Raging Darkness

by OmbreEtNuit

Rating: teen
Tags: Drama, Adventure
Length: 1042

Princess Luna now rules Equestria, Celestia dead. But what happens when she preforms a spell over 100 millenias old?

When Celestia dies Luna becomes the ruler of Equestria, and finds a book with spell made over 100 Mellinias old? Then things get odd. Can it rise ponies from the dead, and completely separate the bitter parts of ponies into a whole new one?

I'm horribly bad at ideas and I see BE (Before Equestria) lasting until 32 BE. Wow Ancient is old

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2015-11-19 23:59:28 UTC

Chapter 2

Ancient Raindrop had her things in a box, clothes, shoes, hats, tools, pictures. She was on the train, the alicorn gave her a note in this weird kind of writing... So... Confusing... She said to find a pony to show me the schoolhouse in late morning or early night, and to give the teacher this letter. The weird wagon stopped, and I grabbed the box's holding rope in my mouth, exiting into a weird building, and coming out, I looked up, the sun still rising. I could get there soon. I ran off, trying to find a pony that looked helpful. Soon she found a filly, yellow skin with a red mane and tail. She trotted up to the filly.

"Hello dear filly, where is the house of school?" Ancient Raindrop asked. The filly looked at Ancient Raindrop, confused. "Did I say it wrong? Wait how about this.... Hello dear filly, where is the house school?" Raindrop said, trying to fix herself, the filly seemed up understand more.

"Oh! Ye looking for the schoolhouse! It's right ova 'ere!" The filly said, running to a building, Raindrop running after her, the filly then stopped in front of a building with a flag infant a fence with weird things inside the fence.

"Thank you dear filly." Raindrop said, opening the door, where a mare was.

"Oh hello, who are you?" the mare asked, Raindrop putting down her box and opening it, fishing through it then grabbing the note, putting it on her table, and then Raindrop closed the box, grabbing it, and exiting.

Ancient Raindrop followed fillies and colts into the school, watching them sit down, as the mare said something.

"As you can see, we have a new student, Ancient Raindrop! Now, tell us about yourself." Ancient Raindrop tried talking but her lips wouldn't move.

"If your uncomfortable talking, then write something." The mare said, Ancient Raindrop grabbing one of the weird quills, and wrote some stuff. When she was done she put the quill down. She looked at the class, who looked confused.

"What does it say?"

"What does it mean?"

"Is she insane?"

Whispers came around the room, fillies and colts looking at Raindrop then her writing. Soon a hoof came up.

"What does it say? I can't understand." The filly asked.

"Ask Ancient Raindrop, not me." The teacher replied.

"Can't YOU understand? This is no funny joke, I wrote in the basic of writing!" Raindrop said. The filly seemed pleased.

"Also, Ancient Raindrop, since you missed Family Appreciation day 2 days ago, tomorrow bring a family member to tell some stuff about where they work, or their fillyhood." The teacher said. "Now, pick a seat."

Ancient Raindrop quickly went into one of the seats, has writing changed that much during her.. Nap?

Chapter 1

Luna stumbled apon an old book, flipping through a page, she found a spell. Quietly saying the words while putting the desired amount of magic into her horn, a white circle covered Canterlot. 5 minutes later, Luna felt like part of her was missing, something she never wanted to be free.

---------------------------------------1 Week Later------------------------------------

A light blue pegasus filly with a light green mane sat down she was covered in dirt and mud. She looked around. "Why is Canterlot so different?" She asked quietly, her voice weak and scratchy from her long slumber. She walked around. She saw a castle, opening the doors and entering. As she walked she expected to heard her hooves clomp against stone, but instead it was another material, marble, maybe? She kept walking, staring at the floor.

"Clip clap clip clap." she listened to the sound of her hooves. She bumped into a pony, looking up.

"Oh! I'm sorry much." The filly said.

"Filly, who are thee and what are thee doing my castle?" The pony asked, an Alicorn.

"I'm Ancient Raindrop. I woke up not long ago. What year is it?"  The filly replied.

"My bones on sore, like I slept for 7 millenias!" Ancient Raindrop complained.

"Before I give thee anymore info, who are your parents?" The alicorn asked.

"Stone Path and Ancient Roses" Ancient Raindrop replied.

"I'll look through every file I can, to help you..." The alicorn said. "Stay here." Then the alicorn walked off.

Hours later the alicorn returned, dropping a piece of paper. "Read thou file, it is of old words." The alicorn said, Raindrop read unser what had my picture.

"Ancient Raindrop. Born: 28 BE (Before Equestria) joined Equestria 1 AE (After Equestria). Born: 14 May, BE" she read.

"Thou is ancient. Thou should be dead!" The alicorn said.

"What year is it?" Ancient Raindrop asked.

"7503 AE. Thou lived longer than I and Celestia."  The alicorn replied. "Thou will be sent to village to live. Thou needs to learn fast." The alicorn said. "Follow me." Raindrop then followed.

UPDATE CHAPTER +SOME OF CHAP 3

I'm forcing myself to write when I have no ideas in my head. So I'm gonna flood you right now okay? So here is what I have for chapt 3:

Ancient Raindrop sat in a puddle, the water that should of been cold was warm against her ancient body, watching as the pink filly and a gray filly snickered. The duo approached Raindrop. "So, Ancient Raindrop, how is that puddle? You like, shouldn't be sitting in it, you're a pig!" The leader, the pink filly said. "Yeah, like, what a loser." The gray one added. "This puddle is quite warm actually." Raindrop said. "Put a hoof in." The duo were shocked to such friendliness, and both dipped in a hoof. "Yeah, it's not that cold...." The gray one said. "See you later!" The pink filly and gray one said, trotting off. The same yellow filly that showed her the house of school trotted to Raindrop." Did you really just--" She asked. "I made them nice, I think?" Raindrop said.

So yeah I'm gonna throw a few plot ideas at you guys so you can gimme ideas if i don't update for awhile.

Ancient Raindrop befriending DT and SS

Raindrop crying during Family Appreciation Day because her family is dead

Raindrop hides in Sweet Apple Acres somehow for a month without being noticed

Raindrop becomes a ninja-pony