
Life Is like a Cookie Jar
A short story in which a filly's life changes in the course of a single week.
Things can change fast. One day, the young filly Raindrop Day has a normal happy life. The next, she worries about her father while deciding to break some rules in order to help a colt struggling with finding out what he's destined for. Over the course of a single week her life changes forever.
This short story is me experimenting in writing a story made specifically to evoke sadness in the reader. I wanted to write it in order to possibly grow as a writer. If you find faults in it, then please say so. I expect there to be many flaws, as I haven't written many works. If you think it's good, then great! If you think it's bad, then good! If you think it's bad and say why, then fantastic! Constructive criticism rules!

30054 words: Estimated about 3 hours to read