the first human in equestria

by my little smokey64

Rating: everyone
Tags: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Doctor Whooves, Sad, Princess Luna, Tragedy, Queen Chrysalis, Adventure, Princess Celestia, Human, Main 6
Length: 2625

the first human teleported in the world of equestria and no one liked him just like in the old world

the first human in equestria (Part 2 is gonna be much better then part 1) and actually you need to read part 2 first cause i don't want that people are reading part 1 anymore cause i know it's gonna be disliked.

Published 2012-06-04 14:44:03 UTC
Last updated 2012-06-09 15:39:32 UTC

the first human in equestria part 1

the first human teleported in the world of equestria and no one liked him just like in the old world And now he teleported in the royal canterlot castle in princess celestia's room. Princess celestia shocked and watched at me and asked who and what are you? i said i was a human she didn't know what it was she looked at me and said you're bleeding the princess called the main 6 when twilight read the letter she picked up all pony and went to canterlot. and when they arrived at princess celestia's room. And when everypony looked at the human and the princess said: twilight... Do you know what he is?

twilight said:.... yes i think it is a human everypony looked at twilight. How did you know? everypony asked well a while ago i readed a book about humans the book said humans are evil and can do the most horrible things the human said: it's true i'm human but it's not true that i'm evil believe me and i've got a name called Lars. everypony looked at Lars then the princess said you go to the hospital then i will think about what i'm gonna do with you ok? Lars said it was ok and he went to the hospital.

then doctor whooves appeared and Doctor whooves said: i will help you if you don't try to kill me or something ok!? Lars said why i'm not an evil person or something why i would kill you?. well i heard rumors about you so thats why i'm scared. Lars said yeah but don't be scared i'm not EVIL ALRIGHT! doctor whooves helped the human. When Lars was sleeping in bed then someone at night knocked on the door. the human said MAN i'm sleeping! Lars came out of bed and opened the door it was princess Luna.

Lars said: who are you? and the princess said: i'm princess Luna the princess of the night! (with the royal canterlot voice)
Lars shocked and said: umm yeah.. more quiet please.. the princess said: oh yeah .. um sorry about that but umm i've got a message for you princess celestia said that i most say you can stay in ponyville but don't do anything stupid ok? Lars said it was ok. 2 days later doctor whooves said he can go and when Lars was outside he was really very hungry ans so he was going to the market and wanted some apples but he doesn't have got any money. and so he was going to the sweet apple acres he sawed applejack and asked for some apples but applejack refused to give him some apples cause applejack didn't like Lars and Lars said: AJ why you don't give me some apples i need to eat something but still.. AJ refused.

so Lars went travelling to pinkie pie and so when he was in the house pinkie pie wasn't happy cause Lars was in the store and Lars asked for some cupcakes but then pinkie pie refused to give him some pie so the human went go outside and he went to twilight and spike and asked for some ice-cream but he didn't get any ice-cream cause twilight didn't want to give him any ice-cream and so he went go outside again and went to rarity and then lars asked umm hello rarity ? rarity shocked and said go away you're just like DIRT Lars said: well umm yeah.......can i have some food please? rarity said no cause she didn't like Lars and then rarity said: GO AWAY dirt!

NOW Lars was sad and went to rainbowdash the one who's chilling on and in the clouds and Lars said HEY RAINBOW DO YOU HAVE ANY FOOD I'M REALLY VERY HUNGRY rainbowdash said: nope go somewhere else you stupid human thing. Lars was now really very sad but then he was thinking and well of course fluttershy has some food ! he went to fluttershy

and Lars knocked on the door fluttershy opened the door and shocked and was scared and closed the door quickly. then Lars was angry and went to the market again and stealed some apples. later at night he slept at the dirty ground and later at morning when every pony already woked up and then some pony looked at him and said hahahah dirty stupid human HAHA Lars standed up and was really very angry and went to canterlot to the princess. and then lars said i'm not happy everyone hates me in ponyville. the princess said well if you're not happy enough then you must go to the everfree forest and it's an order right now! you can't go back anymore!

Lars said ok he went to go to ponyville and was packing up he's stuff and then the main 6 are right of front of him and looked a tLars and twilight said why are you packing up you're stuff? Lars said cause i'm moving then fluttershy said well where you're going then ?

Lars said .... to the everfree forest the main 6 said: THE EVERFREE FOREST!!!!????
Lars said: eeeeyup and why is that so shocking? applejack said everfree forest is very big and lots of monsters and very dangerous.Lars said so what? i can't get a life here well... actually i can't get a life anywhere so i don't have a choice! the main 6 said:well fine just go then we are just happy you're going there we don't care!. and then Lars said man i'm the first human in equestria and i don't like it to be here when i thought it will be cool and much better when i was living in the old world.
and still i don't know why they are so rude to me i'm just a nice guy right? *sighs*

well it will be better to hide myself in the everfree forest so no one can see me again cause maybe is that what they want right ?

and so the human went to go to the everfree forest. (TO BE CONTINUED)

the first human in equestria part 2

So when Lars was travelling to the everfree forest he was thinking about ponyville, and when he sawed a broken tree he set on it. "well i think they having a party for that i'm going to the everfree forest'' Lars said with a sad face.
he stand up and grabbed and opened he's bag and in the bag was a map and Lars grabbed the map and looked at it. ''well first i need to go trough the mountains first'' lars said like he didn't want to do it. so when Lars went travelling and it was getting dark ''gosh i will make or search for a shelter and not only that of course i'm really very hunger too'' Lars said. Lars looked in his bag for some food he had some apples from the sweet apple acres. but first he looked for a good shelter.

(Back in ponyville)

''wow today it's a beautiful night'' twilight said when she was looking outside. ''well i think we need some sleep right Spike?,SPIKE? oh you're sleeping already'' twilight said with a smile. and just a second later someone knocked on the door.
twilight opened the door and ''twi we all need to talk'' applejack said and twilight looked at applejack and applejack just did a step for going left and twilight her other friends and walked too them. ''well tell me about what you wanna talk about'' twilight said with a happy looking face.

''well umm, it's just we have a bad feeling about something'' fluttershy said with a quietly little voice ''about what?'' twilight asked.
''about the human,Lars'' everyone said, ''oh yeah umm, why actually? twilight asked.''it's just everyone was very rude to him and what he just wanted is living in ponyville and he even thought that living in ponyville is better then just living in the old world '' pinkie pie said with a sad looking face too twilight.

''and so we wanted too ask you twilight for coming with us for searching Lars and say sorry and that he can stay in ponyville'' rainbowdash said like she never was so sorry about someone.

''well i think you pony's are right i feel sorry too right now and we will search for him and bring him back!" twilight said while she was walking around the main 6. ''everyone let's go!!!!'' twilight said while the others where behind twilight.

(Back at the place where lars is)

When lars was looking for a shelter it was raining and he founded a cave and the cave glowed blue Lars walked in the cave and looked behind him he thought he heard something ''huh? i think hear something some noises'' lars said while he was a little bit scared and so Lars closed he's eyes ''it's just nothing'' he said and walked forward and while he walked just for 20 seconds he sawed thousands or maybe millions of gems '' it's like i'm in heaven if i take all of the gems and returning to earth i will become rich''Lars said with a Laugh. ''well i think i'm going to sleep next to the gems'' lars said while he was going to sleep.

(While Lars woke up in the shining morning)

''aah goodmorning gems he said and goodmor....oh. oh..''Lars said with a quitely voice. there was something sleeping on the gems and it was a dragon and with a bad luck the dragon woke up too and the dragon sawed Lars the dragon looked angry at Lars.''what are you doing in my cave!?!?'' the dragon asked angry. '' yeah... umm... uh.. i.. just needed to f-ff-find a-a s-shelter c-cause i-i needed to s-sleep somehere c-cause i-it was s-storming.Lars said with a scared and shocked face.

''WELL I DON'T CARE I WILL CRUSH YOU'' the dragon said exploded Lars stand up and went running so fast as he could and the dragon was going after Lars and he was lucky that it was a dragon with a broken wing so the dragon runned after him and while running tthe dragon spitted fire and hitted Lars he's bag ''NO MY BAG!!!'' Lars Shouted and turned around and picked up he's knife and attacked the dragon he spitted fire again but Lars hitted a rock and fall down to the ground and Lars was trowhing he's knife and hitted the dragon the dragonfall on the ground and it was dead '' i'm sorry dragon i didn't wanted to do this but i had no choice'' Lars said and walked away.

Back to the main 6

''well lets have a break i'm hunger'' rarity said while she was tired. ''ok let's have a picknick here'' applejack said. and so the main 6 had a picknick and fun whe they where full they travelled again. ''we are on the mountain'' twilight said with a happy face cause she know Lars is there. the main 6 shouted ''Lars where are you!'' thery heard nothing and the main 6 looked sad and while walking farther walking they sawed the dead dragon that Lars killed. they all standed still. rainbowdash touched the dragon. ''o my gosh it's dead'' rainbowdash said. ''well look a knife in the dragon should Lars have this done?'' Pinkie pie said.''let me do a spell then i can look back what happened'' twilight walked to the dragon and and twilight's horn was shining and she sawed what happened when she sawed all of it looked at her friends ''yes pinkie pie you're right, Lars
did it but he did it for a reason'' twilight said. ''oh yeah why he did it then what reeason??'' Pinkie Pie said with a big smile.

''well the dragon was going after Lars and the dragon wanted to kill lars cause lars was sleeping in the dragon cave and i heard he said he was sorry and had no choiche'' twilight said ''ok'' pinkie pie said.

so when they walked forward they sawed smoke was coming from the forest and the main 6 are running to it
Lars set on a broken tree again and woked up ''wow oops i passed the night and morning it's already 1 o' clock'' Lars said he standed up but he heard he's name and a few seconds later the pony's showed up and Lars shocked and grabbed he's knife ''Why you 6 are here'' Lars said angry

'' well um .. we all want to say that we are all very very sorry about what happened''

''oh and now you want so say sorry huh!!'' Lars said

''yeah and i was wrong about that humans are evil i discovered that are good humans too just like you and i want too say we are all very sorry'' Twilight said

''ok i accept you're apology to you all'' Lars said with a very happy face.

''come with us we have alot to talk about in ponyville'' pinkie pie said

Lars said it was ok and returned to ponyville with the main 6 they laughed alot had alot of fun and when they arrived at ponyville everyone wanted to apology Lars, and Lars accepted all excuses they had. and even princess celestia and princess Luna anted to apology Lars accepted that too and so later at night pinkie pie made a party at the canterlot castle
while in train they talked about alot of things and when the main 6 and lars arrived at canterlot castle they had a great party but later princess celestia wanted to do a speech ''Dear Pony's from canterlot and ponyville i want to say something''princess celestia said happy but when everypoy heard something they all said CELESTIA BEHIND YOU! celetia turned around and was hit by a evil someone called Queen Chrysalis and celestia fall on the ground and can't move.

''dear pony's from canterlot and ponyville you're all doomed!'' queen chrysalis said with an evil laugh

Lars showed up and said ''HEY YOU SO CALLED QUEEN CHRYSALIS WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS'' queen chrysalis laughed again ''hahah i'm here for you Lars you know why humans should't be here and i must kill you right now so be prepared for a battle''chrysalis said ''well ok i'm already prepared Lars said'' he grabbed up he's knife and it was glowing twilight showed up ''LARS! look you are getting ring he looked at his ring finger ''you have the element of human thats what i call it'' it's has the same power as friendship use it to the queen lars attacked the queen with his power and the queen was hit ''noooooooooooooooooooooo'' the queen screamed and so the queen was defeated but the the queen's horn was going through Lars belly and fall at the ground he was bleeding alot and when princess celestia standed up she walked to lars and the main 6 walked to Lars ''i'm not gonna make this i-i'm dieing'' Lars said with a little voice ''no you're not'' the main 6 said ''no don't take me to hospital i'm dead and before i'm dead i want to say i learned something about friendship and i think i made history but yeah and the most important thing is that i'm happy and you're all my very best friends!'' Lars closed his eyes and died everypony where crying and princess celestia and Luna too a day later they where bury Lars and made a statue of him ''rest in peace''the main 6 said, and Lars.... made history in equestria forever
cause he was the first human in equestria.

The End