Darkness in his Eyes

by MargopoloGX

Prologue: Fates met

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"You know, I've always hated this place as much as I hated you..." Sasuke said, lying on the ground, his left arm missing. The teenager next to him, known as Naruto Uzumaki, chuckled at that statement.

"Really? I've always thought that this place was full of beauty. The waterfall, the statues...." Naruto said, staring into the starry sky.

"Y'know.... It hurts knowing that I lost again. I wasn't able to fulfill my promise to Sakura, and bring you back to Konoha..." He said, a smile on his face. Sasuke frowned at the thought of defeat, but realized something. Naruto went all the way to bring him back. He even lost his arm, and they were both at the point of no return. Standing right in front of the gates of death.

"I think that you won this time, Naruto. I lost to you... You're still a genin, aren't you?" Sasuke asked. Naruto closed his eyes, as did Sasuke. Naruto had a slight grin on his face.

"I beat you... At least you can't brag to me anymore." He said, turning his head to look at Sasuke. The Uchiha breathed heavily before he said one last thing.

"I've spent all these years thinking about revenge... But it all turns out that it was pointless." He said, blinking once, only to close his eyes again.

"Goodbye Naruto...." He whispered, before a shining light took him into its presence. His hand turned colder than the chill of the night, and his body was numb.

'Is this what death is like?' He asked himself. But his hands started to regain heat, as if he had his other arm again. His body regained feel. Suddenly, he felt as if he was falling. He opened his eyes to reveal that he was standing on a staircase. It was white, and he seemed to be in the sky. He checked himself- All he had was his blade. No Kunai, shuriken, ninja wire, or summoning scrolls. He turned around, seeing a figure walk down the staircase towards him. It wore a red cloak, and had long, black hair. Sasuke grabbed the hilt of his sword, ready to attack whoever was coming. As the figure came down, he suddenly became more familiar.

"Who are you, and what do you want?" A familiar voice boomed as the figure stopped. Sasuke immediately knew who this was.

"I-Itachi?" He mumbled, as he took his hand off of his katana. The figure stepped forward once more, and smiled. It was Uchiha Itachi.

"So... Am I dead then?" Sasuke asked, opening and closing his hand. Itachi closed his eyes, shaking his head. He then frowned, as he finally reached Sasuke. Sasuke looked into Itachi's eyes, and Itachi stared back, putting his hand on Sasuke's shoulder.

"I believe that you don't know the next step. You still have thoughts of revenge in your Heart, Sasuke." Sasuke's pupils shrunk. He... did? But didn't he just reveal that revenge was pointless to Naruto? Sasuke clutched his heart, and activated his Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan. Suddenly, darkness surrounded him.

"YOU STILL DO WISH FOR REVENGE ON THE HIDDEN LEAF, HUH SASUKE?!?!" A voice said, causing Sasuke to tighten the grip on his heart. His Eternal Mangekyou began spinning, as he could not see through the darkness. He wanted revenge. He needed revenge. He WOULD GET REVENGE.

"Sasuke." Itachi said, causing the brother Uchiha to look back up, the skies clearing of darkness. Itachi sighed, before he said one more thing.

"You have too much darkness in your heart. Before you can come back, you must be cleansed. Then, you'll be able to come back. As of now, you have been rejected from paradise." He said throwing Sasuke off of the staircase. Sasuke looked up in disbelief. His own brother rejected him from paradise? Now, he was falling from the clear sky. He started to feel tired, and closed his eyes, as he fell into a deep slumber.


Sunset sat up, yawning as an alarm clock woke her up. She looked down, seeing that she was in her sleeping bag. When she looked around, six other girls were sitting up, yawning, and finally waking up. Then it hit her.

'Oh yeah... Slumber party at AJ's.' She thought, as she got up and stretched. She started to roll up her sleeping bag, as Rainbow Dash began conversation in the bedroom.

"Did you guys get a good nights sleep?" She asked. Everyone nodded and yawned, as Pinkie did a cartwheel through the room. Her stuff was packed, and she was already bouncing off the walls.

"I didn't get a good nights sleep! I'm beat!" She shouted, doing push-ups. Everyone then looked to Sunset, their eyes eager for something.

"So.... Sunset. How did you enjoy your first sleepover?" Applejack asked, twirling the hair in front of her. Sunset smiled.

"It was amazing, guys. Thank you so much for showing me another path." She said. Everyone smiled, and continued packing. Applejack began once more.

"We're glad to have you here, Sunset." She said, as she went into changing her clothes. Sunset chuckled, as she finished the sleeping bag. Suddenly, as Sunset closed her eyes, something grabbed her. It started to pull her. She opened her eyes, as she saw that she was holding onto the hands of her friends, and they were pulling her. She looked back, seeing her demonic form from 2 months ago.

"YOU WANT POWER, DON'T YOU?!? THEN WHY ARE YOU WASTING TIME WITH THEM?!?" It asked her. She held on for dear life, but it seemed that the girls couldn't hold onto her, and let go.

"Sunset?" Sunset's head perked up, as she saw Fluttershy behind her. They were the only ones left in the room.

"You.... Um... Might want to get ready, because we're already at breakfast." She said. Sunset nodded, and took the top of her pajamas off, revealing the sports bra underneath.

"I'll be out in a minute." She said, Fluttershy nodding. She then left the room, leaving Sunset by herself. As Sunset put her clothes on, she looked outside, seeing the rising sun.

'I hope that today will be my chance to show everyone I've changed...' She thought to herself, putting her skirt on.

"Sunset!" Applejack called from downstairs. Her head perked up, and she immediately turned around.

"Coming!" She shouted back, grabbing her jacket and running down the stairs. She put her Jacket on, and found the six girls sitting at the table.

"I'm gonna go gather some apples before the day starts. Take as much food as you want!" She said, Sunset looking a a layout of trays. Eggs, sausages, biscuits, bacon... A large farm breakfast. Applejack stepped outside, as the other five girls grabbed plates, and dug into their food.


Sasuke opened his eyes, and immediately looked around. Everything was still white and blurry.

"Excuse me sir!"

His vision began to clear up, and he looked at his surroundings. Behind his head, he felt the roughness of tree bark.

"Excuse me!" A voice shouted from below. He looked underneath himself, seeing a girl with a hat and blonde hair.

"What do you think you're doin' on mah farm?" She asked. He looked around one more time, realizing where he was.

"The trees ain't for restin'! Get down from there!" She yelled. He looked down at how high he was. He was stuck on a tree.


Author's Note

Well, here it is. The Oh-So hated 'Eye of an Uchiha' has been replaced with this. Maybe we can get a ton of likes. Who knows? Either way, I'll see all of you dudes... In the next chapter!!!

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