two

tall towers. one was a Crescent Moon and the

other was a sun. two Pegasus guards flow up to

the two towers and knocked on the doors they

Both opened up. each guard went inside to talk

about what they seen down below. three guards

surround me. the female guard speaks

up and says follow me. I nodded to show respect

They lead me to a throne room with chains

on me. well this is just fan fucking tastic

Well since the guards left I think I can break the

chains now 1 2 3 ahhh hahahahaha I still have

my strength and speed also weapons it's good

To be back haha yeah. now i wait for the princesses

So I can talk to them to buy a house or something

   Plus I need help with these pointing at my horn

And wings also am very hungry for some meat food

eight hours later I am dead asleep with my red

Dome over me for protection from danger then

I hear it a lot of commotion outside the dome so

I started to transform into the red alicorn male

With sharp teeth. when I was done all I saw was

  one beautiful dark blue alicorn mare in front

of me and to My right I see a regal taller white

alicorn mare. I just stand there looking at the

dark blue mare. uhh hi i manage to say. Well

Luna you manage to get a boyfriend nice the white

Alicorn mare said. i started to glow blue from

embarrassment I snapped out of my embarrassment

And walked to the one named luna and said i am

So very sorry for scaring you in the dark forest

can you forgive me. Yes yes I can she replied.

also can you teach me how to fly and magic

please I will follow every order you give me.

Yes I will teach you she said. one last thing

  Yes what is it she said. will you marry me I asked

  Yes wait a minute I mean maybe give a couple

of days ok. Aright I said

             Next chapter find out what happens next peace out

Chapter 1 arrival of carnage

It's 12:00 midnight this is when princess luna goes

Around checking dreams she was now just about to

Leave when a night guard came up to her a told her

About a meteor that came down in the Everfree forest

So she wondered into the dark forest to see it.

  About 12:30 luna found the meteorite with a big

crater she walked up to it to see a red liquid spill

From it she screams and jets out towards ponyville

To forget this happened . But she didn't realize she left

A feather behind. the liquid grabs hold of the feather

And transforming into red alicorn with big sharp teeth

   My name is carnage I said.

I looked around my surroundings.

a forest huh let's see if can find a

village. After walking around for like

an hour I found a way out and

Theirs a trail leading to a village called ponyville I

Started to walk towards ponyville now I am at the

entrance and start to walk a little more .huh

Ponyville strange maybe somepony can

help me buy

A home and teach me to fly and magic but for now I

Need to rest so I concentrate

and the red liquid forms

A red dome shape over me to shield me from danger

But he didn't realizes he is in the middle of ponyville

We're everypony can see him in the morning.

6 am the Sun's light began to rise and everypony was

Awakening to go to work but stopped at the middle of

ponyville at a red dome. ponys began to inform

Princess twilight sparkle about it so she walked to the middle

of ponyville and actually saw a red dome .

she

Tried to get in to see if anypony was hurt but she

couldn't get in so she took a simple of the

structure to study the red liquid but before she

got the simple the red dome began to form the red

alicorn with big sharp teeth . she gasped at the

unexpected alicorn . The red alicorn began walk

towards the purple alicorn and asked is there a

house for sale she only nodded to him . then

please take me there so I can buy it . she snapped out

of her awkward silence and asked may I talk to you in my

Castle for a moment please she said. I nodded and followed

Her to her castle. when we got there she told me sit

So i did. she introduce herself to me my name is princess

Twilight sparkle and your name is. carnage I cut her

Off. well carnage how did you get here she said. a

meteorite I replied. oh she said. I have a question to

ask you I said do you know who's feather this is I pull

Out the blue feather of my chest  and showed her

That's princess luna feather she said.

Can you take me to her

I really need to apologize for accidentally

scaring her in the dark forest I said. Sure she replied follow me

Next chapter find out what happens peace out