KDS Adventure's begin (or somthin)

by KDS-Writingindustries

Rating: teen
Tags: Dark, Comedy, Adventure
Length: 1171

A pony who was raised by dragons what's the difference

Have you ever heard of what's outside the boarders of Equestria?
I'll tell ya, once, along time ago, pony kind tried to expand there land, big mistake. What happened? Find out and read on fellow readers.

This is my first story, I would like some critique advice if you may. No hate, but just some writing advice for me, k? That's it for now ;) p.s cover art?

Re edit: this may go on hiatus for a little while. I have to work on another story, which you can read here

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2015-11-16 03:10:02 UTC

1: Prologue

Prologue

Darkness, Darkness everywhere. I couldn't see a thing, but I heard it. Screaming, so much bloodcurdling, agonising, screaming. It terrified me. I heard the thumping of my weak heart. Suddenly everything becomes blurry, I'm seeing two figures fighting a much bigger creature in some sort fire.Until.. CRACK. As my vision became clearer so did the figures, at least what was left of the two smaller figures. When my vision had become almost perfect, I wished it hadn't. So, much, blood. I realised the giant creature was looking at me with a bloodthirsty look in those red eyes. korra... it spoke with a deep gravely voice. korra.. the voice became lighter. korra.. korra..

-------—-----—-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

korra, KORRA! I jolted up from my bed, 'nightmare, it's just a nightmare'. My train of thought was interrupted by a certain dracling brother. "Korra get up!" My brother oh-so-lovingly shouted in my ear.

"Ok, ok" I reassured him. "Victrue, why are you so jumpy all of a sudden?"

"Uhh, have you gotten amnesia or something? Today's the day!" He said sarcastically.

"Wait, what's today again?" He looked at me like I just grew a hoof on my head.

"ARE YOU SERIOUS!? It's when I finally get to use my element, dad said I'm ready to use fire properly like the awesome dragon I was meant to be!" Victrue said as he struck a pose with that final statement.

"Well we-or I, better get ready. Run a long now l'll draggy." I said with attitude, getting of the bed.

"Kay, but you better be ready by the time I fly out." And with that he was gone.

'Well Korra' I thought to myself 'big day ahead of us'

I looked around my room, my bed was shaggy and a bit, shredded 'victrue you so owe me next time I see you' I thought. The rest of my room was pretty normal, crystal mirror in the corner, some green and red crystals scattered around my desk, bookshelf on the wall with books about elements, crystal identification, monsters, all that stuff. I look at myself in the mirror, 'it's still me'. I had a dark gray coat.

My hair was in shambles but it was still purple and blue. My wings were fine, if not a little sore from the previous 'sleeping' position that I was in, that would make anyone's wing hurt a little. My symbol was still there, a shining yellow star with three claw marks in it. I smooth out the knots in my hair and put my golden braids on, a gift from my mother. I looked in the mirror, 'looking good' I thought as I made a sassy pose. I walked to the front of my bedroom door. 'Well, today's a new day' with that I was off.

I walked down the stairs of my house, ( yes I have a two storie hosue, u jelly) and I was greeted by my mom.

"Ahh Korra, I see you are awake, I hope victrue didn't scare you while you two were up there." She said with a gentle smile as she put some cooked meat and fruit and the table.

"I'm fine mom, but I had this dream, well more like nightmare but still, it was scary" I said as I sat down to eat.

"Well dear you can talk to me about it if you would like, if you don't want to it's okay-"

" No mom it's fine" I interrupted. "I'm your daughter  you should know" as I began to talk about the nightmare, mom seemed to get tense but tried to hide it. " -and it was huge and said my name like it knew who I was" then mom sighed and said something strange

"Well Korra I think you should know now. You see-"

"hey mom have you seen-" my brother began until he saw me, then jumped in my face. KORRA! he shouted oh-so-lovingly in my ear, again.

"I hear ya loud and clear victrue" I said in annoyance much to my mothers amusement and brothers, well, lack of knowing personal space.

"Yeah yeah I know you said you have a personal bubble or something, you said that a million times already, but we need to go, RIGHT NOW!" He said as he scurried to the door bouncing impatiently.

"Better hurry Korra, you know how he is" mom said with amusement

"Yeah, wish I could forget though" I said with annoyance. "Come on victrue, race ya to the finish line" I said as I speeded out and into the open with my brother trying to catch up, and failing.

Meanwhile back at the house the mother dragon sighed and covered her face with her wings. "Korra needs to know, not yet but soon," she told herself "Zerroni, you can do this, you can tell her, you have to tell her. She's already 19 you have to tell her soon, before 'they' arrive to do it for you." Zerroni sighed in sorrow. She knew something was coming. But the 'what of it was still unknown to her.

But not for long.

Meanwhile in a crystal castel in ponyville

Twilight made sure she and her friends had everything for their trip. " Okay every pony, everyone got their things for the trip? Twilight asked to make sure.

" yes twilight you already said that like, a hundred times now." Rainbow said in annoyance, with everypony nodding to the statement.

"Sorry, it's just that I want to make sure everypony has their thing." Twilight said " it's just that the map has sended us to a location outside of equestria. There is very little known about this location in my books, so I just want to make sure we're prepared for anything that comes our way. Not to mention the friendship problems that could be there like a town in shambles or-" twilight then procided to make many hypothesis about what was going on, much to the ponys dismay.

"Well, whatever could be, it had to be big if it meant all of us were going to fix it" Fluttershy addressed.

"Don't worry shy, if its big then it will be easier to kick its butt." Rainbow said with pride.

".... That's not what I, never mind".

"Hey twilight, can I come to?" Spike asked using his puppy dragon eyes   ( does that make sense?)

"wait, why all of a sudden do you want to go" rarity asked.

"'Cause it's kinda boring without you guys here, also I want to explore what's outside of equestria to." The dragon answered.

" It's okay in my book, beside who wouldn't want to explore the farthest reaches in equestria!" Twilight said as she pat spike on the head.

"Well y'all, enough chit chat, let's go" applejack said as the main six (as well as spike) were of on there adventure.

Little did they know that there lives as well as many other would change forever.

It was only a matter of time.