Awakening Fluttershy's Dark Sky
Conclusion of Part Two
Previous ChapterNext Chapter"That's the end of the second part!" Boss announced. "So, are you guys hooked yet?"
The Dark Sky members still weren't that impressed, with the exception of Derpy…
"It was a little more enjoyable than the opening part," said Dumb-bell, "but still, it was mostly just okay."
"Sorry, I still don't like this story much…" Hoops said. "I appreciate that it's trying to be creative and different from what came before it, but it just doesn't grab me."
"..." Score predicted the future of Boss' project silently.
"Boring AND lame." Ghost Rainbow Dash gave it straight. "I completely agree with Score's prediction. This is TOTALLY going to turn into a cliche supernatural drama story that everyone is going to praise because it's "SO ELABORATE AND WELL-WRITTEN", when really, they're just so blinded by the length of it that they completely overlook the gaping plotholes, pretentious writing style, and how shallow and grating the characters are. Oh yeah, and that scene with Fluttershy's funeral was terribly mean-spirited and unfunny. *spits* Blow me."
"I just don't know what's wrong with this story!" Derpy proclaimed. "It's a supernatural mystery, and a really entertaining one at that!"
"Glad you all loved it!" Boss exclaimed again. "And I did not make supernatural drama, I just wanted to make an original mystery for the world that could be read like a story. Also, I haven't forgotten about the riddle..."
Fluttershy _ hit _ _ _ _ _ Hawaiian _
Clue #1: called again
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