Tumbler, a Pegasus, lives his daily life alone. He than meets Azure, a unicorn pony that catches his attention immediately. The two will be put through some tough challenges together and this story will be added onto as I get more time on my hands. This is an OC story made by me, and I just want to see if people like this before adding onto it. And there will be a few tragic and maybe sad moments happening in it, I'll figure it out as I go
Im getting into short 'chapters' and I might switch viewpoints, I'm just seeing how good it would be if I did something like that (give me your opinion for either long chapters with one viewpoint or short chapters switching viewpoints frequently)
EDIT: I realized that It just seems bad and unsuitable for a story like this to have such short chapters and such. Enjoy it and read, and sorry for the inconvenience if there is any.
EDIT(again): I'm now done with this story, some constructive criticism would be nice, and as always, enjoy.