This is Hell.

by Suika999

Chapter 1: Disguise

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There was a large explosion as energy exploded into the universe. Two ponies appeared next to each other, both with snow white coats. One was a male, the other female.

  The female had a dark reddish brown mane that glistened with white streaks of light. She opened her eyes slowly. One was glossy bright aqua, while the other seemed to be made of metal. It had an eerie magenta light shining through. She seemed to be a pegasus, though the wings on her back that should of been fluffy white feathers, were instead five metal blades for each wing. Her cutie mark was a watch with a golden chain flowing out.

  The male pony, had a jet black mane. His eyes were the same colour as his sister's good eye. He too, was a pegasus, but not in the same cyborg way as his sister. His cutie mark was a black hole with a large purple tentacle flowing out.

  "So..." muttered the female, "Raven?"

  "Yes Suika?"

  "If this is the new universe, what do we become?"

  "We stay brother and sister, but, we will find two ponies and pretend they are our parents" Raven turned to his sister Suika, knowing that only the two of them actually knew where they were.

  "So... Let's go" there was a bright flash of light as Suika sped up the time of the universe's creation and went forward to let her and Raven find somewhere to act like normal ponies. The God and Goddess couldn't just go around using random magic that could twist the universe's fabric.

  Suika and Raven finally found the right ponies for them. A yellow pegasus named Fluttershy, and her mate Shy. Raven used his magic to give them new memories, memories that him and Suika were their children, then Suika and Raven used their magic to make themselves look two months old, that's two years old in pony years.

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"Oh Honey, Raven and Suika are fighting again" muttered Fluttershy as a vase flew past her head. As soon as Suika and Raven found somewhere to stay in a new universe, they would be enemies again, fighting to the death if it were not that they were immortal.

  "Yes, I know, but they never get hurt so we shouldn't worry" answered Shy. Him and Fluttershy believed the cause of Suika's cyborg parts to be because of a fight with her and Raven, but those were false memories. Suika was just like that, time changed alot, old to new, so it kind of showed she was the Goddess Of Time.

  "GRR RAVEN GET HERE YA POOPFACE!!!" Suika shouted angrily as she chased after Raven, who was running upside down along the roof.

  "NO!!! YOU A BLOODY IDIOT!!!" Raven answered then jumped off the ceiling and landed on Suika, pinning her to the ground.

  "YOU NO FAIR RAVEN!!!" Suika screamed in annoyance and began kicking Raven. Her metal wings rose up suddenly and sliced at Raven.

  "SUIKA NO!!! YOU NO CUT ME!!!" Raven used his magic to heal himself and let go of Suika. The two crazy foals jumped up at each other and started screaming their heads off at each other.

  "Kids! Enough!" Fluttershy walked up to her two psycho foals and began to pull them away from each other.

  "Honey just leave them" Shy came over to Fluttershy and gently nudged her away "They're just kids"

  "I just worry about them, that's all" Fluttershy answered sadly.

  "Okay" Shy walked back inside to make Kyubey On Toast.

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Suika sighed happily as she breathed in the fresh summer air of Ponyville. It was a lovely warm day with a tropical breeze to top it off. There could be nothing better, except fresh blood.

  Suika could only go so far with explaining her joy at the crimson liquid whenever it matted her snowy coat. It was power for Suika. Not power as in a bloody battle equals power, the power Suika felt was like alicorn magic.

  "I bet everypony will be enjoying their day, yet I can't help but want MORE BLOOD!" Suika licked her lips, savouring the thought of the scarlet rivers she would create.

  "Uhh, did you say more blood?" Fluttershy walked over to Suika with a worried look on her face. Suika knew it was the time, the first real blood she'd draw in the new universe.

  "Yes, you see, I'm not your child, those were false memories" Suika let a grin sweep across her face. Her eyes, good and metal, turned black and souless. Suika was eleven, that's twenty two in pony years, and she knew she was quite capable of killing anypony she wanted by now.

  "B-b-but! Y-you're my little foal! I loved you and even managed to trust you!" the heartbroken Fluttershy began to back away from Suika. Soon, everypony in Ponyville would know Suika's name, and that she was unstoppable.

  "I don't care if you love me, I've been through many univeses and I JUST WANT MORE BLOOD" Suika advanced on the terrified Fluttershy, enchanted and dead sharp wings raised.

  "Suika my baby, please don't!" Fluttershy whimpered. All the ponies in the town were staring at Fluttershy and Suika, yet they all had a strange feeling or urge not to call the police or try and stop Suika. Suika wanted no interruptions.

  "What's she gonna do to Fluttershy?" Applebloom looked up to her big sister Applejack.

  "I don't know, but I don't think it's gonna be nice, let's go back to Sweet Apple Acres" answered Applejack. All the ponies in the town were full of fear, though they didn't realize they were facing a Goddess of Time, they probably would of been even more scared knowing that.

  "Ah, I see I got a little crowd" Suika grinned. The sky went pure blood red with jet black flowers patterning it. The worst part was, blood started to rain down from the black flowers, which were flashing pictures of Suika's face.

  "Oh honey, please snap out of this! It's not funny! It's really really not!" Fluttershy cried.

  "I really am not your child, get it? I'm the Goddess Of Time. My brother, Raven, is also of no relation to you. He's the God Of Space, but he refers to himself as the Prince Of Dimensions" Suika's wings pointed forward as Fluttershy's throat. "I am LOVING this weather,  aren't you?" and with that creepy remark from Suika, everything went blood red and Suika was ready to make her first kill...

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