This is Hell.

by Suika999

Rating: mature
Tags: Dark, Sad, Horror
Length: 2132

Suika and Raven have made a new universe. Raven is happy to be here, but his sister Suika has a taste for blood. And Suika will stop at nothing to kill all ponies she doesn't care for, which is most ponies.

Suika knows exactly how to give ponies that don't listen Hell. She just does. She's been here since Time began, and she really doesn't want anypony ruining it. This is a story of her crazy life and how she pretended to be the daughter of Fluttershy and Shy.

Raven and Shy are my friend's characters. Suika, Posey, Starburst, the rest of Suika's siblings, and all the Cattens are my characters.

Cover art is MIINNNNNEEEE. P.S This is a cropped picture. Check my DA, I think it's on there. My DA is Suika999, oh, I think it's on CutemewHeatherclaw, that one was banned, DON'T ASK ME WHY PLEASE!!!

Oh and BTW when I drew the picture for the front, I FORGOT SUIKA'S CYBORG EYE, BUT THAT IS BECAUSE I WANTED TO SHOW OFF THE COLOUR OF HER EYES BUT HER CYBORG EYE IS THE ONE YOU SEE BETTER!

And the pony with Suika is Posey, while dat Rainbow Cat (Catten) is Snowstorm

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2015-11-19 04:20:01 UTC

Chapter 1: Disguise

There was a large explosion as energy exploded into the universe. Two ponies appeared next to each other, both with snow white coats. One was a male, the other female.

  The female had a dark reddish brown mane that glistened with white streaks of light. She opened her eyes slowly. One was glossy bright aqua, while the other seemed to be made of metal. It had an eerie magenta light shining through. She seemed to be a pegasus, though the wings on her back that should of been fluffy white feathers, were instead five metal blades for each wing. Her cutie mark was a watch with a golden chain flowing out.

  The male pony, had a jet black mane. His eyes were the same colour as his sister's good eye. He too, was a pegasus, but not in the same cyborg way as his sister. His cutie mark was a black hole with a large purple tentacle flowing out.

  "So..." muttered the female, "Raven?"

  "Yes Suika?"

  "If this is the new universe, what do we become?"

  "We stay brother and sister, but, we will find two ponies and pretend they are our parents" Raven turned to his sister Suika, knowing that only the two of them actually knew where they were.

  "So... Let's go" there was a bright flash of light as Suika sped up the time of the universe's creation and went forward to let her and Raven find somewhere to act like normal ponies. The God and Goddess couldn't just go around using random magic that could twist the universe's fabric.

  Suika and Raven finally found the right ponies for them. A yellow pegasus named Fluttershy, and her mate Shy. Raven used his magic to give them new memories, memories that him and Suika were their children, then Suika and Raven used their magic to make themselves look two months old, that's two years old in pony years.

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"Oh Honey, Raven and Suika are fighting again" muttered Fluttershy as a vase flew past her head. As soon as Suika and Raven found somewhere to stay in a new universe, they would be enemies again, fighting to the death if it were not that they were immortal.

  "Yes, I know, but they never get hurt so we shouldn't worry" answered Shy. Him and Fluttershy believed the cause of Suika's cyborg parts to be because of a fight with her and Raven, but those were false memories. Suika was just like that, time changed alot, old to new, so it kind of showed she was the Goddess Of Time.

  "GRR RAVEN GET HERE YA POOPFACE!!!" Suika shouted angrily as she chased after Raven, who was running upside down along the roof.

  "NO!!! YOU A BLOODY IDIOT!!!" Raven answered then jumped off the ceiling and landed on Suika, pinning her to the ground.

  "YOU NO FAIR RAVEN!!!" Suika screamed in annoyance and began kicking Raven. Her metal wings rose up suddenly and sliced at Raven.

  "SUIKA NO!!! YOU NO CUT ME!!!" Raven used his magic to heal himself and let go of Suika. The two crazy foals jumped up at each other and started screaming their heads off at each other.

  "Kids! Enough!" Fluttershy walked up to her two psycho foals and began to pull them away from each other.

  "Honey just leave them" Shy came over to Fluttershy and gently nudged her away "They're just kids"

  "I just worry about them, that's all" Fluttershy answered sadly.

  "Okay" Shy walked back inside to make Kyubey On Toast.

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Suika sighed happily as she breathed in the fresh summer air of Ponyville. It was a lovely warm day with a tropical breeze to top it off. There could be nothing better, except fresh blood.

  Suika could only go so far with explaining her joy at the crimson liquid whenever it matted her snowy coat. It was power for Suika. Not power as in a bloody battle equals power, the power Suika felt was like alicorn magic.

  "I bet everypony will be enjoying their day, yet I can't help but want MORE BLOOD!" Suika licked her lips, savouring the thought of the scarlet rivers she would create.

  "Uhh, did you say more blood?" Fluttershy walked over to Suika with a worried look on her face. Suika knew it was the time, the first real blood she'd draw in the new universe.

  "Yes, you see, I'm not your child, those were false memories" Suika let a grin sweep across her face. Her eyes, good and metal, turned black and souless. Suika was eleven, that's twenty two in pony years, and she knew she was quite capable of killing anypony she wanted by now.

  "B-b-but! Y-you're my little foal! I loved you and even managed to trust you!" the heartbroken Fluttershy began to back away from Suika. Soon, everypony in Ponyville would know Suika's name, and that she was unstoppable.

  "I don't care if you love me, I've been through many univeses and I JUST WANT MORE BLOOD" Suika advanced on the terrified Fluttershy, enchanted and dead sharp wings raised.

  "Suika my baby, please don't!" Fluttershy whimpered. All the ponies in the town were staring at Fluttershy and Suika, yet they all had a strange feeling or urge not to call the police or try and stop Suika. Suika wanted no interruptions.

  "What's she gonna do to Fluttershy?" Applebloom looked up to her big sister Applejack.

  "I don't know, but I don't think it's gonna be nice, let's go back to Sweet Apple Acres" answered Applejack. All the ponies in the town were full of fear, though they didn't realize they were facing a Goddess of Time, they probably would of been even more scared knowing that.

  "Ah, I see I got a little crowd" Suika grinned. The sky went pure blood red with jet black flowers patterning it. The worst part was, blood started to rain down from the black flowers, which were flashing pictures of Suika's face.

  "Oh honey, please snap out of this! It's not funny! It's really really not!" Fluttershy cried.

  "I really am not your child, get it? I'm the Goddess Of Time. My brother, Raven, is also of no relation to you. He's the God Of Space, but he refers to himself as the Prince Of Dimensions" Suika's wings pointed forward as Fluttershy's throat. "I am LOVING this weather,  aren't you?" and with that creepy remark from Suika, everything went blood red and Suika was ready to make her first kill...

Chapter 2: First kill and a life for blood

  "I THOUGHT YOU WERE MY DAUGHTER! I TRUSTED YOU! WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS!" Fluttershy screamed in mental agony. The one pony she always wanted, a baby girl to love until the end, was never existent. The pony standing in front of Fluttershy was a sick and crazed freak, who wanted Fluttershy's blood to stain the beautiful white fur that Fluttershy had once adored on her so called daughter.

  "I finally get my first kill, you better make this enjoyable because I'm not in the mood for a pony that won't even give me a little fun!" Suika grinned wider and thunder began to crack.

  "I hate you!" Fluttershy cried. Suika moved closer towards the petrified yellow pegasus and stared into her eyes, burning out Fluttershy's soul slowly.

  "I have been hated so many times, why should I care?" asked Suika. Before waiting for a reply, Suika shoved the top blade on her right wing down Fluttershy's mouth and into the back of her throat.

  "I-I-I u-used t-t-to love y-you!" Fluttershy choked through tears and blood.

  "I love your animals, but not you, I have not a care in the world really" Suika pushed her wing blade further down Fluttershy's throat and into her chest. Fluttershy tried to scream but all that came out was blood as Suika shoved her wing even further. "It's not entertainment enough if you don't feel pain, after all my wings are sharper than anything else that ever existed, exists now,  or ever will, so let me show you what other things I can do" Suika whispered softly.

  "N-n-n-n-n-n-n-n-n-n-no!" Fluttershy whimpered. Suika let the blade on her wing that was slicing Fluttershy slowly start to spin.

  "Don't tell me not to because it won't work" Suika's wing blade began to spin faster and she let out a laugh of pure glee. Everypony around was absolutely sickened, as no pony ever murdered in PonyLand, until today.

  "Miss pwease don't hurt Fwuttashy! She a weally nice pony!" a small and adorable young filly ran up to Suika.

  "Well I'm not a really nice pony, am I? So you can LEAVE" answered Suika. The small filly whimpered, and her mother tried to call her back, but Fluttershy was in pain and the filly wanted to help her.

  "No! You a bad pony and you should be wocked in pwison!" the filly replied with the most adorable voice anypony had ever heard.

  "Oh, really? I do WHATEVER I want" Suika raised her left wing. There was a scream from the filly's mother as the top blade from the wing shot out and went through the filly's head.

  "Y-you... YOU KILLED HER!!!" The mother screamed.

  "Yeah, I know, isn't that obvious?" the blade that had killed the filly flew back to Suika's wing with magic and quickly reattached.

  "Help..." Fluttershy moaned in pain.

  "Shut it" Suika sent her wing further down into Fluttershy's tummy then finally slid it out effortlessly. Blood was flowing out of Fluttershy's mouth and she fell to the ground in pain. Suika meanwhile, was licking the blood from her wings and fur. It was sweet in Suika's mind.

  "SOMEPONY HELP DAT PONY!!!" a random unicorn shouted. But nopony was brave enough to have a stand off with Suika. Fluttershy soon stopped breathing and the red haze around the air cleared. The sky went blue and slightly cloudy again, while the blood rain stopped and the black flowers cleared. The only sign Suika had been there, was Fluttershy's dead body lying in the middle of the street...

Everypony's heart was filled with pain. It had been two months since Suika Sora, Goddess of Time, had brutally murdered Fluttershy. Everything could of been avoided, if Fluttershy noticed the danger she could let Suika live with the Cattens. Cattens were like feral cats, until they sprouted wings and colours of ponies they'd killed. They were of course, dangerous to any normal pony, but Suika would not of given one single damn. She would absolutely LOVE living with Cattens. Her bloodlust would be furfilled that way.

  But Fluttershy had not known Suika was not her daughter, but a monster with a taste for other pony's blood. She had trusted her, and thought she was an innocent, but kind of rough, young mare.

  "I should of told her, that Suika wasn't that nice..." Raven muttered to his father Shy.

  "Why didn't you two tell us that you weren't our kids!?" answered Shy angrily.

  "Because... Suika will live anywhere she pleases, while I have to find somewhere nice if I want to maintain the universe, Suika controls Time but uses it for bad purposes..." answered Raven.

  "IF YOU HAD TOLD ME BEFORE, THEN FLUTTERSHY WOULDN'T BE DEAD RIGHT NOW!" Shy shouted angrily.

  "Well..." answered Raven "I can't stop her or we all would never of existed"

  "..." Shy went quiet sadly. Fluttershy, his wife, was now dead and the pony he had thought to be his daughter was running loose doing whatever she wanted.

  "Hello? I'm sorry to interrupt you two, it's just that I, well, I kinda liked Fluttershy too..." Raven and Shy jumped in their seats as they saw Discord walk into the cottage.

  "Oh... Hi Discord. .." Raven muttered as Discord fabricated a seat using his magic.

  "I am really terribly sorry, it's just I miss Fluttershy a lot" Discord stared sadly at Shy and Raven.

  "We all miss her Discord" answered Shy, "Fluttershy was a truly wonderful pony"

  "I don't know what the hell drives Suika to do what she does..." muttered Raven. But I bet it's not as hell scary as her he thought to himself.

  "I just-" Discord wiped a tear from his cheek "I really liked that mare, you know? I know that we're different species and all but I really do love Fluttershy"

  "I know, I know" answered Shy. Him and Discord had both loved Fluttershy a lot, and were very sad to know she was dead.

          "Well the funeral is soon, so, I guess we should, go to it then" Discord sniffed sadly. Him and Shy left the peaceful cottage silently, while Raven just sat inside, near the doorway. Why was his sister so bloodthirsty...